It's a hell game, who can still be a human being?

Chapter 64 Brother, You Smell So Good

Chapter 64 Brother, You Smell So Good
"How do you fish? Take off your pants and fish?"

Liu Zhengxu said with his eyes fixed.

"Vulgar."

The cattle and horses looked at him with contempt.

"You have so many tentacles, aren't they just bait and fishing line?"

"I doubt it will bite it off by the roots."

He said as he looked at the megamouth whale with its mouth full of fangs.

"Just bite it off. You can still grow back anyway."

Cows and horses don’t care.

“How can I catch fish if the line is broken?”

"That's why I gave you the knife. Napoleon didn't say he wanted him alive. You can just stab him to death."

Niuma said.

"Oh, that's fine."

Liu Zheng nodded.

It is much easier to catch a dead one than a living one.

"Don't make it too ugly, or Napoleon won't accept it."

Niuma reminded.

"understood."

He complied.

"By the way, where is the sewer?"

Liu Zheng took out the map and asked.

"They said it was in the sewer, so it must be everywhere."

The cattle and horses looked at him strangely.

How come this kid is sometimes cunning and sometimes stupid?

"It's because your world is a mess."

Liu Zheng was unhappy, but he didn't say it out loud.

"I'm asking if there is a fixed entrance?"

"No, any manhole cover or ditch can lead to the sewer. But if you must say, I recommend you either go down through the restaurant entrance or the entrance on the tree street."

Niuma replied.

"why?"

"Giant whales like nutrient-rich water. The sewers under the restaurant have accumulated the essence for so many years, which is the best for their growth. If you can catch a gold crown-class giant whale, Napoleon might just give you his knife."

Niuma said.

"Then what are the benefits of going down from the entrance on the street of Delego?"

"It can protect you. Do you think it can accumulate so much wealth just by digging in the soil?"

"But the sewers below it are probably not well maintained, and there may not be any megamouth whales in there."

Niuma said.

"Then I'll try at Dellego's place first."

Liu Zheng made a decision quickly.

If you can’t catch it, go to the one below the restaurant.

"As you like. And this one, too, was given to me by Napoleon."

Niuma gave him a bag of freeze-dried stuff.

"Name: Specially made powerful attractant"

"Type: Props"

“Quality: Excellent”

"Effect: After consumption, the player will emit pheromones that are effective against Megalodon and other creatures of the same species."

"Note: Bro, you smell so good."

“Can I take the copy out: No”

"Wait, what the hell is the same species?"

Liu Zheng discovered the blind spot.

"Biological classification: kingdom, phylum, class, order, family, genus, and species. Didn't you miss the class?"

Niuma looked down at him like a schoolboy.

"I know about biological classification. I mean, will this attractant attract anything other than giant whales?"

"Of course. Attractants are not that precise. It's good enough that they can be limited to the same genus as the Megalodon."

Niuma said.

"What rank does the Megamouth whale have among its peers?"

Liu Zheng asked somewhat nervously.

"As for the quality of the meat, it's of course top-tier. I once got some offal, and it was so tender when I used it for hot pot."

Niu Ma smacked his lips as he spoke.

"Where's the combat power?"

"As for combat effectiveness, the juveniles of other species would just use their tails to hit the adult Megalodon whales for fun."

Niuma shrugged.

"Haha, then I think this should be renamed as a powerful suicide agent."

Liu Zheng complained.

"Anyway, the things are given to you, you can use them if you want."

"It's not bad to catch other fish of the same genus, Napoleon will take them all. If you don't want money, you can trade with him. If nothing else, his collection of wine will be enough to keep you entertained."

Niuma said.

"talk later."

He was noncommittal.

At least he had to confirm the strength of the giant mouth whale first.

If it's hard to catch a bigmouth whale, then you don't want to catch its relatives.

Liu Zheng doesn't want to use himself as a bait.

With the plan in place, now we face a recurring problem: time.

Judging from his limited fishing experience, the delivery time would definitely not be enough.

It seems that I can only seek help off the field.

Two strings of numbers flashed through Liu Zheng's mind.

After some thought, he made a decision.

"Senior, what do you want to talk to me about?"

When the phone was connected, the novelist's voice was still full of energy.

"How's your novel going these days?"

he asked.

"The plot is fine, but the editor said the writing is not good. I asked him what was wrong with it, but he never got back to me."

When it comes to novels, novelists immediately become distressed.

"Send it to me."

"Wouldn't that be too much trouble, Senior?"

The novelist felt a little embarrassed.

"It's okay. I just happen to have something to ask you."

"Well, I'll send it to Senior now."

Hearing his frank words, the novelist also became straightforward.

Soon, she sent several MMS messages.

The photo isn't very good, but the words are still recognizable.

It only took Liu Zheng a few minutes to finish reading her manuscript.

“The pace is too slow.”

As soon as he entered his professional field, Liu Zheng turned on the tyrant mode.

"Look at the first chapter. Why did you spend three whole paragraphs describing the names and appearances of other classmates? Are there any plots about them later?"

"No, no."

The novelist stammered.

"Why would you write them if you weren't here? Every inch of space in the first chapter is so precious, and you're going to waste it like this?"

Liu Zheng said viciously.

“I wanted to add a little more sense of involvement.”

The novelist explained.

"How can readers feel involved when you write about supporting characters? It will only confuse their perspective."

"Okay, okay."

Even through the phone, Liu Zheng seemed to be able to see her lowering her head.

"Also, why do you use long sentences? There is no sentence that is less than forty words."

He pointed out another problem.

"I don't feel like this. I can't finish what I want to say."

The novelist thought for a moment and replied.

"You have finished speaking, but the readers don't want to hear it. Revise it. No more than twenty words in a sentence. Delete all the meaningless rhetoric."

"You are a writer of urban themes, why do you use eyebrows that seem to be frowned but not frowned, and eyes that seem to be happy but not happy? Are you afraid that readers will not be out of the story?"

Liu Zheng said sternly.

"I used to write like this when I was writing ancient Chinese, and readers quite liked it."

The novelist whispered.

“Do you wear a cheongsam when you go swimming?”

he asked.

"No, I don't wear it."

The novelist understood what he meant and lowered his voice.

"The choice of words and sentences must be consistent with the subject matter, and even in line with the reading habits of readers of that subject matter. Otherwise, it's like selling braised pork in Ding Zhen Temple. No matter how delicious it is, no one will buy it."

Liu Zheng said earnestly.

"I understand, senior."

The novelist responded loudly.

"I'll revise it for you, and you can revise it again and send it to me."

He said.

"Yeah. Thank you, senior."

The novelist added a little more.

After hanging up the phone, Liu Zheng spent ten minutes writing an introduction and sent it to her via text message.

Five minutes later, the novelist sent a text message back.

"!!!"

He smiled.

Although I no longer write online articles, it is still easy to come up with a standard beginning.