Wenhao: This child has been smart since he was young
Chapter 23 Historical High Score
Chapter 23 Historical High Score
"A junior high school student... This student is not only good at Chinese, but also good at history." President Jian said, and the third paragraph of the article used many historical allusions.
[Long hair flying, green bull treading again, deep and deep, that is "Laozi";
Fishing in the Pu River for a long time, the vast and misty river, the allegory within allegory, that is Zhuangzi;
The one who travels around the world, enlightens people, and becomes broad-minded again and again, is Confucius;
The eloquent work of Mencius has enlightened the world for generations and has been immortal for generations.
It is an allusion. While fishing in the Pu River, Zhuangzi talked with two doctors of the King of Chu, who wanted to invite Zhuangzi to be born.
"If it were a speech, this manuscript would be very powerful." President Jian himself does not give many speeches, but he knows that adding parallel sentences to a speech will increase its momentum.
"Sichuan and Chongqing competition area? There are so many talented people in Sichuan and Chongqing. No wonder there are five teachers like Ba Jin, Ai Wu, Sha Ting, Zhang Xiushu and Ma Shi Tu." President Jian sighed.
The Five Old Men of Shu are well-known in the literary world. In addition, because the number of participants from the three southwestern provinces and one city in the Ye Cup was small, the preliminary selection and awards were combined into two divisions, Sichuan and Chongqing and Yunnan and Guizhou.
"From Han fu, from Tang poetry, from Song ci, from Yuan people's singing, crying and whistling, and moving dramas - it seems that this child must have solid grades in Chinese. Look at the knowledge points he memorized: Tang poetry, Song poetry, Yuan opera, and Ming and Qing novels. Oh, right, why were Ming and Qing novels changed to Han fu?" President Jian was a little confused, and at the same time told himself to stop praising and to do his job as a judge.
When it comes to ratings, President Jian was silent for a long time.
The Leaf Cup scoring system consists of two categories: basic items and bonus items. The basic items include the evaluation of content, structure and language, totaling 60 points, and the bonus items have seven categories totaling 40 points.
"98 points, excluding the item of novel idea, the rest can get full marks..." This article has a typical speech structure, and can even be said to be a model speech. It does not break away from the original structure, so naturally it will not get any points for the item of novel idea.
When President Jian was about to give the scores, he realized that the Leaf Cup had been held for nine years since 96, and the highest score was points.
"Isn't the highest score in history too ostentatious?" President Jian decided to lower the score and give it 97 points.
Because the article is so good, President Jian is very confident that it is not a fraud that was made by the instructor with major revisions. To put it bluntly, if a Chinese teacher has this writing ability, he will be able to gain a foothold in the literary world if he works harder.
President Jian started to prepare to write a review, and then write a review...
"I think the name Gu Lu sounds familiar. There seems to be a Gu Lu in Youth Literature and Art as well." President Jian checked his mailbox. Just the day before yesterday, his youth magazine sent him an article titled "Smash the Piglets," hoping that he, as the president, would write a preface.
Oh, in "Youth Literature and Art", the "Preface" is called "Reading Map of This Issue", and each issue will recommend the most exciting manuscripts.
"What's the meaning of the name Gu Lu? Kun of Yu Wei, descendant of Gu Lu?" President Jian had never thought that it was the same person. It was still unknown whether Gu Lu, who first submitted a manuscript to "Youth Literature and Art", was his real name or a pen name.
Even though there are many submissions from junior and senior high school students in Youth Literature and Art, President Jian has also read Smash the Piglets. The writing is sophisticated and does not include the showy descriptions of scenery that are typical of junior and senior high school students. It is definitely not written by a young person.
Putting these things behind him, President Jian wrote the comments carefully and gave the highest score in history. This must require cross-evaluation from other judges, and he had to write down the reasons for his score.
[Ju Chang: I submitted a few more manuscripts. This time I tried a story-oriented approach, so I changed the writing style. It should be more suitable for "Story Club".
Muziqi: Just pay a little attention, there is no need to change the way of writing!
Ju Chang: It’s okay. I read “The Grass in the Firefly Window” these days and learned a little bit about ghosts. I’ll give it a try. I’ll send it to you after I finish writing all the manuscripts. ]
Seeing this, Lao Li broke out in a cold sweat. A person must have his own "formula" for writing, and changing it easily will lead to failure.
In other words, some writers with good writing skills can change their writing style, but this makes it difficult to accurately express what they want to express. Lao Li is worried that a rising talented writer will be ruined because of one of his words.
Although "Strange Grass in the Firefly Window" may not be well-known, Lao Li, as a proofreader of a publishing house, knows that it is one of the four great ghost books along with "Liao Zhai", "Zi Bu Yu" and "Yuewei Caotang Notes". Before Lao Li could say anything, QQ was offline, so he reluctantly let go of the keyboard.
Monday is a day that many students dislike, not only because it is the first day after the weekend, but also because there is a flag-raising ceremony and the whole school has to go to the playground.
Class 5 lined up neatly, but the students were talking in small talk. Teacher Li did not stop them as long as they did not go too far.
After the flag-raising ceremony, a student from Class 2011 came on stage to receive the award. He won the third prize in the Fog City Division in the 2012- National Junior High School Mathematics Competition and has been admitted to Fog City Bachuan Middle School.
The elementary mathematics competition is slightly lower than the Mathematical Olympiad, but the results are also very gratifying. Bachuan Middle School is also a school that can barely rank in the top ten in Wudu.
Principal Liu also came on stage. In front of the whole school, the current principal awarded 1000 yuan scholarships, followed by the award-winning students giving speeches.
Those who are good at math are all great, this is what Gu Lu himself thinks. The world is full of PUA, but math is the only thing that never comes, because if you don’t know it, you just don’t know it.
The queue was arranged according to height. At the beginning of the first grade, most girls were taller than boys because they developed earlier. But in the third grade, many boys surpassed them. This did not include Gu Lu, who was malnourished, so he stood at the front.
"What are you mumbling about?" Tang Jingjing asked in a low voice.
There is a fat kid in every class, a person who likes gossip, and Tang Jingjing is one of them, nicknamed Donald Duck.
"I'm thinking that if one day I can also go on stage and give a speech, it would be quite cool." The pretentious gene in Gu Lu's body was activated.
"This is easy. It can be solved with just one dollar." Tang Jingjing said in a low voice.
So the master is right next to me? Gu Lu motioned for Tang Jingjing to continue.
"If you buy two cigarettes from the store near the entrance and get caught smoking in the toilet, you can get a school-level warning in front of the whole school at the flag-raising ceremony on Monday," said Tang Jingjing.
"Are you really a genius?" Gu Lu sighed.
Cigarettes are sold secretly at the school gate just to make money from students. Now the price of a pack at Chaotianmen is 5 yuan, and you can buy three cigarettes for one yuan (a pack of 20 cigarettes).
It is not known whether middle school students smoke to rebel against authority or simply to look cool. Gu Lu knew from the original owner's memory that Zhang Yudong, Wang Wenjun and others would buy cigarettes and smoke secretly at school.
After the flag-raising ceremony, the students slowly returned to the teaching building, and Fan Xiaotian quickly followed.
He reminded, "Don't talk to Yapo (Tang Jingjing's more malicious nickname), she can't keep anything in her mouth."
Fan Xiaotian had every right to be angry. When he was in the first grade of junior high school, his crotch was torn and Tang Jingjing saw it. In just one morning, everyone in Class 5 knew about this embarrassing incident.
If the original person had few friends because of his personality, then Fan Xiaotian's poor popularity was a big factor.
Students are very direct. Unlike adults, they will not try to cover up their displeasure on the surface. If students don't like someone, they will just ignore it.
(End of this chapter)
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