Wenhao: This child has been smart since he was young

Chapter 95 Kobe is not as good as you [Additional chapter for leader Rabbit Yusheng]

[Mr. Holmes, judging by the author's name, it's written by a Chinese. The writing style and word usage make it feel like a foreign translation. Is this author a Chinese living abroad?]
[Excellent Reading should not include works that are still being serialized, but should be released all at once according to the rules. Secondly, I like this story. Although it is just an opening chapter, the old Sherlock Holmes is a real British person. The old Holmes is still sharp and the basic deduction method is still useful, but he is limited by his flesh and blood, his memory is declining, his movements are slow, and he even needs a notebook to know what he has done every day. The author is dragging the god down from the altar, but I feel more intimate. Finally, I would like to add that "Mr. Holmes" should not be included in the excellent reading.]
[It's not like a mystery novel, the wording and sentence structure are more like a literary novel, with a lot of inner descriptions. If I hadn't seen it in "Years of Mystery", I would have given it a high score. But in a mystery magazine, it can only be given a passing score, and at best it can be regarded as a literary novel with a touch of Sherlock Holmes.]
Although the timeliness of obtaining feedback through questionnaires is much less than that of leaving comments on the Internet, the content of each form is taken very seriously, after all, mailing is quite troublesome.

Among the first batch of readers who gave feedback, one-third wrote reviews for Mr. Holmes, which is a very high proportion. With more than 20 works in each issue, readers evaluated the works based on their own interests.

Among the reviews, the positive rate is about 60%.

Generally speaking, this level of praise would not be enough to meet the publication standard, but this book is different.

"It's well written, but not reasoning-based. The book is quite literary... Gu Lu is young, but from the banquet that day, it can be seen that he must have had frequent conversations with me, so there are a lot of psychological descriptions."

Editor-in-Chief Gao also noted the question about Gu Lu's choice of words and sentences in the previous questionnaire, "It's not good to be too good at imitating. Imitating the style of "The Adventures of Sherlock Holmes" will of course have a translation flavor."

"Publish a single volume!" Editor-in-Chief Gao made the decision and called Han Zang into his office.

A double harvest. In the near future, Gu Lu will be able to go to Director Hu to exchange for more privileges!

Gu Lu didn't bring his cell phone, and the editor Han Zang's message didn't come yet, so Wan Bai and Wu Du came.

The three met in the cafeteria.

"This is Mr. Wu Duwu, the instructor of the Shuren Literary Society. He is also a famous writer who has joined the Writers Association and has many works." Wan Bai introduced, "This is Gu Lu."

"Hello, Teacher Wu. I'd like to trouble you to give me some guidance on my work this morning." Gu Lu took the initiative to greet him.

"I can't bear to give you any advice. The story is very complete. The most I can do is adjust it into a drama format," Wu Du responded.

The wise are the teachers. Although there are some who take advantage of their seniority, Wu Du seldom does so. Besides, he had just finished reading "Yesterday's Park", and that needle of loss was still pricking his heart.

"I have absolutely no experience in writing plays," Gu Lu responded.

A very calm boy, Wu Du thought to himself, and asked the question that had been curious to him since he read the article, "Does Gu Lu have a brother or sister?"

"I have a younger sister." Gu Lu responded.

No wonder, he wanted his sister to survive at all costs. The content of the article can provide clues to the author's life.

In fact, there is another question: how is the relationship with his father? However, since they just met, it is not convenient to ask so much in depth, and the instructor Wu Du also held back.

In this meeting, Wan Bai and Wu Du represented the society to submit format modification proposals to the authors.

The basic content will remain unchanged, just the format. Gu Lu has no objection to this plan.

After the deal was done, Wan Bai finally breathed a sigh of relief. After running around for these days, he was finally able to show the manuscript to the vice president and all the members.

Zhang Liru has put a lot of pressure on him. In the past few days...

No one has said where Gu Lu goes during his lunch break. If nothing unexpected happens, he will go to a black internet cafe to write manuscripts during his lunch break. After all, the follow-up payment for "Years and Reasoning" has not yet been received.

In the afternoon, after two classes, the students are free to fly. All the students in the school will leave the classroom.

As mentioned before, the three and four classes every Wednesday afternoon are club activity time.

Some students who did not join any clubs were free to move around in the playground.

"Our basketball club's freshman meeting is also very simple. A total of 35 people joined the club. We held a free throw shooting competition with twelve shooting opportunities. The first place winner will receive a reward of 20 yuan." For sports-related members, the freshman meeting was held in the playground. The president Lu Shangtong announced the event very straightforwardly without any extra words.

The rewards for club activities are all funded by the school, so this will not cause any controversy; what is controversial is the class rewards. Parallel classes and experimental classes will reward students with high scores, and the money will be paid from the class fees, which will cause a lot of contradictions.

At the free throw line, Gu Lumeng scored two goals and missed several shots. As a cannon fodder, he stood aside silently.

"When I was eighteen that year, I stood on the stage of my alma mater like a minion..." Gu Lu looked at the other freshmen who had scored five or six goals.

The athletically gifted Lu Ping scored 12 out of 9 goals and directly won the first place.

"Why are you not happy even though you got first place?" Gu Lu asked.

Lu Ping said, "My idol, Kobe, entered the NBA when he was 17 years old. I will be 17 next year. The gap is too big."

"You can't say that. You are younger than Kobe, so this is one win. You win one and Kobe wins zero, so this is two wins. You win two and Kobe still wins zero, so this is a big win." Gu Lu patted Lu Ping on the shoulder, "You have a bright future ahead of you."

What he said seemed to make some sense, and Lu Ping felt much better. He also thought to himself that it was worth it for him to help Gu Lu get in.

The freshman conventions of other clubs were also interesting. I can’t talk about all of them, so I’ll just pick out the highlights.

The Shu Ren Literature Society held a freshman meeting in the Grade 1 () classroom. There were about people, including old members and new students, filling the entire classroom.

Freshmen Wei Jiao, Qi Caiwei, Li Guyuan and others sat on the left.

Wan Bai, Zhang Liru and other senior actors sat on the right. I didn’t know whether I should say it or not. Zhang Liru straightened her back and was taller than the people next to her.

Instructor Wu Du sits above.

At the beginning, the freshmen shared their own works one by one.

Among them, Qi Caiwei and Li Guyuan won applause. The former was mainly because of her appearance. The emotions in the poems she shared were relatively abstract.

Li Guyuan’s story was simply great, and when he returned to his seat, he heard what he wanted to hear most.

"It's very well written and the story feels very innovative," said Qi Caiwei.

"No wonder you wear glasses." Wei Jiao said.

Although Wei Jiao's compliment was strange, Li Guyuan could barely accept it.

"The new members have shared content of good quality, especially Li Guyuan, who wrote very good stories." Instructor Wu Du first encouraged, then gave Wan Bai a look.

The latter sent out the printed version of "Yesterday's Park", and every member had a copy.

"Everyone knows that our club will be performing an original stage play for this year's school anniversary, and this is the work we are going to rehearse," said Wu Du.

The students looked down at the documents in their hands, especially Vice President Zhang Liru, who couldn't wait because the manuscripts submitted by Rourou and Danzhu had been rejected.

She wanted to see how exciting the mysterious foreign aid was.

(End of this chapter)