A Hogwarts Esoteric Leader

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Thank you to a friend who jumped on the street together!

Without discussing it with him, the plot of this book could not come out, although I have been hiding from QQ recently...

Thank you Blu-ray!

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Second, there are patches.

Eton is a boys' school, and I've changed what Hermione said that day.

Sure enough, you still need to read the comments, and it's totally useless to not read the comments.

A staged victory, no problem. After all, a esoteric simulator can be considered a victory when it comes to a relationship. I am at least a small victory.

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Then, the conclusion.

1. About the manuscript, I wrote too much about admission.

I remember that the first draft was 40,000 to 50,000 words and was accepted for admission. Of course, that draft was greatly rejected by the editor, because the first 10,000 words would not work.

Fortunately, it was rejected, otherwise there would be no manuscript.

The second draft was a rough draft (I thought it was quite thin at the time), but the internal submission was accepted, thank you for not killing it.

The third draft adjusted the perspective and adjusted it to the protagonist's perspective as much as possible. Only Indreich and Hermione will get more subjective perspectives.

The fourth draft adjusted the plot, mainly through discussions with a friend who fluttered the streets. He believed that admissions should be a little more passionate and turbulent. This is the root of all evil. Originally, I probably just thought about the magic awakening and almost finished school.

The following is the fine-tuning when the manuscript is actually published. The original manuscript has been reduced to a rough manuscript or even a scrap manuscript when it is 60,000 to 70,000 words, and the later is probably the date code.

When it comes to happy plots, it goes smoothly, and when it comes to sad plots, it's very slow, especially starting from Hindlesh, because I knew she was going to be kidnapped, so I had all kinds of pain a few days before that. .

Writing a transition chapter is also very painful. The transition chapter means a bunch of trivial information that has to be written, which is quite troublesome to organize and may be missed.

It was also very painful to write at the end of the volume. I originally planned to meet a dementor on the train, but it turned out to be a sad one. I wanted to mention my emotions, but in the end my emotions were exhausted.

I was also exhausted.

Physical and emotional are not very good, and I ended up losing sleep after writing the volume last night.

So can you take a break? Just today? I want to make up for "Player's Super Justice". I chased two or three hundred chapters before, but I stopped chasing it because of some things, and now it's all over. However, a certain "Devil Conqueror" is still breaking.

There must be a chapter, after all, it is still in the recommendation period...  

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2. About the epidemic, blockade, and food.

When the city area where I was located was infected, I was blocked, just when I was writing Endlech.

Colds, headaches, so that Henderleich didn't describe enough, it should have been a little more sharp (no).

But now it's fine, it's better if it's lighter, it's more suitable for the feeling of light novels.

I have a cold, take medicine, and sleep longer. I didn’t eat takeout for the first few days. I ate instant noodles for four or five days in a row, and the update was slow.

Later, I had takeout, which was better.

The biggest impact of the epidemic on me is the source of food and the writing environment.

I used to be able to go to school to sit and write, but now I can only sit on the bedside or squat on the lazy sofa on the balcony.

The body is about to be destroyed.

So can you take a break? Just today? There is still one chapter.

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3. About the daily schedule

My current life is mainly occupied by three things:

Sleeping, coding, reading.

Occasionally visit station B.

Don't play games.

I'm a student, I haven't got a job yet, but I've already written several novels...

This was a great breakthrough for me, both in terms of writing ability and grades...

This is due to reading books. I read the original Harry Potter books and Haruki Murakami, and then there are wikis, but wikis are not books, they can only be regarded as materials.

Actually, there are several books that I want to read, including "Player's Super Justice" and "The Book of Problems", the latter is a real-life book about lamps and lanterns, and I have been borrowing them for more than a month.

But I don't have time to watch.

Recently, I have been sleeping more and more time. Maybe my body is too weak and I want to go out to exercise to earn some energy.

I now understand why the light's ascension path is getting thinner and thinner.

So can you take a break? And there is still a chapter...

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4. Summary of writing skills

My writing ability in this book can be said to have improved by leaps and bounds, at least for me, at least I can read it.

Looking back at the previous works, uh, what kind of **** is that?

I hope that in the future I can still have this idea from time to time.

To sum up, it is probably the following points:

1. Grasp the perspective

Perspective is the first element, just as big eyes are always the first Sichen we invite, perspective is also the first element of writing.

I don’t write about God’s perspective, but only subjective perspective. This is the first rule I want to follow.

In this way, information can be synchronized, and there will be puzzles and emotions.

God has no emotions.

2. Progressive

The biggest difficulty in writing esoteric teachings may be the problem of understanding, and I have been deeply frustrated at this point.

In my last book, writing and writing, I lost myself writing, it was a mess, and the water was on the shelves...

Because the esoteric worldview is really complicated. It takes ten lifetimes to study invisible techniques. Not a lie.

So I can only write this book slowly. The only thing that can be used in the first volume is the lamp, and the cup and moth are exposed. In the end, Qi Xian got it...

In addition, even emotions need to be gradual.

Esotericism is very emotional, fascinated, restless, fearful, crazy, and reminiscent of moments... I attribute it to emotional exhaustion and collapse.

It didn't come all at once. The protagonist was not caught in the heart by some emotion all of a sudden, or even from some mysterious influence, but from repeated real blows.

A real crash.

I think Murakami does just that.

A real crash.

Really collapsed.

However, I don't know if I have written that feeling. I am a new author, and I am afraid that I will only be moved by myself.

3. Characters, Dialogues

Yes, I put the characters on the third point. Only with the foundation of the first two points can we talk about the character level.

Otherwise, things will not be explained clearly, and the characters will not be able to stand.

Characters are mainly divided into static description, action description, and dialogue description.

Static description is to write about appearance, there is nothing to say, I am very good in this area, and there are more people who write well than me.

Action description is to write action, which is divided into big action and small action: big action involves the switching of scenes, sense of movement, shock, and pleasure; small action involves the character, habits, and cuteness of the characters.

I'm pretty average in small movements, so it can only be considered a pass.

However, when it comes to moving the camera with big moves, I seem to be okay, and I barely hold on to it for a few big scenes.

Dialogue description is the most important thing, I think. After all, daily chat is the backbone of light novels.

The most important thing about dialogue is to have the feeling of dialogue. The people in the novel are talking to the people in the novel, not to the readers, nor to the author. They only speak to those who speak to them.

It may sound a little devious, but that's what it is, and it also has something to do with perspective.

The second is the fun of the conversation.

For example, Snape's complaints and magical metaphors, he hasn't appeared for a long time, but he will be back soon. UU Reading www.uukanshu.com

The best metaphors and rants are always for Snape.

By the way, a long dialogue is divided into several pairs of quotation marks... Of course I know how to use quotation marks, and I also want to write a long and non-segmented dialogue like Murakami...

But the problem is not to segment, it goes against the reading habits of people today, especially if everyone still reads online articles...

Of course, using quotation marks to divide a sentence into several paragraphs is also against the habit.

But after weighing it, the former is more serious.

As for the front quotation marks not added...

I'm a typographyist, I've studied design for a while, and I'm very uncomfortable when I see no quotation marks at the beginning of a paragraph...

I'll think of a way...

4. Some coincidences

There were some coincidences that I didn't expect during the writing of the novel.

Like the resemblance of Indreich and Harry.

Another example is various time points, if they correspond to the meaning of Si Chen, most of them are quite appropriate.

The most recent coincidence was last night's update.

At the end of the volume, it happens to be Chapter 71.

The night watchman is 1, the light is 1, and my birthday for the protagonist is also January 1st. The night watchman is always the first Sichen we invite.

Kai is 7, and 7 is an important number in both the esoteric worldview and the Harry Potter worldview.

1 is in the one place, symbolizing the step-by-step process, and 7 is in the ten place, symbolizing the cumulative result.

And now only the first knife has been opened.

It's just a coincidence. I don't have the energy to design this thing, and I'm exhausted from writing.

so......

Needless to say, I have emphasized it three times...