After rebirth, I became a great writer

Chapter 188 Be a thief, don’t be aware of thieves!

"Su Muzhe, the original meaning of the name"

Several old men in the private room chanted softly.

Although they are not members of the Poetry Association, they are all masters of martial arts novels and can be regarded as high-level intellectuals. Moreover, they need to learn a lot about writing novels, so they know a little bit.

[Su Muzhe] is the name of a lyrics, with seven sentences in the front and back sections, four rhymes and double tunes, totaling 62 characters.

In terms of rhyme and rhythm, this poem is correct, but when you read it, you feel that it is not as good as their usual poems [Su Muzhe], which is the one that Yau Sheng praised just now, "I'll go even if I have thousands of people." It has a bit of flavor.

But that's not bad. Not many of the poems they wrote in martial arts novels can catch up with this one.

As for the later [original meaning], as the name implies, it refers to the original idea or intention. If you call this name, it has no special meaning, it is the content corresponding to the main text of the chapter catalog, that's all!

Relatively speaking, they prefer the first song [Youth Travel], except for Yagyu, because there are a few lines written in this poem that are very heroic, so naturally he likes this song with his personality.

Unfortunately, even though Yayoi likes it, he has never read the content of the subsequent chapters, and he has only a little understanding of it. It is like scratching a itch through the shoe, making people feel uncomfortable and feeling uncomfortable.

So he spoke.

"Old Feng, you're just free. Let's talk about the two things about [Hu Han's grudges, he must pour out the hero's tears] and [I'll go even if I go]. We just help your apprentice check."

"I said Lao Liu! You want to know the follow-up. After drinking the tea, I will ask Lao Feng privately. We don't want to know now."

As soon as Yanagi finished speaking, the fat old man said.

This old man has a good relationship with Sima Beijie, and he doesn't want to mention the "Tianlong Bazi" more.

Then two people agreed.

"What do you mean I want to know the follow-up? I am worried that Lao Feng's apprentice will miswrite it. It has been a bit of a big deal on the Internet recently. You old antiques don't usually go online, so what do you know!"

Yayoi glared at her eyes and directly retorted. Since the last incident of "Wang Teng", Yayoi has also been online to follow the news from time to time.

"Online? What's so fierce?"

The fat old man doesn't usually go online, and he doesn't understand what Yanagi said.

"What he said should be about that post. Many people on the Internet say that the protagonist of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is not Duan Yu, but Murong Fu. Yes, Yau Sheng?"

A delicate and soft voice came, and Mo Yue spoke.

In addition to Feng Zijie and Yau Sheng, she should be the third person in this box who often surfs the Internet, so she knows the popular post on the literary forum.

When Yanagi heard this, he smiled embarrassedly and did not continue to answer the conversation.

He was referring to this matter, just about the protagonist of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". Yau Sheng and his friends' views are different from those of online readers. Murong Fu cannot be the protagonist.

To ask why, it is very simple, the vision of a veteran writer.

Because no matter in terms of plot direction, character portrayal, or foreshadowing, Duan Yu is the current number one protagonist.

Liu Sheng said that he was worried that Chen Tianhong's writing was just a reason, and it can be understood as a step.

Unfortunately, his steps are destined to be unable to go down.

"When did you, Yasuo, eat radish so salty, worry about it? How could that kid make such a low-level mistake? However, some people are dizzy and slow in their minds, so it is normal to think like this."

As soon as the sound came out, the whole house was silent, and even Yayoi forgot to retaliate.

Everyone looked at Sima Beijie with a strange look on his face. He said the words just now.

The meaning in Sima Beijie's dialect is easy to understand. It is purely a mockery of Liu Sheng. It's nothing. It's common for them to argue with each other every day.

The point is that in addition to mocking Yanagi, these words actually reveal their recognition of Chen Tianhong.

This surprised everyone. They all knew that Sima Beijie had a personality, with a higher attitude than his top, arrogant and polite manners. Especially for those who offended him, they almost didn't say anything about sex. Not to mention recognition, they sprayed his work from the beginning to the end.

But now not only does it contain recognition, but they have also talked about "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" for so long, Sima Beijie still has not criticized the book.

Then there is only one explanation, he was convinced! He was conquered by "The Legend of the Condor Heroes".

After Sima Beijie said this, he immediately regretted it.

He was really accustomed to it, and he wanted to confront his old opponent, but he forgot that he was not suitable for talking at the moment.

There is no way, it was what Yagyu said, which reached his itchy point.

Is Duan Yu not the protagonist? Nonsense!

Not to mention anything else, just talk about the latest two chapters. The hero who was praised as Bei Qiao Feng by people in the world has become sworn brothers with Duan Yu, which indirectly proves Duan Yu's identity as the protagonist.

If you really are a supporting role, will you become a sworn person?

What other characters are there? Hammer, which can make this brother recognized by this hero? What problems can there be in the character?

I'm sorry for his IQ if I don't argue

In fact, Sima Beijie also wanted to find out the problems of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" and criticize and ridicule them. However, as he followed the pursuit, his thoughts had been taken back one by one.

The scene was so awkward that everyone was a little confused about Sima Beijie's pulse and it was difficult to speak.

Liu Sheng thought, but didn't know how to refute it. Sima Beijie could see that, so he could

Finally, Feng Zijie said something extraordinary, and his words were like thunder thunder rising from the ground, giving the people in the house a burning and tenderness to the outside.

That's what he said.

"Old Liu's worries are actually right. My apprentice did write the wrong way. He didn't write the main line of Duan Yu, but he actually started a new main line. The chapters in the second half of the chapter are this new main line."

"What? The new main line? Really change the protagonist? It's not Murong Fu, right? Old Feng, didn't I tell you, it would collapse later. Why did you become a master? Don't you remind that child? Can you do it? Let me go if you can't."

Yagyu was the first to speak.

"No wonder the two poems have different styles, one is graceful and the other is heroic. It turns out that they have changed the main line and the protagonist. But the two protagonists are difficult to control in the later stage! How to set the plot structure, who is higher and who is lower? It is impossible to chew too much."

Mo Yue looked worried. She liked Duan Yu's line quite a bit.

"Old Feng, young people have many ideas and can understand them, but you have to dissuade them! You have to eat food one by one, and the road has to be taken step by step."

A mature and polite old man also spoke.

Sima Beijie was also full of surprise. It was strange that he should be happy, but in theory, he actually had the same thoughts as Liu Sheng, Mo Yue and the others, wanting to dissuade him.

Fortunately, he held it in time, otherwise he would put himself in an embarrassing situation again.

"Hmph, don't be deceived by this old guy, Lao Feng. Look at his proud look on his face. If his apprentice really breaks down, can he do this? I said Lao Feng, why are you keeping it? There are no outsiders here, so why bother to say it? We can go out and talk nonsense."

Someone revealed the secret of heaven in one word.

Everyone turned to look at Feng Zijie, and they saw that he had returned to the way he had just recited poems, straightening his chest, stroking his beard, and looking proud.

However, Feng Zijie was so busy that he only said eight words in the end.

"The Buddha said, you cannot say, you cannot say."

"Why?"

When everyone was about to scold the old Feng Zijie and deliberately swearing their appetite, Sima Beijie subconsciously made the scene colder again.

As the saying goes, the circle is not big, don’t talk nonsense, and speaking subconsciously is the easiest to be embarrassed

More than ten seconds later, Yayoi said something faintly.

"Don't you know why? There are bad people among the masses!"

It means something. Everyone understands it!

"Yan Sheng, I've fought with you"

"Old Duan's words are so familiar! I seem to have heard them before."

This thought flashed through the minds of several people in the box.

However, the reality is no longer waiting for them to think about it, because Sima Beijie and Yau Sheng had already started a full martial arts campaign and they were about to get up to fight.

Not to mention who will win or lose this time, Chen Tianhong has already typed the last word on the high-speed rail because the train arrived at the station soon.

In addition to the 100,000 words of the manuscript before "The Legend of Mortals Cultivating Immortals", he coded another 30,000 words in the car. I want to update 130,000 at one time. This amount is enough to make you full.

Although these words are even worse than the supreme supreme, it’s not true! The financial supporter’s father didn’t say he wanted to update it. He took the initiative, and I think the book fans won’t say anything more.

At this time, the prompt sound of the train coming to the station sounded, and Chen Tianhong hurriedly logged into the author's backstage and completed the upload of the manuscript.

As soon as he finished uploading, Chen Tianhong received a call from his father and asked him if he had arrived at the station.

My father Chen Zhide came to pick him up, but the reason why Chen Tianhong asked his father to pick him up was not that he was more expensive, but because there were too many things and he couldn't get it all by himself.

The love of the villagers is very heavy!

When Chen Tianhong completed the upload of "The Legend of Mortals Cultivation of Immortals", in a smoky office, a man in his thirties was smoking cigarettes one by one. From the expression on his face, he was a little irritated.

The man's name is Min Daming. He is the small boss of a decoration company. The company is not big and not even medium-sized. However, the annual income is still worth one million yuan.

Min Daming is the representative of the grassroots counterattack. He used to be just a decoration worker. With his hard work and a slightly smart mind, he finally became what he is now after more than ten years of struggle.

The reason why Min Daming is said to be a little smart is that he suffered a lot on the road from a worker to a boss, was cheated many times, and was deceived again and again and again to suffer losses.

He was born as a farmer and was too simple. Even though he had experienced the beating of society and became a small capitalist, he still retained a little original intention.

For example, now, he is in a dilemma again.

The cause was a project. It was supposed to be taken over by his company, but it was snatched by another decoration company. Min Daming didn't say anything. The boss was once his partner, but later the two parted ways due to interests.

Min Daming was still concerned about his affection, but told himself in his heart that this was the last time he gave in, because it was not the first time.

However, the boss had done halfway through the project, but the worker quit because he was owed his salary. He could only make up for the salary, but he went to invest in other projects, which caused problems in the capital chain and could not afford the salary for the time being.

Moreover, because of his character, basically no one was willing to lend him money, so he called Min Daming.

According to the rules of the mall, Min Daming not only cannot borrow this money, but also has to cut off the firewood from the cauldron and dig the workers.

The mall is like a battlefield, and the morality of the mall is left for real friends, not for such people.

However, Min Daming was still caring about his former friendship, so he was very entangled.

The prompt sound from the phone is not the phone ringing, but the update of books in the bookshelf.

The first voice of Min Daming ignored it. He knew that "The Legend of Mortals Cultivating Immortals" was updated because this book was the only one on the bookshelf.

But now he was not in the mood to watch, and then there was the second and third sounds. It kept ringing for a whole few minutes.

Min Daming finally couldn't help it, so he opened his phone and opened the bookshelf.

"Damn, I have updated more than 40 chapters. Today is the New Year. Is the author crazy?"

Seeing a row of new chapters in the message prompt, Min Daming swears.

For book fans, nothing makes them happier than seeing such updates. Min Daming decided not to worry about whether to help or not, and then finish reading the book.

Unlike Wu Wenyi, Min Daming has been chasing the latest chapter of the mortal, which is the Spiritual Realm Chapter.

The plot in the current book is in its climax. The demon world invades the spiritual world. The battle begins in Tianyuan City where Han Li is located. At this time, his fusion stage monk is already a top monk in the spiritual world.

The plot of this update is that after the outbreak of the war, Yitian City near Tianyuan City was taken into crisis because the Demon World was taken care of by the Demon World.

Well. Actually, it is the principle of losing lips and cold teeth. Han Li and another female cultivator in the fusion stage support Yitian City. On the way, they almost killed three demon masters of the same realm with their own strength, and obtained the Demon Suppression Lock (foreshadowing).

"Tsk tsk, after the advancement of the fusion, Old Demon Han is good at his skills! I have the gold-eating insect in my hand! I just don't turn into monkeys at any time, it's a bit unhuman."

Min Daming was very happy to watch this battle. It is rare to see the protagonist Han Li in the book. Every time I see this kind of plot, all fans shout that it is very exciting.

The plot in the book continues. After successfully reaching Yitian City, there is still a big battle. Han Li killed Venerable Yan in seconds, led out the Yin-Yang Sha, killed Yin-Yang again, and then broke through the Colored Light Tower and was about to continue fighting. When he was no exception, the blood light of the ancestor of the Mahayana period of the Demon Realm transformed into a body and descended to the spiritual realm.

Like the Nascent Soul monks in the human world, the Mahayana monks belong to the ceiling of combat power in the spiritual world.

Although Han Li is only one level away from the Mahayana period, he will definitely be unable to compete, and even his incarnation is slightly inferior.

Fortunately, he got the Demon-Suppressing Lock in the first battle, and an old Demon Carriage was sealed inside. After Han Li asked for advice, he temporarily repelled the blood light, used his natal skill to run away, and escaped from danger.

"Sure enough, this is the routine again. MD, you will have to run away in just three seconds. I am really convinced. From the human world to the spiritual world, will you still have to run when you become an immortal? You can't pretend for a while?"

It didn't take long for Min Daming to read it and felt a little tooth pain, but old book fans are already used to it. Anyway, after running away, there will definitely be a plot to continue pretending to be X next.

While running away, Han Li also helped Master Heiyu to capture the Huangliang Stone Spirit. However, the disaster did not go alone. He met the incarnation of another ancestor Yuan Sha, the devil world. The two ancestors were incarnated and chased him. Even Han Paopau, who was good at escaping, could not resist it.

At the critical moment, he encountered a thunderous friend on the road. This escape expert who is not inferior to Han Li. The two of them merged and were the best in the world. They successfully used the double thunder formation and finally returned to Tianyuan City safely.

The atmosphere of this passage depicted in the runaway scene was very well rendered, especially when Yuan Sha and Xue Guang joined forces to chase him, Min Daming was worried that the protagonist Han Li would capsize and lose his great reputation as the first person to run away.

"Well, I've run away successfully. I should be more happy next time! I don't know how the author will write about the exciting thing this time."

Min Daming clicked on the next chapter with earnest expectations.

However, after Han Li returned to the city successfully, he received bad news. Two people who went to rescue Yitian City, who also escaped from the war. One of them, named Qinglongshanren, set his mind on Han Li's friend Bingfeng.

The Yuanyin Qi of Bingfeng can help the monks increase the chance of breaking through the realm, which is a great temptation for any immortal cultivator.

In fact, Master Qinglong is not a fool. He dared not offend Han Li easily. However, almost no monk could escape under the pursuit of the Mahayana monks. He thought Han Li had fallen, so he became interested.

However, Master Qinglong didn't know that if you want to run away, Han Li would definitely be among the top three in the spiritual world. He really hit the iron plate this time.

Han Li was able to keep Bingfeng by his side to protect him, because they were both friends in the human world and had feelings and friendship. The key point is that Bingfeng's Yuanyin energy can also help Han Li break through the realm.

For Han Li, who values ​​interests very much, Master Qinglong's operations undoubtedly stimulated his sensitive nerves.

"This Master Qinglong is so shameless. He just saved your life, so he would forget it if he didn't want to give it back, but he still had to steal his things. As expected, the interests of the immortal world are the most important. What kind of life-saving grace is worthless in front of the interests."

After Min Daming scolded the characters in the book for a while, he suddenly became stunned. This Master Qinglong and his former partner seemed to be.

To be precise, Min Daming has lent him more than once to overcome the difficulties, but he will still rob the project that belongs to Min Daming.

The plot continues, and Han Li rushed to Douyuan Pavilion and saved Bingfeng. Seeing that Han Li was not dead, Master Qinglong naturally lost his mind. But how could Han Li's personality easily endure it? He wanted to practice with Master Qinglong with the elders of Tianyuan City alone to dissuade him ineffectively.

With the pleasure coming, Han Li took all his strength and turned into a monkey again, defeating Master Qinglong within three moves.

In fact, with his strength, he could kill Master Qinglong. But because it was a bit bad in the city, in front of everyone, he kept Master Qinglong's life for the time being and limited him to leave within three days, otherwise he would be prepared to return to dust and earth.

"No! With the vengeful personality of Old Demon Han, how could he be so easy to talk to? Could it be that he has changed his personality? It shouldn't be!"

After reading this passage, Min Daming felt that he had missed something.

So he read this chapter again and finally read the foreshadowing

There is such a paragraph in the original text.

With a loud "boom", the golden fist shadow passed by the man on the Qinglong's ear and hit the open space on the stone platform.

What no one noticed was that at the moment when the golden fist shadow flashed, something as thin as hair burst out from it, which suddenly sank into the ears of the Qinglong man, and disappeared in a flash.

The next chapter once again highlights the iron rule that Han Li can survive the immortal cultivator, that is, he will not leave any future troubles and eliminate the roots.

It also proves that Han Li's IQ online

It is difficult to take action in the city, so he forced Master Qinglong to leave. Because Han Li himself is not easy to take action. After all, he is a human race, and now he has an identity and status. He has to take into account his own image, but it does not exist to let the enemy leave safely.

So he arranged for his spiritual beast to secretly follow Master Qinglong out of the city and then kill him after he left the city.

The spirit beast raised a question. It was not as perverted as Han Li. It could kill enemies at the same level, but could only defeat them... and could not kill them, for fear of not completing the mission.

Han Li told the spirit beast that he had tampered with Qinglongshan people in the third move and let it go with peace of mind.

The result was just as Han Li said, the spirit beast did not fight with Master Qinglong outside the city for long, and the slender thing left by Han Li played a role, and there was no Master Qinglong in the world.

Seeing this, it was only half of the plot updated this time, but Min Daming did not choose to continue reading. He looked at the beginning of this chapter and was stunned.

The beginning is the conversation between Han Li and Bingfeng.

"Master Qinglong will be extremely resentful to fellow Taoists from now on. Brother Han will be more careful in the future. Brother Han naturally does not have to be afraid of this person, but he will also ask his disciples to do it."

Bingfeng thought about it and reminded her a few words.

"No need to be so troublesome. He is very small-minded! Since he has made enemies, he naturally cannot keep this Qinglong man in the world. There are only a thousand days to be a thief in the world, so how can he guard against thieves for thousands of days!"

Han Li breathed a sigh of relief and said in a cold voice.

"There is only a thousand days to be a thief in the world, so how can one defend against thieves for a thousand days?"

Min Daming repeatedly muttered this sentence, and he put it into reality.

In the shopping mall, the competition between peers is very fierce, because the plate is so big, and if you divide more, you will have less of your own. Therefore, for the sake of interests, sometimes morality really rarely exists.

And Min Daming's partner is a typical profit-oriented approach.

Min Daming also knew in his heart that even if he borrowed money to help him overcome difficulties this time, he would still rob his own project after he arrived.

He may be concerned about his relationship, but Min Daming also has to think about his workers. Whoever works are not a family or a family member is not a person who wants to earn more money.

Instead of preventing him from stealing his own project, it would be better to watch him go bankrupt this time so that he would not have the chance to steal his own.

After all, he did all this himself. Min Daming Gang is a love relationship, not a helper is a duty.

"Oh, keep reading! No matter who he is."

Min Daming finally made the decision.

There is no way to write the overview of the mortal period, so there are too many. Please understand it!

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