After rebirth, I became a great writer

Chapter 192 Excellent people are always busy

The Buddha said that all beings are equal, and the Tao said that everyone can do it. Although everyone's soul is noble, there are still huge differences between people in real life.

This is like playing online games, and there is also a huge gap in ranks, and this gap is like a height hidden in the heart and is insurmountable.

For example, in the box now, the old people here are all great writers in the martial arts circle, but there is still a gap between them.

Zhao Shousheng is their ceiling. He has long stood on the top of the mountain, condescending to the top, and can see it at a glance.

So they were not sure who the second protagonist of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" was, but for Zhao Shousheng, they could basically be sure of it. After all, with his vision and decades of experience immersed in martial arts novels, it is really not difficult.

"Hu Han is grateful to him, and he must cry out to his heroes. What you mean is that Qiao Feng is the second male protagonist, but he is obviously a tragic setting! In just one short chapter, he has experienced the famous "Bei Qiao Feng" from the leader of the largest gang in the world, becoming a Hu person who is betrayed by everyone."

Yagyu expressed his doubts, which did not conform to the plot logic of normal martial arts novels.

"Old Zhao. Otherwise, please give me some comments."

Someone asked, too.

They did not doubt Zhao Shousheng's intentions, because when he said that, everyone saw the shock on Feng Zijie's face, which proved that what Zhao Shousheng said was correct.

But they are very confused and confused. How can a martial arts novel set the protagonist a tragedy?

It’s not that martial arts novels cannot set the protagonist in a very miserable way. Many protagonists start with their parents and relatives, and this is the case with Sima Beijie’s “Tiansha Lonely Star”.

However, the protagonist's personality setting and subsequent plot direction are not tragic, and the ending will definitely not be "death" or "retreat in the world".

But Qiao Feng's subsequent plot is likely to be tragic in the end, and Yagyu is still sure of this. No matter what, he is also a martial arts master, and the character setting can still be seen.

Zhao Shousheng pondered for a few seconds, opened the martial arts magazine in his hand again, and spoke.

"Lao Liu is right. Judging from the current plot, the character Qiao Feng is a tragic hero. From the first chapter [The Former Reason], we can see that yesterday was a high-ranking and powerful hero, a generation of heroes, and today, a foreigner, a single person, and someone else was relaxed after he removed his responsibilities, but he was heavy on both ends."

"From this, Qiao Feng's subsequent portrayal is bound to be inseparable from the grudges and entanglements of the Beggars' Sect and the Central Plains Martial Arts. His psychology is contradictory, and he must take care of the grace of raising and cultivating his own talents. He must also distinguish right from wrong and grudges, find out the enemies who killed his biological parents and then take revenge.

From the subsequent sentence "Hu Han's grudges must be filled with heroes" that Lao Feng said, you can already confirm the ending of Qiao Feng."

"Yes! Mr. Zhao, then why do you say that Qiao Feng is the male protagonist, a character who is destined to end with a tragedy, how can he?"

The more you listened, the more you became confused.

"Do you all think so?"

Zhao Shousheng did not answer the conversation immediately, but instead asked everyone in the box.

Everyone nodded and said yes.

"Oh, this is a misunderstanding of thinking! You always remember the inherent style patterns of martial arts novels and evaluate works based on existing circles. This is the same as drawing circles with compass. No matter how big your circle is, the origin is still in the circle. If you don't let go of your mind, how can you understand this child's innovative works? You have become rigid in your thinking!"

Zhao Shousheng shook his head and sighed, the disappointment on his face could no longer be concealed.

Although martial arts novels are prosperous today, they are full of energy and the style of the works is the same. The great writers continue their own styles. Other writers imitate the styles of the great masters. During this period, the authors occasionally innovate, but they cannot escape the inherent pattern. They are nothing more than changing into old leather and new clothes.

"Innovation? Mr. Zhao, do you mean that "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is different from the current martial arts novels, what new is there?"

An old man keenly caught the sensitive words in Zhao Shousheng's words, and he even stood up excitedly.

"Is there any? Didn't Mr. Zhao say before that it's still a tragic hero plot? I didn't see any new ideas when I watched "The Legend of the Condor Heroes"!"

Some are excited, some are confused.

Feng Zijie was also excited when he heard Zhao Shousheng's words. He had read the follow-up manuscripts and had the deepest understanding of the plot, except Chen Tianhong.

He also felt the extraordinaryness of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". To be precise, he had only watched half of the plot, and was not very sure.

"Let me hear what Mr. Zhao said first. If this is the case, even if he offended Lao Cao, he would also let Tianhong take the path of martial arts novels."

Feng Zijie thought to himself.

Zhao Shousheng continued to speak.

"Let's talk about the first chapter. This chapter begins with the verbal conflict between Qiao Feng and the Beggars' Sect. I wrote most of the chapters in the dialogue alone, which is a bit long-winded. However, if you read it carefully, you will find that in these dialogues, the character of Qiao Feng is better set off.

For example, Qiao Feng's sentence [Mrs. Ma, with Qiao's skills, if you want to get something from your mansion, you will not come back empty-handed, and you will not lose any personal things. Not to mention that there are only three or two females in the mansion, even the inner courtyard of the palace, the prime minister's tent, and among thousands of troops, Qiao may not be able to get anything from you.]

This sentence alone sets up Qiao Feng’s image. Moreover, this writing style does not focus on the level of martial arts. It can conquer people by relying solely on the momentum of language. This writing style is very distinctive and young people have many ideas!”

Zhao Shousheng pointed to the clip of the chapter in his hand and said this first.

Everyone can understand that, yes, Qiao Feng is a great hero, a great hero, who is completely called the protagonist, and is more deeply rooted in people's hearts than Duan Yu's character.

"In addition to highlighting the characters' personalities, the dialogue is also mixed with great principles, such as Zhao Qiansun's sentence [The Han people may not be superior to others, and the Khitans may not be inferior to pigs and dogs!] There are also some "political correct" words (political words are not intercepted) such words are the most inflammatory.

It can be said that this is an innovation. This innovation is reflected in the details, in the grasp of the size of the characters. Abandoning the pretentious plot and adding philosophical thinking about ancient history and social "politics" is undoubtedly a new path. This child writes like this, not only with his writing style."

This passage is very long. Zhao Shousheng picked up the tea beside him, took a few sips, and then continued.

"The same is true for the latter chapter. It is relatively more painful to read, and it also makes the beginning of Qiao Feng's tragic feelings solid. From the foreshadowing left in the paragraph, combined with the chapters of the second half of the chapters mentioned by Lao Feng, the next story should be Qiao Feng's finding the development context of his enemy. This plot is a bit limited and cannot escape the setting of a tragic hero. However, it is not impossible to complete the turning point."

For example, the chapter [I will go even if thousands of people], I think it should be the sublimation point of the character Qiao Feng and the turning point in the subsequent plot development.

But what makes me even more curious is the plot in the future, Hu Han is loving the grudges! Hu Han is loving the grudges! Song State and Liao State, Xixia and Dali, Central Plains against foreign lands, hehe, the conflict between national justice, what a great spirit, what a young man haha”

At the end, Zhao Shousheng's voice became more and more, and the smile on his face became more and more, and finally turned into a hearty laugh, with the laughter showing pleasure.

Such a scene fell into the eyes of everyone, making them a little dazed. In my memory, Zhao Shousheng had not laughed so loudly for a long time, and he was not so happy even at his birthday party yesterday.

And they also understood the meaning of Zhao Shousheng's words. "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is a new style of martial arts that is different from the current martial arts novels.

"Sure enough, Mr. Zhao also realized that the subsequent plot had national justice. No, I want to call Tianhong. Such a structure requires a strong writing skills. He is still too young, so he has to let Tianhong meet Mr. Zhao."

Thinking of this, Feng Zijie called Chen Tianhong.

Kyoto University, in dormitory 404.

"Tianhong, just tell me, is that Xixia warrior Murong Fu? Is the protagonist him? Han Li, will you write the Immortal World Chapter?"

Gao Wanfeng was still asking.

"Class Chen Tianhong, I think "Rural Teacher" can be written as a follow-up. Are you planning to write a follow-up? There is also a literary works competition. What type of articles are you planning to write?"

Yu Zhijie is also asking.

"Chen Tianhong, do you have any other hobbies besides writing? Do you like playing games? Do you like cars?"

This is Ximen Xue. He can't get into the conversation about novels, but he can find common topics from other aspects.

Chen Tianhong: "."

As the saying goes, three women are equal to 1,500 ducks. Now Chen Tianhong thinks that the three boys are not much short of goals.

It’s not that he doesn’t want to answer, but that after he answers, there will be new questions. His three roommates are the same as one hundred thousand whys.

Chen Tianhong pursed his lips and turned to look at Xiao Guojian.

He wanted to say, "Uncle Xiao, otherwise, I'd better go to that single room. I decided to enjoy special benefits."

At this time, the ringtone of the mobile phone rang. The noisy ringtones used to be no less than the fairy sound to Chen Tianhong now.

Because he finally has a reason to temporarily get rid of 1,500 ducks.

After saying sorry to Gao Wanfeng and the other two, Chen Tianhong took his cell phone to the balcony of the dormitory.

"Tianhong, your report is over? I was rehearsing a drama just now. I didn't see the news on my phone, so I'm sorry!"

The phone call was from Liu Yifei.

"Hmm. It's over. Are you rehearsing a drama, what drama?"

"It's about college students' campus life. This program will be performed at the freshman party. After changing several scripts, the teacher is still not satisfied."

Liu Yifei's voice was exhausted, and she only talked to people close to her.

"Are the short stories about college students' campus life?"

"Yeah, short story, within 20 minutes."

"That's simple, I'll write one for you tonight! Make sure your teacher is satisfied."

"Do you have time? I just reported that there are not many things. I have to go to evening self-study."

Although Liu Yifei believed that Chen Tianhong could write a good script, she was still afraid that Chen Tianhong would be too tired.

"It's okay, it won't take much time."

Chen Tianhong said indifferently. Once the brain plug-in was opened, he didn't have to think at all. He just needed to find a good short drama code, and it would never last for an hour.

Next, they chatted for a few more words and agreed to meet on the weekend, so Liu Yifei continued to be busy with rehearsals.

As soon as the phone hung up, Chen Tianhong's phone ringing rang again, it was from his teacher Cao Xingkui.

"Tianhong, have you arrived at Kyoto University?"

"Well, teacher, I've arrived and I've reported it. I'm chatting with my roommates in the dormitory."

"You have nothing to do in the afternoon, right?"

"It should be fine. We only go to evening self-study in the evening and have class meetings."

"That happens. In the afternoon, you go to the School of Physics and find Ji Taidong, the Dean of the School of Physics. I have agreed with him that you will take time to learn physics from him every week."

"OK."

Chen Tianhong agreed to let him go and get it now, as long as he doesn't stay in the dormitory.

Besides, it is a good thing to know a dean, and learning physics knowledge is extremely beneficial to his own development. It just so happened that the literary works competition was about to begin, so he would not have to worry about writing science fiction novels at that time.

The phone hung up, and before Chen Tianhong could walk out of the balcony, the phone rang again, Li Man's.

"Tianhong, have you arrived in Kyoto?"

"Here. Sister Man."

"Do you have time at noon? I want to invite you to have a meal with your uncle and aunt. Just be near your school, so it will be convenient to go back to school at that time."

"Well, it may not work at noon, we made an appointment with someone."

"That night? Night?"

"Tonight, I'll ask my parents later and I'll reply you later."

Chen Tianhong thought about it and replied.

He knew that Li Man was kind, but it depends on his parents' intentions. They wanted to have dinner with Xiao Guojian at noon, and there might be arrangements in the evening.

"Why do you feel like you're very busy today?"

Chen Tianhong muttered.

The phone continued to ring. This time it was Feng Zijie's turn.

"Tianhong."

"Old Feng, I'm in Kyoto and I've finished reporting."

Chen Tianhong answered directly.

"Haha, you boy, I haven't even asked. That's right. I'm in Kyoto too. Do you have time in the afternoon? Mr. Zhao wants to see you."

Hearing Feng Zijie's words, Chen Tianhong originally wanted to say that he had no time, but when he heard that Mr. Zhao wanted to see him, Chen Tianhong could not refuse.

He naturally knew who Mr. Zhao was in Feng Zijie's mouth. In fact, Chen Tianhong was also very curious about Zhao Shousheng. He really wanted to meet the "martial arts master" in this world.

He read the book "Kunlun", which can be said to be the pinnacle of the old school martial arts. On the Earth in his previous life, it can be said to be a masterpiece.

"Mr. Xingfeng, please send me the location."

Chen Tian decided to meet Mr. Zhao first, and then go back to meet the dean of the School of Physics. After all, they are all at Kyoto University, which is more convenient.

The phone finally calmed down and no one called again.

Chen Tianhong breathed a sigh of relief. He calculated the time in his mind and felt that he could still be busy.

After walking out of the balcony, he found that there was an extra person in the dormitory. He was a woman about thirty years old. She was of medium figure, slightly fat, very fair skin, and not stunning appearance. However, she looked at people with a very friendly look.

After seeing Chen Tianhong, the woman showed a gentle smile on her face and took the initiative to walk forward a few steps.

"You are Chen Tianhong! I am the counselor of Huaxia Literature Class 1, Tang Huiru."

"Hello, Teacher Tang!"

Chen Tianhong immediately responded politely.

The major he applied for was Chinese Literature, and the class was Class 1. It can be said that Tang Huiru was his counselor.

Tang Huiru looked at the most famous student in the class she taught, and her smile continued to dimly said.

"Class Chen Tianhong, I have a task to hand over to you. At noon tomorrow, the school leaders decided to ask you to speak on behalf of the new students of this class. You must prepare your speech. I think you should not need the teacher's help."

"No, no. Teacher Tang, don't worry, Tianhong can handle it himself, right, Tianhong."

My mother Liu Yanhong agreed to her son. In her opinion, this is a very obvious thing. Besides, her son is a writer, so how difficult is it to write a speech?

Chen Tianhong smiled bitterly. If possible, he really wanted the teacher to write for him and add some things he wanted to say.

It’s not that he doesn’t want to write, but that he is really busy today.

"No problem, no problem, it's Teacher Tang. I'm going to take a leave in the afternoon and go out."

Since the counselor was there, Chen Tianhong decided to tell me about the afternoon meeting Zhao Shousheng, the school’s rules and regulations. It’s still necessary to leave.

"Go outside the school? What's the matter!"

Tang Huiru asked.

"Tianhong, the school leaders will meet you in the afternoon. You have nothing to do, so don't go out first."

This was said by Xiao Guojian.

Chen Zhide and Liu Yanhong also looked at their son.

"The school leader has another life! Sure enough, excellent people are always busy."

Chen Tianhong said self-deprecatingly in his heart.

"It's Mr. Zhao Shousheng who wants to see me"

As soon as Chen Tianhong finished speaking, a roar like thunder erupted in the dormitory.

"What! Mr. Zhao! Zhao Kunlun!"

No need to think that Gao Wanfeng is the only one who can make such a sound.

The people in the room were shocked for more than ten seconds before they could react

Xiao Guojian's expression was complicated, Tang Huiru smiled, Yu Zhijie and his father began to push their glasses up again, their eyes wide open, and Ximen Xue was a little confused.

As for Chen Zhide and Liu Yanhong, there is only pride on their faces.

"Then go! Let's see Mr. Zhao first and it's important."

(End of this chapter)