After rebirth, I became a great writer

Chapter 20 I really wrote it

As soon as Chen Tianhong returned home from school, he saw a full table of good dishes.

Seeing her mother Liu Yanhong was still busy in the kitchen, Chen Tianhong secretly squeezed a piece of braised pork and put it in her mouth.

"The entrance is slippery, and the old king's furnace is boiling slowly. My mother's craft is getting better and better."

The red roast meat ate Chen Tianhong, shook his head and thought about two sentences of oil poems. He reached out and wanted to continue to get it. Liu Yanhong, who came out of the kitchen, stopped it.

"Stop your hands, wait for it to eat again. Your dad will come back. This is for him. He didn't come back for a few days. He must not eat well to eat outside."

Dad is back today? It seems that the work of the game has been completed.

Chen Tianhong wanted to speak, saying that he was very hard to write a manuscript recently. At this time, the door was opened, and his father Chen Zhide came back.

Chen Zhide was squeezed a lot compared to the previous few days. This was tired for a few days in a row for a few days in a row, but the mental state looked okay.

Liu Yanhong patted the dust on his body for Chen Zhide, and handed the hot towels, and his face was full of distress.

"Lao Chen, let's not go next time, you see you are tired. Haven't you eaten it in the past two days? I made you your favorite food for you, come and try it."

Chen Zhide didn't rush to eat. He wiped his face with a hot towel and lowered his head to Chen Tianhong: "Tianhong, this time your school can be famous!"

Hearing this sentence, Chen Tianhong, who was stealing vegetables, was excited, and I went, did I have to expose my identity? Zhenhua Middle School in this world also began to be famous all over the country.

The idea of ​​dispelting this.

"What is the name?" Liu Yanhong asked curiously, and she was very concerned about her son's school.

"In this competition, Professor Wen found a good article and has been reported to the Municipal Writers Association. People on the side of the Municipal Writers Association also recognize it.

I can enter the top ten across the country. This article was written by students from Zhenhua Middle School. Unfortunately, the manuscript was sent to the Municipal Association on the same day. Only a few teachers in 12 groups had read it. "

Chen Zhide sighed, and everyone wants to appreciate good articles. In fact, there is still a saying that Chen Zhide did not say.

Find a student who wrote this article.

Now I only know that this student is from Zhenhua Middle School. The specific name must wait for the Provincial Writers Association to pass through, and when I report to the headquarters to work, I can go to the school to check.

"Lao Chen, what's an article, talk about it." Liu Yanhong was interested in. During the period, she also glanced at Chen Tianhong, sighed secretly, and her son talked about writing novels every day. If she could be like this student, it would be fine.

"It is a novel, a science fiction novel, the name is" Rural Teacher ". Unfortunately, I didn’t see it, but I just heard the teachers saying a few mouthfuls."

"Dad, this was written by me."

"What?"

Chen Zhide did not hear clearly, no, I didn't dare to believe it. I didn't dare to believe it.

"Son, are you really written? You can't coax your mother."

Liu Yanhong heard it very clearly. She was surprised and surprised in her eyes, doubt, and dare not believe it.

"I really wrote it. You forgot that my dad told me that he taught in Lingnan that day, and said that it was easier to pass the enthusiasm of teachers and education, so I wrote this" Rural Teacher ". I

I still remember that you told me what you taught before, dad, I wrote it by you as a prototype. "

Listening to Dad's meaning "Rural Teachers" will be famous in the country, and it will be a fire. At that time, there will be many people who ask him about what he creates. Let's push out his dad as a shield.

With this opportunity, dad can realize the dream of the associate professor's title.

Another thing is that the physical knowledge involved in the novel may be a bit not enough to store the knowledge of a student. Otherwise, it is cheaper.

Chen Tianhong has begun thinking about the follow -up.

When he was reminded by his son, Chen Zhide remembered. He no longer doubted. The excited old tears said three good consecutive good, and the son was out of interest!

The night was already deep, Chen Tianhong was lying on the bed for a long time and couldn't fall asleep. The father and mother did not eat later, and both of them cried with him.

Mom Liu Yanhong cried even if she was crying. Dad Chen Zhide, a big man, was also crying with water, making Chen Tianhong sour.

In the memory of his world, Dad Chen Zhide has always been a loving father. Although his mother said he would say, it hurts him in his bones.

In the past, Chen Tianhong didn't like to learn, so he liked to read novels, and his academic performance was not good. Although his parents did not blame him, he must be disappointed, so this time he was so excited when he saw him.

Without that parents do not expect their children, they may see their children's talents, which is the happiest thing for them.

At the dinner table today, Chen Tianhong secretly vowed that in the future, he must not worry about his parents. He must also work hard to work hard to let them proud of themselves.

As for the things he made a lot of money on the Internet, Chen Tianhong hasn't said it. There are too many surprises, and he is afraid that his parents can't bear it.

Thinking of the novel, I can't sleep now. How about "Hello Old Time" on the website? And Li Man's review post from the writer forum last time, just take time to see it today.

After finishing the manuscript of the "Rural Teacher", Chen Tianhong restored "Hello Old Time" for a day.

The lowest is more than a day, and it will explode from time to time. There is no way to force more. Now the novel has also reached 150,000 words, and it is officially launched.

After these two works, the author Hongwen's reputation is getting bigger and bigger. Many people who love youthful literature have gradually become his fans, and there are many girls.

Especially "Hello Old Time" is a history of a girl from childhood to large, which is more likely to allow female readers to substitute into it.

First logged in to the Qing Orange Literature Network to read the data of the novel and found that "both redemption and regrettable" big guy today has rewarded again. Since the recovery and update, this local tyrant fans have a million reward a day.

Money is to urge more.

"Hurry up and update, I want to see the life in high school quickly."

Every time I play a reward, it is this sentence. The plot in the novel only came to junior high school. Although the plot in front of this big man is also good, but with his special experience, he still looks forward to high school.

Then, then

Chen Tianhong got up helplessly and added a chapter to the big man.

After the addition, he continued to read the comment area and found that everyone's expectations for this book are quite high. Moreover, some stayingists are still talking about the plot of the novel.

Chen Tianhong turned to the Literature Forum and went to the post that Li Man had always said. As soon as he entered the forum to choose youth literature, it was easy to see the post written by Lin Daozhi.

"" Fate Fanghua "vs" Hello Old Time ""

"Fang Fanghua" tells the story of the male and female protagonists who met in high school, and worked with the youthful years. At present, the novel has been written to 160,000 words, and the timeline is still in high school. Overall love still guides the entire novel as the main line.

The plot direction.

It can be seen that the West MG has made a lot of effort to this work. He did not write the story of the male lead as the main male lead as the upper part. This time it is a fixed male and female lead. This advantage is that it is easier to portray the character of the characters.

The emotional entanglement between the protagonists is still the conflict of the third party supporting opponent. From the beginning to the present, the plot has been singing all the way. It can be described as cool and abused. I can only say that it is enjoyable to watch.

Start the score now.

Writing: 10 points (Wushu Western MG is still excellent, as always,)

Story plot: 9 points (cooling points and abuse points are much better than the above)

Character portrayal: 8 points (the character image is very vivid, especially like the high cold of the female lead))

Innovation genre (style): 7 points (still the mainstream style of youth literature, there is no new innovation)

Influence: 8 points (the new book has not been finished, you can only talk from the novel data, you can read the website data for details)

The total score of "Fanghua" is 10+9+9+7+8 = 43 points

"" Hello Old Time "This work mainly tells the story of the heroine Yu Zhouzhou's growth. The timeline of the novel is from the kindergarten. At present, it has come to junior high school. Because the author Hongwen said that this is the story of Zhenhua Middle School, the story of Zhenhua Middle School continues.

There must be a high school story in the back, blindly guessing that it might be the climax of the novel at that time.

This book has the same style as the upper part at present, but the understanding of growth and life is much stronger than the upper part. I think many female readers should be deeply appreciated. After reading this book

Is it a boy? His emotion is too delicate.

The novel is only updated to 150,000 words, and I do n’t explain it.

Writing: 9 points (fresh writing)

Story plot: 8 points (the current storyline is cool and abuse is worse than "Fang Hua Hua")

Character portrayal: 9 points (the portrayal of the heroine is better than the upper part, but the male lead, I haven't seen it yet, I don’t know if it is Chen eucalyptus or Lin Yang or Benben

Innovation genre (style): 8 points (this is not so profound than the upper part, mainly the story of growth, incomplete counting innovation)

Influence: 8 points (the new book has not finished the book, I can only speak from the novel data, but I want to say

The total score of "Hello Old Time" is 9+8+9+8+8 = 42 points

The end result is that "Hello Old Time" is a point behind "Fang Fanghua". I think this is nothing. After all, the climax of "Hello Old Time" has not yet arrived.

Of course, if "Fang Hua Hua" can be maintained, it may be able to preserve this faint advantage. I want to say that youth novels are not like martial arts, and the kind of fantasy can always exist.

Bar.

Another thing to tell you, the previous work of the two, the influence of "The Best of Us" has been overtaken, so the scores of the two books I mentioned last time are flat, and now it is "the best us"

The score is higher than "Dream Chasing Youth".

Let's declare that it is purely personal opinion. Fans on both sides do not like it.

Chen Tianhong finished reading the post here, in general, it is very fair. As for a point behind, Chen Tianhong does not worry about it. In the future, everyone will understand which book is the real youth novel.

However, the post in the post is not as martial arts, and the fantasy um, can he consider double opening. Write martial arts in this world? Or fantasy?

(This chapter is finished)