After rebirth, I became a great writer

Chapter 72 I can only give two points

Jinling Hengdu Cinema.

A beautiful girl with exquisite appearance attracted the attention of many male compatriots.

Even if a girl wears a bloated down jacket, her beauty cannot be concealed. Especially her side face gives people a stunning feeling that charms all living beings.

It's a pity that most of the people who come to the cinema to watch movies are couples. Even if these male compatriots want to strike up a conversation, they have to take care of their girlfriends around them.

Moreover, this beautiful girl was holding two cups of milk tea in her hand, staring at the elevator with her big beautiful eyes, looking forward to it. It was obvious that she was waiting for someone.

And this girl was none other than Liu Yifei. Today she and Chen Tianhong made an appointment to watch a movie. Liu Yifei came 10 minutes early, and Chen Tianhong had just gotten on the elevator.

"When I choose a movie to watch, I usually choose a sweet love movie when watching it with girls, but the relationship between Yifei and I no longer needs this kind of love movie to hint at. I should choose a movie that can better enhance the relationship.

Movies. Choose whatever you want.”

Chen Tianhong was thinking in his mind, and soon the elevator dinged, signaling the arrival.

As soon as he stepped out of the elevator, he saw Liu Yifei waiting for him at the ticket office, holding a cup of milk tea in each hand. When he saw himself, an intoxicating smile instantly broke out on his face.

"Milk Tea Sister? No. Much prettier than Milk Tea Sister."

Chen Tianhong muttered and walked forward quickly, "Yifei, why did you arrive early? You didn't wait too long, right?"

"No, I just arrived. Someone has to come first, hehe, give me hot milk tea."

Liu Yifei raised her little face, her misty eyes filled with joy.

She put the milk tea into Chen Tianhong's hand. During the process, her fingers touched Chen Tianhong's palm, and she immediately shrank back as if she was frightened.

Seeing Liu Yifei's actions, Chen Tianhong finally knew what movie to choose and watch today.

You must choose someone with whom you can have close contact. You must not make Yifei so shy anymore.

"What movie are we watching?"

Chen Tianhong looked at the LED screen displaying movie information on the service desk and pretended to look at it carefully. In fact, he had already made a choice in his mind.

"It's all fine. Otherwise, let's choose a short one. Will you have to update the novel later? Humph, that Xiang Anran is really annoying."

At the end of the sentence, Liu Yifei puffed up her face and became a little angry.

Chen Tianhong and Xiang Anran were competing in the past two days, and Liu Yifei didn't want Chen Tianhong to challenge. When she learned the news, she made a special call.

It wasn't that she was afraid that Chen Tianhong would lose to Xiang Anran, but that she felt distressed. Liu Yifei was worried that Chen Tianhong would have to stay up late again, which would be too harmful to the body.

"It's okay. I have one day today. I coded the manuscript of the novel yesterday and posted it before I came here. I only update 10,000 to 20,000 words every day, so there is not much pressure. I want to spend our two-person world with you.

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This time when I competed with Xiang Anran, the pressure on updates was basically zero. Chen Tianhong also updated according to the previous rhythm at the beginning. In addition to uploading 5,000 words on the first day, he directly updated 30,000 words on the second day.

Then he discovered that Xiang Anran had updated 2,000 words in one day, yes, 2,000 words in a whole day, and he still had to add punctuation marks.

But for this kind of update that is worse than salted fish, no one said anything on the Internet. Readers even explained to Xiang Anran that it would be fine if the article was updated slowly, as long as it was not interrupted.

This made Chen Tianhong unable to adapt to this rhythm for a while. Even his fans left messages saying that he should write well, not update so much, conceive well and polish more.

Even the fans of "Shadow" stopped shouting for updates and asked him to prepare for "Swordsman in the Snow".

What's interesting is that the original words of fans of "Zhetian" are "Boss, please help your friends more. Update "Zhetian" if it can be updated. If it cannot be updated, you can stop updating it for a while."

When he first saw the fan's message, Chen Tianhong was confused for a while, my friend? What kind of friend am I?

After reacting, he sighed: The fans in this world are so cute, and the performances that should be coordinated are really coordinated!

Hearing Chen Tianhong's words about "two people's world", Liu Yifei blushed again. If she had said this before, she would have spat, but now she feels quite sweet.

"How about we watch this!"

Chen Tianhong pointed to the second movie message on the LED screen and said.

"'Don't Look Back at Midnight', this is a horror movie!"

Liu Yifei read out the movie title, and she hesitated a little. Shouldn't the two of them watch some sweet movies on their date? Why did Tianhong choose to watch horror movies? Maybe he likes them better.

This is what Liu Yifei thinks in her heart.

"Okay, I'll listen to you."

"Beauty, help me get two tickets for "Don't Look Back at Midnight"."

Seeing that Liu Yifei agreed, Chen Tianhong showed a smile of successful conspiracy on his face. He had already imagined the scene of Liu Yifei curling up in his arms out of fear.

The movie ticket seller was a young lady. When she heard that Chen Tianhong wanted to buy tickets for a horror movie, she then looked at the obedient Liu Yifei standing next to him.

This young lady is in a bad mood, and the man is not a good thing.

"Aren't you thinking about it? This movie is quite scary."

The young lady did not immediately give Chen Tianhong a ticket. Instead, she asked Liu Yifei. She specially emphasized the word scary.

"If we don't change it, we'll just look at this."

Liu Yifei said it without any hesitation, and she also took out the cash from her wallet and handed it to the conductor.

"Give me money!"

The conductor did not accept Liu Yifei's money, but turned to Chen Tianhong and said.

Chen Tianhong took out the money and realized that this young lady must have thought that he was plotting against Liu Yifei.

While Chen Tianhong and Liu Yifei were watching a movie, there was a debate on the literary forum because of the PK between Xiang Anran and Chen Tianhong.

In fact, when Chen Tianhong first posted the first chapter, many people already posted comments about "Ask the Immortal" and "Swordsman in the Snow".

But so far, none of the comments on the posts have been recognized, and even the comment posts by some great writers on Xianxia are also controversial.

However, regarding the controversy over the reviews of these two books, today there was finally a review post that won the approval of almost everyone.

This is because the person who posted this post is an insider of the literary forum, to be precise, he is a very famous writer.

His ID on the literary forum is Bai Yu, and the owner of this ID is none other than Feng Zijie, one of the four great gods in the martial arts world.

With this ID alone, no one will question the value of this post.

The name of the post is "A brief description of the culture of immortals, and by the way, I will comment on "Ask the Immortal" and "The Fighting Sword in the Snow"."

"Our literary forum has been very lively recently! In fact, I already knew that the author of "Ask the Immortal" was Xiang Anran. I was the one who invited him on behalf of the Writers Association. As for the reason why Xiang Anran didn't join later, I won't tell you. I hope

This young man should pay more attention to his personal life.

Let me briefly talk about Xianxia culture first. As we all know, Xianxia novels are more illusory and ethereal than traditional martial arts novels. In Xianxia works, gods, immortals, humans, demons, demons, and ghosts often appear.

The content of current Xianxia novels is relatively unreal. The characters in the books basically fight monsters and upgrade. In order to become immortals, even the fight scenes involve throwing magic weapons at each other. The writing style tends to be in vernacular, which is quite suitable for public reading.

But such novels have no inner spirit, and people may forget about them after a while. However, real fairy tale culture novels must be thoughtful.

However, the ideas in works about immortals have always been very vague, unlike martial arts novels which have a relatively mature school of thought from very early on.

Xianxia culture has not existed until modern times. The predecessors used the Taoist theory of birth and immortality, supplemented it with metaphysics and Tai Chi, and then learned from the chivalrous ways in martial arts novels. Only then did they inject soul into Xianxia novels.

The success of the novel "Ask the Immortal" is that it draws on the chivalry in martial arts and combines it with some Taoist ideas of monasticism. The writing style is not simple prose, which is different from the current mainstream fairy tale novels, so everyone is separated from it.

I still remember it after a long time.

As I get older, I tend to be a bit verbose. Now let me talk about the two books "Ask the Immortal" and "The Fighting Sword in the Snow".

I won’t talk about data, because it’s not fair to compare data. “Ask the Immortal” already has 500,000 words and is very well-known in the Xianxia circle. “Swordsman in the Snow” currently only has 50,000 words. The data is definitely not comparable.

Up.

I will give my opinion based on the content quality of the two books so far.

Let’s talk about “Ask the Immortal” first. As for the writing skills, Xiang Anran’s writing skills are not inferior to those of us old guys.

The main line of the novel is the protagonist Ye Liufeng's path to immortality, which is different from other fairy novels in terms of fighting monsters and upgrading. Although there are fights, it is also mixed with the protagonist's thinking about his own path to immortality, and his questioning and tempering in the world of mortals.

The chivalrous spirit in it is still borrowed from martial arts novels. Although there are some new things, it does not create a new genre. It is still the routine of classical fairy tales. But it is undeniable that Xiang Anran still wrote the main idea of ​​fairy tale culture.

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I currently rate this book an 8 out of 10. I will review and rate it again after the second half of the novel is updated.

Now let’s talk about "The Fighting Swordsman in the Snow". The author of this book goes by the pseudonym of the Eunuch Chief Manager. But I want everyone to know who this is, but I have not acknowledged it, so I will call him by this pen name.

To be honest, I don’t understand why this book is called this. If a martial arts novel is called this, it would be understandable, but a fairy tale novel is not suitable.

The author's writing style is quite good, and the sentences are sonorous and powerful. Compared with ordinary white prose, the language in the book is more literary and has a certain aesthetic feeling.

Although it is worse than Xiang Anran, it is only tens of thousands of words. If it can be maintained in the future, there will be no difference. After all, the more words, the higher the test of the author's skills.

I really haven’t figured out the main plot of the book yet. The protagonist should be Xu Fengnian, the prince of Northern Liang. I believe many readers are not used to this protagonist. He is a typical playboy. In our modern terms, he is a prodigal. The protagonist has such an image.

, the opening chapter can dissuade many people.

However, I read it carefully and found that there are still some foreshadowings in the previous chapters. The protagonist should be hiding his power and biding his time. For more details, I still need to continue reading. The word count is still too few.

The main line of this book is not clear at present. It is not a fairy novel, nor a martial arts novel, and it has no main theme.

At present, I can only give 2 points, 1 point for the writing style, and 1 point for the author's impression.

(End of chapter)