After rebirth, I became a great writer

Chapter 74 The first master showdown in the snow

Qingfeng Liudao looked at Bai Yu and Feng Zijie's review post on the literary forum. He scored 2 points to 8 points. This was really hard for him to accept. He wanted to say a few words for "Swordsman in the Snow", but after thinking about it, he really couldn't think of it.

There is no good language.

So he re-read the 11 published chapters of "Swordsman in the Snow" several times, trying to find the highlights.

However, in the end, he found that apart from the good writing and the characterization of the characters, there was really no other highlight.

To be honest, if I hadn't known that this book was written by Hongwen, these few chapters alone would have persuaded him to quit. This also means that the review post is correct.

"Did Hongwen simply pursue the writing style and fail to conceive the plot of the novel? But in this way, no matter how good the writing style is, "Swordsman in the Snow" will not be popular without quality, let alone "Ask the Immortal".

It was a competition. Alas, maybe our expectations of him were too high."

The breeze was blowing in the willow and the two of them closed the computer and stopped reading the posts on the literary forum. Out of sight, out of mind.

There are many people who have the same idea as him, and most of them are fans of "Shadow". Everyone wants to say something praising for "The Snow", but the fact is that for now, "The Snow"

The quality is really not comparable to "Ask the Immortal"!

"Mom, I'm back! Don't make me dinner. I ate it out."

Chen Tianhong returned home and shouted to his mother Liu Yanhong who was cooking in the kitchen.

"You kid, I'll have dinner ready right away. Why don't you just watch a movie? Why are you back so late?"

Liu Yanhong walked out of the kitchen and said to her son dissatisfied.

"After the movie, we went shopping. Mom, here, my daughter-in-law picked something for you."

Chen Tianhong handed the small bag in his hand to his mother.

"The name of the jewelry store? The jewelry you bought?"

Liu Yanhong was surprised when she saw the five large golden characters on the bag.

She carefully opened the packaging box in the bag, and a green jade bracelet came into view.

"Emerald bracelet!"

When Liu Yanhong saw the bracelet, she shouted in surprise and then closed the box.

"Tianhong, what kind of family does this girl belong to? They give you such a valuable thing right away. Mom can't take it, so she needs to take it back."

Although Chen Tianhong handed over half of the royalties to his family, which was a large amount, his family's life was not luxurious because of the living habits he had developed over a long period of time.

In Liu Yanhong's words, it is better to save the money and wait for it to be used to marry Chen Tianhong in the future.

As for this jade bracelet, it looks like it costs tens of thousands of dollars. I just accepted the pie from that girl last time, but I can't accept this bracelet at all.

Seeing the serious look on his mother's face, Chen Tianhong

He had no choice but to say: "Mom, although she chose this, I paid for it! Just feel free to take it with you."

"How much did you spend? Where did you get the money? Didn't you pay all your royalties? You kid also hid something."

Chen Tianhong suddenly felt that buying a bracelet for his mother was a mistake.

"Dad, Mom has something to do with you."

After Chen Tianhong shouted loudly towards the study, he slipped back directly to his bedroom, entered the room and locked the door with unusual skill.

"What's wrong? Yan Hong? What do you want from me? I'm reading a book."

Chen Zhide came out confused. When he saw his wife's eyebrows raised, he felt a little uneasy. He probably didn't do anything.

"Chen Zhide, please take care of your son. He actually hides his private money. Are you hiding it too? I think he must have learned this from you."

"Absolutely no private money! Where can I have private money?"

Chen Zhide felt a little guilty. There was indeed private money hidden in a thick book in his study.

"Yan Hong. My son's current income is not all from royalties. Last time, his novels were all adapted into TV series. There are also copyright fees for this. Besides, a man can't live without money, so don't worry about it."

"It's not that I want his money. It's just this brat who spends money randomly. You see, he bought me an jade bracelet, which costs tens of thousands of dollars. Do you think he's a little lost now? How can he spend such money?

of."

Liu Yanhong opened the boutique box and carefully put the jade bracelet on her right wrist, admiring it while replying.

"Did your son buy it for you? Brat. Why doesn't he want to buy a gift for his dad? I even fell in love with a watch some time ago."

Looking at the delicate jade bracelet on his wife's wrist, Chen Zhide felt sour in his heart. Maybe he should have had another daughter in the first place. A daughter is his father's little cotton-padded jacket.

"Huh? What did you mean by your last sentence just now, Old Chen? A man can't live without money? Are you dissatisfied that I gave you less living expenses?"

Liu Yanhong suddenly remembered something and scratched her eyes at her husband.

"Absolutely not. The living allowance you gave me is enough. That's enough."

When Chen Tianhong returned to the bedroom, he opened the literary forum. He planned to see what the online reviews of "Swordsman in the Snow" were.

When he saw that Bai Yu and Feng Zijie's review post was only given 2 points, Chen Tianhong's mouth twitched.

"It's too much!"

Although the early game in Xue Zhong didn't start out as well as "Shading the Sky", the main plot was even a little unclear, and the protagonist was not likable at the beginning. But I won't give it 2 points, and even 1 point.

Give yourself points for your impression.

"It seems that I have to write to the mid-term as soon as possible, otherwise this score will be too disappointing to the fans."

The excitement of "Swordsman in the Snow" begins in the middle period. Generally, readers who can persist through the middle period will definitely fall in love with this book.

Then Chen Tianhong opened the word document and added an update today.

"Aunt Zhang, why is there a bottle of wine here? I don't drink at night."

Miao Mingjie said dissatisfiedly when he saw that there was a bottle of white wine on the dining table and even a small wine glass was prepared for him.

"Boss, didn't you tell me? I will prepare a bottle of wine for every meal from now on."

The nanny felt a little aggrieved.

Hearing this, Miao Mingjie was startled. Yes, he said this a few days ago. It was influenced by Hongwen's sentence "I have a pot of wine, which can comfort my life", and Hongwen said that he should watch "In the Snow"

"The Fighting Swordsman" is better if it is paired with wine.

As a result, these updated chapters in the book not only made Miao Mingjie drink happily, he even wanted to throw the bottle at Hongwen's face. What kind of fairy tale novel was this written? There is nothing praiseworthy except for the writing style.

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"Take the wine down and don't bring it up again during dinner."

The nanny hurriedly stepped forward and took the drink away.

"Let's take a look at "Shading the Sky". I wonder if it has been updated today."

Miao Mingjie has now developed a habit of reading novels while eating.

When he took out his mobile phone and opened the bookshelf, he found that "Shading the Sky" had not been updated. Instead, "The Fighting Swordsman in the Snow" had a few more chapters updated. After hesitation, Miao Mingjie clicked on the latest chapter.

"Hongwen, can you give me some help? I'll read the last few chapters. If it doesn't work, I really have to cancel the collection."

Chapter 12 There is Lao Kui at the bottom of the lake

Xu Fengnian was holding his breath while suspended at the bottom of the water. The scene in front of him was enough to be included in any fantasy novel that would stun the people in the city: a "Water Chief" who was more than a foot tall was sitting cross-legged in the mud, with a head of white hair that looked like water plants.

Shui Kui, who was slowly swaying and meditating with his eyes closed, had a strong body. Through the light emitted by the luminous pearl the size of a goose egg, it was vaguely visible that Shui Kui's left hand and feet were imprisoned by three arm-thick iron chains. Three stones weighing several dozen were poured into the ends of the chains.

A thousand-pound iron ball.

Is there any prison in the world that is more incredible and cruel at the same time?

Shui Kui opened his eyes and looked at the only living person he could see in more than ten years without any emotion.

"It's interesting. It finally feels like a fairy novel. Is this a ghost?"

Miao Mingjie became interested in the sequel of this novel for the first time, and then he saw that the old man was not a ghost, but a martial arts master.

Then read the next chapter.

Chapter 13: Lao Kui with a knife, Lao Huang with a box on his back

I saw that the old Kui didn't pay any attention to the few slaves guarding the pavilion. He dared to look around the room and saw that there were few opponents that he could take seriously. He just shouted: "Then Huang Laojiu, come out and die!"

The groom, who was scolded by Lao Kui as "Huang Laojiu" and Li Yishan as "Jian Jiuhuang", smiled slightly. At that moment, Xu Fengnian's eyes seemed to be shaken. Lao Huang was no longer naive and stupid, replaced by a kind of

I couldn't explain the unexplained meaning, I just felt that the old servant who was as still as a mountain was actually more arrogant than the old guy with the sword.

"Is it possible that this toothless and somewhat wretched groom turned out to be a master? This contrast is a bit unacceptable."

Miao Mingjie now understood that the groom beside the protagonist should be a hidden master.

No one could see how Old Huang acted, but the wooden box trembled like a dragon's roar, buzzing, not harsh, but shocking.

"Sword One."

A hole was opened at the upper end of the rosewood box, and a long sword came out.

Dazhu Guo, who stood up on the top of the mountain, and Li Yishan, who was in the Tingchao Pavilion, said at the same time: "Sword One, Dragon Snake.

Dazhuguo forgot to drink, held the wine glass, and sighed: "Sword Two."

Listening to Li Yishan in the Chao Pavilion slowly spit out two words: "Bingdilian."

The two people on the mountainside clearly had a tacit understanding.

One sword becomes two swords, two swords become three swords.

"Sword Three."

"Three pounds."

The three swords were already full of sword light, covering the world.

Lao Kui with two swords, Lao Huang with three swords.

He is simply half god and half immortal.

Xu Fengnian sat down on the boat and said with a silly smile: "It deserves a reward, it's all a fucking top-notch job!"

"Holy crap! Sword Immortal, this is the Sword Immortal! This paragraph is so well written! This is the scene of a duel between masters, rather than throwing magic weapons at each other.

No, these two are just martial arts masters, not immortals. What kind of battle between immortals will be like? I'm really looking forward to it! Haha, let me just say, the novel written by Hongwen must be interesting, yes, yes, just because of this scene

You have to be clear-headed, Aunt Zhang, bring me the wine."

As soon as the nanny put the wine back into the wine cabinet, she heard the boss shouting for wine again. This operation really made her lose her ability.

A lot of the specific fighting scenes have been deleted. I originally wanted to delete them again... but that would affect my friends who have never watched Snow in the Snow!

(End of chapter)