After rebirth, I became a great writer

Chapter 96 Two fingers cut off the river and Wang Chonglou

"Shu Tan, the description of this fighting scene is good. Although Xiang Anran is not a good character, he is still good at writing. Even a supporting character's martial arts is so high. I will top it up and give you a reward later."

Du Huaiwen was in a really good mood after reading the latest chapter of "Asking Immortals".

He is a senior fan of fairy tale novels. Although he is only in his twenties, he is already an old bookworm who has been reading online for 10 years.

He has been obsessed with reading novels since the first grade of junior high school. At first, his family would take care of him, for fear that reading novels would delay his studies. As a result, his test scores were consistently among the top three in the class, and later his family stopped caring about him.

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Of course, this is because his family background is very good, and he is the kind of person who can return home and inherit the family business after graduation even if he does not study well.

After watching "Ask the Immortal", Du Huaiwen found the ID of his brother on the TT account and sent him a message.

"Daoran, where have you been and when will you come back! The Chinese New Year is coming soon, and my brothers are still waiting for you to come back to get together."

The message was sent successfully, but he did not receive a reply after waiting for more than ten minutes.

"This Li Daoran, he ran into some ravine again."

The Li Daoran mentioned by Du Huaiwen is exactly the hiking enthusiast, the young man who really likes Lao Huang in "Swordsman in the Snow".

At this time, his cell phone rang, and the number displayed was Li Daoran's.

"I said of course, I sent you a message and you didn't reply, but you called me. What are you doing?"

"I'm trying to trick him, don't mention it. I only have 2G network here. I can only make phone calls. I can send and receive messages but not send them out. I'm going to be pissed off. I'm reading a novel and it's so exciting. Damn it.

Clicking on the next chapter will give me a message that it is buffering. It has been buffering for 10 minutes.

Huai Wen, let’s not talk about anything else. Please hurry up and help me read the latest chapter of “Swordsman in the Snow”, which is Chapter 22. I’m so anxious.”

""Swordsman in the Snow" has been updated? Didn't the author go to some annual youth literature writers ceremony and it's over?"

"Are you so behind on this news? It ended yesterday! There are many chapters updated today, but I can't read it. Don't bullshit me. My signal is not good. Did you hurry up and read it? Look

After that, call me to tell me the latest plot developments. I’ll change places first and see if there’s internet.”

"Okay, okay! Got it. Didn't you, kid, get angry some time ago and said you would never read this novel again? Tell me when Lao Huang will be resurrected and when will you read it. Hey."

Before Du Huaiwen finished speaking, he heard a busy tone coming from the phone.

Yes, it must be that Li Daoran's side is disconnected again.

"Forget it, let's help him take a look."

Du Huaiwen opened the APP of Qingcheng Literature Network on his mobile phone and found the novel "Swordsman in the Snow" on the bookshelf. Sure enough, he saw that more than ten chapters had been updated, with at least 30,000 to 40,000 words.

"If nothing else, Hongwen's updates have always been very impressive,"

In fact, Du Huaiwen didn't like "Swordsman in the Snow" very much. If Li Daoran hadn't always recommended it to him, and Hongwen's reputation was pretty good, he wouldn't have read this book at all.

However, he still likes "Shading the Sky" very much, because Du Huaiwen prefers to read novels with great momentum and high-quality protagonists and supporting characters.

As for "The Fighting Swordsman in the Snow", the only scene in "The Fighting Swordsman" between Old Huang and the old man at the bottom of the lake made him feel good. The originally expected scene of the fight between Old Huang and the No. 2 player in the world ended up being written down by the author in just a few hundred words.

I was brought up by him, and he also wrote Lao Huang to death. At that time, he was so angry that he went to the literary forum to post a rant.

In the next few days, Du Huaiwen was angry and stopped paying attention to "Swordsman in the Snow". On the contrary, Xiang Anran's "Ask the Immortal" has been very updated in the past two days. From the untouchable 2,000 words a day, to now it is 10,000 words every day, which makes

Du Huaiwen felt very comfortable watching it.

Open the chapter text of "Swordsmanship in the Snow".

Last time he saw that the protagonist Xu Fengnian started to practice martial arts because of the death of Lao Huang. The protagonist first learned the sword from Kuang Nu, the old Kui Chu at the bottom of the lake.

Endless.

The chapter updated this time is about the protagonist's father, Northern Liang King Xu Xiao, who saw his son learning martial arts and practicing swordsmanship at the risk of his life. This made him make up his mind and activated one of the backup plans that had been arranged for his son. He asked the protagonist Xu Fengnian to go to Wudang Mountain to find Wudang.

Headmaster Wang Chonglou.

This is the chapter Li Daoran wants to read. The name of this chapter is "The Old Way on the Mountain"

Seeing this name, Du Huaiwen became slightly interested.

Among the people who cannot be ignored in the novel, the Taoist can definitely be ranked number one. These are all hidden masters.

"I hope it can bring me a little surprise. It's best if there is a scene of masters fighting, otherwise it will be too boring."

Xu Xiao took out his hand, took a breath, and slowly said, "Then you go to Wudang, there is someone waiting for you."

Xu Fengnian said in surprise: "You don't want me to learn the Jade Pillar Mental Technique from Hong Xixiang? This is too shameless. I would rather be scolded by the old man and have his face sprayed with spittle than live under someone else's roof in Wudang Mountain.

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Dazhuguo smiled lightly and said: "How can a little Taoist named Hong have such ability? What you want to meet is Wudang leader Wang Chonglou."

Xu Fengnian was surprised and said: "That old Taoist priest who is hiding and practicing at Dahuang Tingguan? Did he really split the Canglan River with one finger of an immortal? This is too magical, unbelievable, unbelievable!"

"Huh? The immortal split a river with one finger?"

Du Huaiwen was originally reading the novel with his back on the chair. This sentence made him sit up a little straighter.

There is another reason why he doesn't like reading "Swordsman in the Snow". This novel is classified as a fairy novel, but none of the characters in the novel have the skills of a fairy.

Even though the description of the very awesome Jian Jiuhuang is very powerful, in Du Huaiwen's opinion, he has no immortal skills. Perhaps the second best in the world is the author's description, so it's okay not to mention it.

But this sentence gave him a picture, but he didn't know if it was true or if the author was just pretending. Hongwen was really good at this in this book. He said that a certain supporting character was awesome, but it turned out to be all lies.

The next part of the plot is that the protagonist Xu Fengnian went to Wudang Mountain and met the legendary Master Wang and the little Taoist priest Hong Xixiang who made him angry.

The old Taoist priest had kind eyes and said with a smile: "The world's swordsmanship is divided into standing swordsmanship, walking swordsmanship and seated swordsmanship. The difficulty increases gradually, but the final level of achievement is uncertain. I wonder whether His Highness, the Crown Prince, wants to learn standing swordsmanship or walking swordsmanship?"

Xu Fengnian said calmly: "I'll practice swordsmanship."

Hong Xixiang, who was making tea, rolled his eyes.

The old Taoist priest He Qi said: "Swordsmanship and swordsmanship, different paths lead to the same goal. They all follow the way of hand-to-hand combat where one person is worth a hundred. Like that Deng Tai'a, he just carried a peach blossom and said that it can be said to be a sword or a sword.

If you want to learn to stand on the sword, simply put, the sword is drawn out and stopped more often, and the sword power is faster and fiercer, like the roar of winter thunder. If it does not roar, it is already a blockbuster. Walking the sword and then walking again, continuous, like the surging summer rain and splashing ink.

Du Huaiwen just rolled his eyes when he saw this scene, what! This is a very nice thing to say, standing sword, walking sword and sitting sword. Why don't you write martial arts novels? You are a fairy. Do you know what a fairy sword is?

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Du Huaiwen is also an admirer of swordsmen. If the swords in "Swordsman in the Snow" were changed into swords, he would be even more interested.

Resisting the urge to complain, he continued reading.

Xu Fengnian hesitated for a moment and asked in a low voice: "Headmaster Wang really split the Canglan River with one finger?"

The old Taoist priest shook his head and said, "No."

Xu Fengnian felt relieved. Since the strong and seasoned Taoist in front of him was not ranked as good as Wang Xianzhi, it was always a good thing that he had weak magical powers.

"I fucking knew it! Hongwen, damn you, if I don't believe you anymore, I'm just a second-rate person! Every time I write about how awesome a person is in front of me, the result is either really fake, or I don't focus on the description, or else

Just write it to death. If I don’t want to serve you anymore, I won’t read it.”

Du Huaiwen was so angry that he almost dropped his phone.

The most annoying thing about reading novels is that the author has prepared a supporting character very well, only to find out after meeting that the supporting character was wasted, or else the protagonist suddenly dies after meeting him. This will completely shatter the reader's expectations.

This is like a short story about a girl who is worried that her breasts are not plump enough and is very hesitant to propose marriage to her boyfriend.

Her boyfriend asked her if she was as big as an orange.

The girl thought for a moment, nodded with certainty and said: Yes.

As a result, on the bridal night, the boyfriend rushed out of the bridal chamber and cursed: Damn it! Does kumquat count as an orange?

Du Huaiwen was so angry that he wanted to quit the text, and he wanted to remove "Swordsman in the Snow" from the bookshelf.

At this time, he suddenly found that the page prompt under his mobile phone screen was 10/11, which meant that there was still another page, and it was not less than one second. Du Huaiwen clicked on the mobile phone screen.

Then, this person started swearing.

"Hongwen, I XXXX your uncle!"

I saw only one sentence on the next page.

Hong Xixiang muttered: "It's two fingers."

I was stuck on the word count. There were too many dialogues in the original text, so I extracted it and changed it a little! Thank you everyone for your recommendation votes!

(End of chapter)