Hello, readers. Many people think that my plot is too toxic recently. I have also thought about it for a long time.

No matter what, the heroine did perjure the hero and killed him. Even if the hero has 1,000 reasons to forgive her, he also has 100,000 reasons not to forgive the heroine, because the heroine is the mastermind.

So I changed the opening plot a lot. For readers who have read the previous plot, I will summarize it here so as not to waste your time.

If you are a new reader, you can ignore it if you have just read this.

First, here is the introduction

[Single female lead, double rebirth, chasing husband to the crematorium, small reversal]

In the previous life, Gu Feng had a crush on Su Qingyan

One was the second son of the Gu family in name only, and the other was the noble and perfect eldest lady. Everyone knew that Su Qingyan had a loyal licker, but she didn't know, so she and her companions humiliated and trampled on him

Later, by chance, I got a chance to marry into the Su family. I thought life would get better and I didn't have to suffer so much

As a result, a few days later, Gu Feng was sent to court by her and perjured me to death. I asked "Why did you do this?"

She replied "You know what you did in your heart, and I have a lot of evidence in my hands, all proving that you are the murderer! You disappoint me so much"

Gu Feng knew very well that since he was not trusted, there was no need to explain.

I was reborn. In the previous life, Gu Feng recognized the true face of Su Qingyan. In this life, he no longer had any intersection with Su Qingyan. After revenge, he lived a peaceful life.

But no matter how Gu Feng tried to get rid of Su Qingyan, she was like a dog-skin plaster and couldn't be shaken off, until Gu Feng found that Su Qingyan was also reborn.

But Gu Feng still believed that it was Su Qingyan's false testimony that killed him. So he was prepared to stay away from her.

But he would be caught wherever he fled, even today.

"Remember his face, he will be my boyfriend and my husband in the future, whoever dares to bully him will wait for the revenge of my Su family!"

Gu Feng just shook her hand away and said, "Miss Su, I don't need it, leave it to others" and then left in style.

But Su Qingyan didn't give up, this was just the beginning.

You should have roughly understood it, I originally wrote it like this: Su Qingyan gave false testimony to kill Gu Feng in order to be with Gu Chen.

And now I have changed it to: Gu Chen gave Su Qingyan false testimony and Gu Chen was his childhood sweetheart and Gu Feng was just a son-in-law who married into the Su family.

So Su Qingyan chose to believe Gu Chen and thus killed Gu Feng. Later, after Gu Feng died, she looked back on the little things between them and Gu Feng's infinite tolerance for her and felt that Gu Feng was not such a person.

So she re-investigated the case and found many loopholes. She found that everything pointed to Gu Chen framing Gu Feng.

Some people may ask, since there are so many loopholes, why didn't Gu Feng say that he didn't kill the person himself? Let the court investigate the truth of the matter.

This is how I explain it. Gu Feng has no one to rely on except Su Qingyan. When Su Qingyan went to the prosecutor, Gu Feng had already given up. The only person close to him did not choose to believe him, so there is no need to explain.

You should have had this feeling, or your good friends, family, etc. misunderstood you and did not believe your words.

So the above is the general content after my revision. This will make the ending of forgiveness and non-forgiveness more reasonable. I also want to say that this idea is not my own. It is the idea of ​​the book friend who read my book in the comment area. I am very grateful to that book friend. I am also very grateful to the book friends who pointed out the problems of my novel. You can criticize me more and say more about where I wrote poorly. This is not nitpicking. This is the best way to improve my writing.

Thank you again for reading my novel. If you have any questions, please tell me. I will take time to read your comments every day and reply to your questions. Thank you.

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