After the immortal disappeared

Jiufang Tea Party-14

It's been a long time since I held a tea party. Today, I will talk to you about something worth two dollars.

In the past few days, from everyone's comments, chapters 1585-1589 are relatively satisfactory, while chapters 1590 and 1591 are indeed severely complained.

Don't say that the author doesn't analyze his own problems, right? Yes, yes.

Today, I will take these two chapters as examples to tell you about the design ideas of the battle in "Immortal".

The battle between Dong Rui and Cao Wendao focuses on two words:

Professional.

As an unpopular, niche and rare profession, the battle between demon puppet masters should certainly be very special.

One claims to be a master, the other claims to be a genius;

One is a professional, the other is a wild one;

One is successful, the other is a latecomer.

They all want to prove that they are the well-deserved Nanbowan, so in addition to the wonderful duel of demon puppets, they should also show a high-level competition in the same profession and the same track.

Compared with ordinary battles, this is a contest of another dimension.

Friends who have fought in World War II know that in addition to the heroic participation of soldiers from all sides, scientists in the military industry of each side are also constantly trying to crack the enemy's killing weapons and improve their own military weapons. It is difficult for ordinary people to participate in this top confrontation.

In this article, whoever first cracks the ideas, methods, and applications of the opponent's demon puppet master will take the initiative in the battle.

The idea of ​​solving the problem of an excellent student must be traceable and antelope hanging horns.

We can regard Xiao Dong as an expert in science and engineering. He must crack the opponent's demon puppet production and control strategy through keen observation, bold assumptions, and careful verification; conversely, Cao Wendao does the same thing to Xiao Dong.

Since it is a battle of upgraded dimensions, the rhythm must be different.

In the past and in the future, Dong Rui's victory over the enemy mostly depends on professional advantages, or professional differences; therefore, this opportunity for internal fighting is particularly valuable, and it is also a valuable window period to show Dong Rui's true fighting level.

Compared to a Bejia demon puppet master like Cao Wendao, Dong Rui is just a younger generation who is unknown.

So, how can a latecomer defeat a first-mover? Or, where exactly is the "advantage" of the latecomer advantage reflected?

It's these few words:

Internal core competitiveness.

In terms of the production process and means of demon puppets, Dong Rui may not be more advanced than Cao Wendao; but when it comes to the way of getting along with demon puppets, the way of controlling demon puppets, and the understanding and grasp of the battle rhythm itself, Dong Rui, who practices every day with He Lingchuan, is undoubtedly much better than Cao Wendao, who has studied hard all his life.

This is a process in which the advanced eliminates the backward and the latecomer defeats the first-mover. I personally think it is worth writing about.

On the other hand, since Dong Rui has surpassed Cao Wendao in core competitiveness, his growth and success are natural, the result of his own hard work, and not relying on the halo of the protagonist.

In this book, I hope that every important character around the protagonist can keep up with the protagonist's pace, make progress together, and shine their own light.

So some book friends complained about my watery writing, but they were actually complaining in the wrong direction. The real complaint might be that this author has too many inner dramas.

——Feng Xing Shui Yun Jian/Jiu Fang Ye, 2024.8.20