Let me simply write down my thoughts.

This novel will be very slow to develop, with a lot of daily content as a foreshadowing in the early stage.

In order to pursue rationality, adding daily routines will cause a feeling of procrastination when reading. However, if not added, it will cause a great tear in a person's feeling of being familiar with a brand new environment. Therefore, the three golden chapters require that at the very beginning

Even if I explain the information about cheats, occupations, etc. clearly, I can’t write it down.

A friend reminded me that the dialogue here feels like a translated film. In fact, it is because I first thought of the English dialogue, then translated it into sentences, and then adjusted the order, so it looks a bit like watching an American drama with subtitles. Regarding this point, I

There is no way to adjust it too much for the time being, because there will be a lot of dialogue like this in the future. If all were adjusted to Chinese speaking habits, I would feel that the dialogue and the image of the characters are severely separated. After all, everyone has watched too many American TV series now.

I am familiar with movies, so I should also be very familiar with the subtitles of American dramas and movies.

The issue of writing style is mainly due to the fact that I once wrote a few trivial scripts as a gunman. Now when I look back at the content I wrote, I also feel a bit embarrassed. It does not look like the style of online articles, but I have written a lot. What follows

Adjust slowly.

By the way, regarding the golden finger issue, I will put the arrangements for the golden finger after acquiring the police profession. Because I like revolvers, I set up a combination of the dark tower gunslinger's golden finger, revolver + mind's eye for the protagonist.

For a person who did not have any knowledge about firearms before time travel, it would be too deliberate to give a cheat code at the beginning. The key is that even if you have a cheat code, it will not be reflected at all before you get a gun. Put the cheat code on

Later, it would be more reasonable to activate the golden finger at the same time as the mandatory firearms training brought by the profession.

Finally, I will update some American police content related to my works from time to time, including how to become a police officer, police academy, POST committee, etc. If you are interested, you can check it out.

By the way, let’s open a book club group, 173344512, just join the group and send book titles.

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