It’s not without reason that Toru Kasugano was surprised.
Originally, he thought that”Love Metronome” was just a single-female protagonist novel describing the youthful love of high school students, focusing on the immaturity and beauty of first love, but by the second volume, the style had completely changed.
Just by looking at the outline, Toru Kasugano felt that his stomach began to hurt.
Isn’t this a typical White Album?
A bloody story between a man and two women, is there another complaint like”Why are you so skilled?”?
After reading the outline carefully, Toru Kasugano organized his words for a long time before carefully asking:”Senior, can you tell me why a character named Zhenwei is added to the second volume?”
“What’s wrong with that? If there are only Naoto and Sayuka, the plot will be very thin, right? If you add a character, wouldn’t it be easier for readers to be attracted by the entanglement between the three people?”
Hearing Kasumigaoka Utaha’s answer, Kasugano Toru really wanted to tear up the outline in his hand and throw it on the ground.
You are making a fuss!
Whether you have a harem or a single heroine, there is no problem.
Anyway, no matter how you write it, there will be some readers who like it and others who don’t.
But if you speculate, these two groups of readers will unite and spit at you together, and then walk away without looking back.
“Senior, excuse me for being blunt, but you have never been in love, right?”
Hearing Kasugano Toru’s question, Kasumigaoka Utaha’s eyes turned unfriendly.
“Can’t you write a romance novel if you’ve never been in a relationship?”The girl felt a little depressed, but the comments and tone of the junior in front of her were tactful enough.
Compared with the ridicule of those old authors, this was nothing.
Thinking of what those people said, Kasumigaoka Utaha’s chest began to hurt.
“The little girl is just thinking about love. Is there anyone who would like to watch such a boring and bloody plot?”
“Some people are still too young and always like to idealize things. They clearly have never experienced it, but they always like to live in fantasy.”
“Such books are probably just to fool children. Anyone who has experienced it would have such a naive idea.”
But it was the ridicule of those people that forced out a more powerful Kasumigaoka Utaha.
In addition to the former editor-in-chief’s keen eye for talent, Kasumigaoka Utaha herself also has real skills. If it is just a pile of useless mud, no matter how many resources are invested, it will only be drowned by the tide of the times. Kasugano Toru certainly did not mean to ridicule the other party. The senior sister in front of him is his sponsor. You know, he came here today and got money.
A full 50,000. If it were in the past, he couldn’t go out in this kind of weather, let alone make money.
But now, lying down… no, standing up and making money, it feels so good.
However, although Kasumigaoka Utaha is his sponsor, it does not mean that Kasugano Toru will give in without a bottom line.
The reason is very simple. If the second volume of”Love Metronome” is gone, wouldn’t he be unemployed again?
If he carries another… If he has the reputation of being a killer of light novel authors, then he will never be able to mix in the circle of illustrators in this life.
People’s brain circuits are so magical. When encountering something that cannot be explained, they always find some inexplicable reasons to let people take the blame.
Wasn’t it because of this reason that many of those who were burned to death hundreds of years ago?
Want people to admit that they are bad? Impossible.
But what if you let them admit that it was others who were unlucky?
Wouldn’t that be much easier?
So even if he and Kasumigaoka Utaha have different ideas, he can’t back down.
At worst, he will be fired. Even if he goes back to his previous life, it doesn’t matter. It’s just a little harder, and he won’t starve to death.
The boy said to Kasumigaoka Utaha seriously:”Senior sister, don’t get me wrong, I just want to tell you, if in the future when you are in a relationship, your boyfriend is wavering between you and another girl, and may choose her or you in the end, what kind of experience is that?”
The black-haired girl got goosebumps instantly.
When designing the outline of the second volume of the novel, she only thought about adding characters and increasing conflicts, but she forgot that in real life, when people meet such people, they will only say: Bah, scumbag!
In addition, Kasumigaoka Utaha is also a girl. If her boyfriend dares to do such a thing in the future, then just prepare the scissors.
“So, senior, don’t just add characters just to expand the plot. Although I have to admit that from this outline, the character design of Zhenwei is indeed very brilliant, but if you don’t plan to write a harem novel, it would be better to rewrite this outline and delete Zhenwei’s role.”
“A character that was portrayed with so much ink and ink, but in the end became a supporting role, there will definitely be fans who will criticize him.”
“Senior sister, you have to know that if you don’t marry her, there’s no point in flirting!”
……
Indeed, as Kasugano Tetsu said, regardless of whether the character of Shin Yui can win or not, according to the outline set by the girl now, the reputation of this book will definitely collapse in the second volume.
Because compared with the heroine of the first volume, Shin Yui has spent a lot of time and effort and has no less scenes! As long as Kasumigaoka Utaha didn’t plan to write about the harem, she would definitely be criticized to pieces. How is this different from stock speculation?
And Kasugano Tetsu knew that”Love Metronome” must have been a single-female-lead novel at the beginning.
If it is really written according to the outline in the boy’s hand, it will go against Kasumigaoka Utaha’s idea.
Originally, the original setting was a single female lead, but all those who wanted to see the harem ran away.
But halfway through, it was discovered that it was a harem, so those who wanted to see the single female lead also ran away.
In the end, it was discovered that it was actually stock speculation, so they all came back.
To spit.
After Kasugano Tetsu’s explanation, Kasumigaoka Utaha also discovered the problem.
In fact, even she herself couldn’t explain why she wanted to add a character like Shin Yui.
Maybe it was because the plot was not full enough and needed more conflict.
Or maybe it was because, when she was writing the second volume, she suddenly felt that Naoto, the male protagonist, was not a suitable boyfriend? He was useless except for the overused Asahi in light novels.
Could such a person really be a good match for Sayaka?
After all, Sayaka was her incarnation…
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