Another World Under My Pen

"To talk about the new drama "Criminal Minds" from Golden Eagle Video, I will just say a few points!"

Sitting in front of his laptop, he took a sip of the coffee Zheng Jiagang made for him. Sun Peng's hands crackled and hit the keyboard: "First, teamwork! I don't know if you have noticed it. Everyone in the team Everyone has his own position. The new boss is responsible for coordinating the overall situation, the handsome guy is responsible for the action, the talented girl Lin Lin is responsible for finding the entry point, and the old boss is the final touch! Each has its own responsibilities, each has its own place... Compared with those who rely on The traditional drama where the protagonist solves the crime alone, is there such a crime drama that relies on teamwork?"

"Second, fast-paced! In the first few minutes, not only the criminals' methods of committing crimes were described, but the tense atmosphere of the whole drama was set off, and the personalities and characteristics of several protagonists were displayed in the shortest time. , Let people know what kind of person they are roughly at a glance! Next, I went to the crime scene and started to act separately, find clues, analyze, one by one, when they caught the guy on the water, I I really thought this kid was the culprit, but I didn't expect..."

"Uh……"

Looking at these words that Sun Peng seemed to type out without thinking at all, Zheng Jia had a black line at one end: "Dapeng, you blow your own script like this...Aren't you going to have a face?"

"Ahem! Ahem!"

After coughing twice, Sun Peng rolled his eyes and said, "What can I do? Brother-in-law and they insisted that I write something from the perspective of a screenwriter and provide some cannonballs to the navy...I am also helpless! Otherwise, I will continue to paint my Xuebao at home, why bother with this?"

"...Well, you go on!"

"Wait for me for a while, it will be fine soon!"

Squeezing his eyes at his girlfriend, Sun Peng continued to crackle and tap: "Third, professional! You can carefully study the lines and props, from the names of the suspects to the costumes and outfits of the protagonists. The guns, vehicles, and their actions, as well as the analysis of criminal psychology, all have a strong professional flavor! Although I don’t understand some places, I don’t know how they analyzed them, but I think they are amazing. Looks like..."

...

After writing seven or eight articles in a row, Sun Peng accepted it with satisfaction.

Check for typos and sick sentences habitually. Sun Peng sent these two thousand words to Zhao Jinxiang, and then attached a sentence: "That’s all I can think of. You can figure it out. Don’t call me for the rest. !"

Without waiting for Zhao's reply, Sun Peng turned off tt and then directly turned off the computer.

Looking at Zheng Jia who had been staring at him next to him, Sun Peng shook his head and sighed helplessly: "Look, I'm actually under a lot of pressure to brag about my script, so I didn't dare to write more, so I quickly closed the two thousand words ..."

"Puff...... Virtue!"

Taking a look at her boyfriend, Zheng Jia scolded with a smile: "You still don't think there are more than two thousand words? Okay, don't be silly, are you hungry?"

"Hey, go for hot pot!"

Sun Peng's stomach groaned as soon as he heard dinner, and he quickly pulled Zheng Jia and ran to the restaurant. Today they eat hot pot at home by themselves, Zheng Jia has already prepared things...

...

"Brothers, I strongly recommend Golden Eagle Video's new drama "Criminal Minds", it looks so good!"

After eight o’clock, in many TV dramas, crime dramas and even mystery forums, some similar posts appeared one after another. The first episode of Criminal Minds just broadcast was highly praised, and some posts even included wonderful pictures. They were all cut off and put out for everyone to appreciate.

"I also recommend "Criminal Minds". Although this new drama only has one episode, it can't stop after watching it!"

"Can't stop? Is there a second episode for you?"

"Cut, can't I watch it again?"

...

"Brothers, "Criminal Minds" is really good-looking, and I have summarized a few features of this show..."

...

The naval forces that Zhao and Golden Eagle video found made a big move. From the night of September 1st to September 8th, they went almost everywhere with potential audiences. The leading actors Qian Hong and Lin Lin have spared no effort in publicity. They not only call on fans to watch the Golden Eagle video, but also release some stills from time to time, trying their best to prevent the new drama from falling attention.

There are bizarre cases, serial killers that everyone loves to hear, handsome men and beauties, and large investments.

With the fan base of a few more people, a lot of publicity offensive, and the quality of the criminal mind itself, the first episode did not unexpectedly explode-more than 10 million views in 24 hours, and the total number of views in a week exceeded four. Ten million!

Seven days later, the second episode of Sun Peng based on the 14th episode of the first season of "Criminal Minds" went live.

This episode is an episode that once moved Sun Peng very much. The name is "The Light in Life".

The content is that a husband and wife serial killer was arrested for murdering more than a dozen girls. The female killer killed her 2-year-old son before going to prison. Because the two have been procrastinating and refusing to explain the location of the girls' bodies, the verdict has been delayed. Until the end when they were sentenced to death, there was one dead body that was not found. The team was ordered to make a final effort, but they found that the facts might not be what the judges knew.

The female killer did not kill her own child!

In fact, in order to protect her son from her husband, she gave him to be raised by others. And even if she faces the death penalty for the crime of killing her son, she is unwilling to tell the truth, because having a pair of serial killer parents will inevitably affect the now happy son, and even affect his life.

Finally, under the bitter pleading of the female prisoner, the boss played by Qian Hong decided to abandon the investigation and let the two who had found the child come back... the female prisoner died with a smile, and the last shot was for the boss to listen to the child. In the cello concert, the smile on his face is gentle and brilliant...

Crazy father, great mother, happy child!

On the one hand, Sun Peng and Li Lichi made changes to make the plot of this episode roughly in line with China’s reality, on the other hand, they tried their best to maintain the original touch. Especially this time the female prisoner actor is an old friend recommended by Qian Hong. The interaction between the two during the execution is so natural and warm, making Sun Peng, a preconceived viewer, has a hot eye...

Compared to the first episode, the second episode is undoubtedly more exciting!

Therefore, the number of on-demand broadcasts exceeds 15 million in 24 hours, and the data that exceeds 5,500 in a week is not so exaggerated.

Including Sun Peng, everyone is full of confidence in the third episode.

The first episode is about the serial killer behind the scenes, the second episode is about the human nature of the killer, and the third episode is about the killer's madness.

Based on the eighth episode of the third season of the original version, the perverted maniac was discovered and locked up in his youth. But when he became an adult, no matter how resolutely his doctor in charge was against it, he was still released, and then he began to kill and cannibals.

If it was just such a plot, it would be fine. After all, there is no less filming of this abnormality at home and abroad, but when new missing persons appeared and the police and volunteers began to search the mountain, this abnormality mixed into the team of volunteers. .

Pretending to be harmless to humans and animals, the pervert took the initiative to make stew for all police and volunteers.

So when the police finally discovered this abnormality...or when the abnormality was deliberately discovered by people and told people with a smile on their faces that the missing person they were looking for was in their stomach...

Anyway, after Sun Peng watched this episode, he was really disgusted.

Therefore, the third episode of the original content was almost perfectly copied. Not only did the results explode, but also caused quite a lot of topics, and there was a strong voice in the comment area...

...

"……too disgusting!"

Until half a month after the third episode went live, Chen Ruoyi still had lingering fears when talking about the content of this episode, and couldn't help complaining: "Teacher Sun, your script is too... uh, neither I know how to say it."

"Haha, you said it was a script!"

Not caring at all, Sun Peng said with a smile.

In fact, if he hadn't picked the case well in the last two episodes, the negotiations between Lao Zhao and the TV station would not be so smooth now. The glorious results of the pilot episode, coupled with the equally exciting scripts of the next 20 episodes, gave the TV station an advantage in the negotiation. So far, there are at least six or seven TV stations interested in starring this show!

Li Lichi and Qian Hong are now completely busy.

But Sun Peng didn’t mix these things very much. He smiled and said, “Okay, let’s not talk about this! Miss Chen, this is the character and main scene setting I just completed. You can take a look first... because of time. For this reason, I have not done many details. I can only rely on your imagination and painting skills to improve it by referring to the existing ones."

"Okay, I will definitely work hard!"

Receiving Sun Peng's design draft solemnly, Chen Ruoyi said seriously.

As the previous "The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe" paid a lot of fees, the arrogant Yu Ruonan now insists on drawing his own picture book, and Chen Ruoyi can only take over the job by herself. Of course, Sun Peng's salary increased to 5,000 sheets was enough for her to ask two or three part-time painters for help, so it was not particularly difficult.

What's more, there are only five copies of "Frozen" this time.

If you don't know, Sun Peng realized that it was a bit too much to make a set of ten books after the market feedback of "The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe" came back. Many parents have responded that the story is too long. Older children are fine, but younger children find it difficult to accept this kind of length-their understanding and memory are not so powerful yet.

So after serious consideration, Sun Peng decided to make two versions at the same time this time!

A detailed version, at least four of the kind that takes off, and a short version, one is all over!

Simply put, it's just a try.

For children of different ages, make two different versions and let them take what they need.

It is precisely because of this special requirement that Sun Peng increased Chen Ruoyi's remuneration to 5,000 sheets. After all, picture book writers also have to pay their own intellectual labor to create. And now the sales of "The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe" are pretty good. The 100,000 sets printed in September have already sold a small portion. If you don't share it, I think about giving Chen Ruoyi a little bit more to make up for it.

"Om..."

When I was about to talk with Chen Ruoyi about making picture books, Sun Peng's phone vibrated.

After picking it up, Sun Peng immediately said sorry to Chen Ruoyi, then stood up and walked outside while answering the phone: "Second sister, what are you doing? How long have you been talking about? What is Chen Tianhou? Meaning? If we disagree, can't we find someone else as soon as possible?"

From the beginning of the month to the end of the month, Sun Peng became a little impatient.

The main reason is that the progress on the DreamWorks side is very fast. After the first episode came out, everyone's running in is almost the same. In September, two episodes were made in one go! Moreover, according to Hou Qingqing, it is no surprise that October will be three episodes, and this speed should not slow down in the future.

The ending song and interlude have not yet been finalized, and Sun Peng is also a little anxious.

"Xiaopeng, this..."

Unlike the bold performance in the past, Sun Ya was a little hesitating on the phone this time.

"what happened?"

Suddenly, Sun Peng had a bad feeling.

"Hehe, that's it."

After a dry laugh twice, Sun Ya said cautiously: "Xiaopeng, I'm a little bit eye-catching, but they want five songs, can you write them?"

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