Be a Cartoonist In the Fairy World

"But..." Feng Muzhao changed the subject, and continued, "You may have overlooked a detail."

"Details?" Fu Shangyin frowned.

"Yes," Feng Muzhao said, "Actually, I can't blame you for this. It's a professional advantage. Look at the beginning of the first volume. There is a description of everyone getting together and introducing themselves."

Following her words, not only drinking from the glass, except for Du Ziyuan and Songzi, everyone turned the novel in their hands to the beginning of the first volume.

"So the nine people sat in a circle, with the old man at the head holding a cigarette. He took a deep breath, and then introduced himself as a doctor. He now runs a medical clinic in Liangcheng. White smoke came out of his mouth when he spoke. He came out, making him look like an old fairy... The person on his right called himself Wang... Finally, it was the woman's turn, and she said that she was a singing girl who made a living by singing..."

The content of this paragraph is mainly to explain the identities of the characters on the stage, so that readers can understand them better. After reading it, many people still don't understand why Feng Muzhao said that there are details here that were ignored by Fushangyin.

Feng Muzhao said: "Pay attention here, they are sitting in a circle, and the introduction is from right to left, so it is certain that the last singer who introduces herself is sitting on the left of the doctor, and as mentioned earlier, this old man The person holding the cigarette is left-handed, that is to say, his cigarette rod is facing the singing girl. I feel very uncomfortable when I see this, because I am also singing, and I will never be so close to a smoker. "

Only then did everyone suddenly realize that Feng Muzhao was referring to this! If this is really a foreshadowing, it's too good to be buried.

The first person to introduce himself was the old man. He breathed out white smoke like an old fairy or something. Generally speaking, everyone would think it was a rhetorical technique. Authors of that era still liked to write such things. After that, there were seven people in the middle, and when it was the singer's turn, who would care so much about them sitting in a circle? Not to mention the connection with the phrase "holding a cigarette in his left hand" when the doctor appeared on the stage.

And even if there is such a picture in my mind, it is not deliberately mentioned in the book, and it will be easily ignored. Only those who really understand singing and opera singers will understand how much they value their voices.

She said that she made a living by singing, but she was lying, so it is very likely that she is not a real singer. So who will she be? There are only three women in the whole story, except for the singing girl, there are only Mrs. Li and Miss Li left. Among them, the one who was about the same age as the singing girl was the Miss Li family. She was just thrown into the well back then, and the thieves did not confirm her death, so her appearance was completely reasonable.

As a prince, Fushangyin naturally doesn't have a deep understanding of this aspect. In contrast, Yanyun Songzi, who is a singer, immediately realized this violation. So in her continuation of the version, the reason why the singing girl sits close to the doctor is to kill him first. The existence of the doctor has greatly hindered her subsequent murder plan, so she must be the first to solve it.

Because Fushangyin set the thief as the mastermind behind the scenes, although he also mentioned that killing the doctor first is to prevent him from saving others, but the killing method is completely different.

No one knows whether the foreshadowing mentioned by Feng Muzhao is the original author's original intention. Maybe he just wrote it casually. If this is ignored, the continuation versions of both parties are perfect.

However, now that Feng Muzhao has made such a move, everyone will find that Yanyun Songzi's version seems more reasonable after thinking about it.

In the end, pine nuts scored 68493 points and floating cups scored 64122 points. The average score of both sides is over 8, which is considered an excellent result, but there can only be one winner.

Fushangyin didn't express much dissatisfaction with Feng Muzhao's comment, but just returned to his place silently, as if thinking about something.

Song Zi bounced back to Du Ziyuan and the others, imitating Du Ziyuan's usual movements and made a "V" gesture. Du Ziyuan and Tang Junhao also gave her "crack clap clap" applause at the right time.

"You are really lucky this time, the murderer just happened to pretend to be a singer." Tang Junhao said with emotion.

Regarding this, Song Zi shook her head disdainfully: "Second brother, you are still too tender."

"What's the meaning?"

"What she means is that even if the foreshadowing is not a singer, but other occupations, she can still find out," Du Ziyuan said, "As an author, the amount of information reserves is very important. Sometimes there are only dozens of appearances in one appearance. Passers-by who write novels may spend a lot of effort by the author to investigate and collect information, and you have just switched to writing novels, so you have a lot to learn."

Seeing Tang Junhao's dissatisfaction, Song Zi continued: "Do you know how the author who wrote this "You Yao Zhuang" died?"

"Didn't you say alcoholism?"

"The direct reason is indeed this, but if you have the heart to investigate, you can find that he was about to open a new book at the time, and that book was about 'wine'. He actually went to drink to experience every kind of wine. The taste, characteristics, brewing methods, etc. of wine, many things can only be written with ease and perfection only after personal experience.”

After Song Zi finished speaking, Tang Junhao's face suddenly showed shock, and at the same time, he felt deep admiration for the author. This kind of people who use their lives to create may be the real masters.

However, before he could finish being moved, Du Ziyuan who was at the side interrupted: "Didn't that guy drink to death when he was drinking flower wine to show off his capacity for alcohol in front of the girl?"

"Huh?" Tang Junhao was dumbfounded, and immediately looked at Songzi.

The latter smiled mischievously and said, "Oh, I just made up those things just now. How could such a writer who broke up with his old boss to be an eunuch because of a woman have such a good character? Do you believe this? It seems that you need Go home and cook a pot of pig brain and walnut soup to make up for it."

"I'll go! I'm touched by you!" Tang Junhao really wanted to travel back in time to give himself a big blow when he went out to strike up a conversation with these two guys that day.

The three brothers and sisters were whispering here, and the change of judges over there had also been completed. After the second critics were seated, it was Zhou Budong and Wang Zhiqiu's turn to play.

Their opponent is the sleepwalking bird, the old driver of Qifeng Kingdom. In the first and second rounds, he wrote small pornographic essays, the kind that made people's blood boil. Du Ziyuan felt that his pen name should not be called "Sleepwalking Bird", but "Bleeding Blood" would be better. .

The key point is that this guy's writing is not just a simple little pornographic writing, the plot is also very reasonable, it can even be regarded as exquisite, and it will not make people feel bored at all. It was also a headache for the one-three combination to encounter such an opponent this time.