Be a magician in the world of Kexue
Chapter 119
He wants to make readers reflect on the need to cherish the qualities of cooperation and mutual support no matter what difficulties they encounter in life. He understands that such a plot may be cruel for a novel, but he believes that it is the responsibility and mission of creation to show real and complex human nature.
He had a discussion with Liu Ze, who said: "Writing about the true face of human nature is a kind of courage, and this courage will make your work more in-depth and more moving."
Su Ming realizes that the exploration of human nature is not only limited to the performance of extreme situations, but also reflected in the mutual relationship and trust between people. He began to incorporate more human interaction and emotional communication between the characters in his novels.
He focuses on the plot of the protagonist's encounter with a young girl who has lost her family. The girl has been traumatized, but she remains innocent and kind. In the process of getting along with her, the protagonist feels the warmth and hope of humanity.
In this way, Su Ming tries to show the kindness and care in human nature, even in difficult situations, people can still find beauty and support each other. He believes that this trust and friendship is the most precious aspect of human nature.
When he communicated with Liu Ze, Liu Ze said: "In difficult situations, the brilliance of human nature can often be magnified. This warmth and hope gives strength to the reader.
Su Ming decided to further polish the plot of the novel. He began to look at the plot and characters in the story, trying to make it more coherent and engaging.
In his novel, the protagonist encounters a group of survivors who not only have to deal with the threat of zombies, but also face conflicts and friction with each other. Su Ming decided to intensify these conflicts and make the plot more compact and dramatic.
He thinks about how to make the relationships between the characters more complex and at the same time realistic. He tries to give each character unique traits to make their conflict and cooperation more intense. With these changes, he wants to make the reader more engaged in the story.
He approached Liu Ze and asked him for advice on how to better represent the tension between the characters. Liu Ze suggested that he pay attention to the inner contradictions and motivations of the characters, "The authenticity of the characters' actions depends on their inner contradictions and emotional drives, which should be expressed in a profound and three-dimensional way."
Su Ming felt that he had benefited a lot, and he began to revise the novel to add more of the characters' inner contradictions and emotions. He reorganized the plot to make it more gripping and the characters more three-dimensional.
In the process of revision, he discovered some plot imperfections. He thought about how to make these plots more natural and smooth, and more in line with the overall plot development. He decided to innovate and tweak the sections to ensure that the story was coherent and engaging.
Su Ming decided to add more visual and sensory descriptions to the novel to enrich the reader's reading experience. He realized that vivid descriptions allow readers to better immerse themselves in the story, feeling the tension, fear, and hope in it.
He began to experiment with more specific descriptions of scenery in his novels, such as the dilapidated buildings on the streets, the sultry summer sky, and the quiet night. These images are both apocalyptic and provide a more concrete context for the characters' emotions and actions.
At the same time, he pays attention to the feelings and emotions of the characters. He tries to describe his heartbeat in the face of danger, as well as the tension and anxiety of surviving from the perspective of the protagonist. He wants readers to better understand the inner struggles and growth of the characters through these descriptions.
He approached Liu Ze and wanted to ask him how to write a more vivid plot and sensory description. Liu Ze encouraged him to draw more on his own sensory experience and the details of observing the world around him, "Feel with your heart and express it with your pen, so that readers can see, smell, and feel the world you describe."
Su Ming felt that he had benefited a lot, and he began to put these suggestions into practice. He scrutinized each passage and tried to choose the most appropriate words to present a more realistic and moving scene.
Su Ming entered the proofreading stage of the novel. He knows that good work needs to be carefully crafted and polished, and subtle differences between words can affect the texture of the whole story.
He began to carefully review the chapters he had written, proofreading and revising them word for word. Sometimes he finds that some of the wording is inaccurate, so he chooses a more appropriate word. Sometimes he feels that the rhythm of the sentence is not right, so he reorganizes and adjusts it.
He found Liu Ze and wanted to discuss some doubts about writing with him. Liu Ze encouraged him and said: "Proofreading is the polishing of the work, and every word and punctuation has its place. Proofread carefully to maintain the unity of the style and ensure the smoothness of the story.
Under the guidance of Liu Ze, Su Ming made meticulous corrections. He began to pay attention to every detail, from paragraphs to grammar and even punctuation, ensuring style and consistency throughout the work.
He understands that proofreading is not just a simple check for typos, but also a process of iteration. He tries to inject more emotion into each text, making the language more powerful and infectious.
Su Ming has completed the proofreading of the novel, and he feels that the work has reached the point where it can be seen by readers. He decided to publish his novel on an online literary platform to share his creations with readers.
He chose a literary community dedicated to the theme of disasters, and there were many readers who liked the apocalypse, zombie themes. He signed up for an account and was ready to upload and publish his novel.
During the uploading process, he realized that his novel did not yet have a cover art. He decided to design a simple and attractive cover. He spent some time designing an image that would convey the apocalyptic atmosphere, choosing a color scheme that accentuated the theme and made the cover more consistent with his novel.
After uploading, he began writing a synopsis for the novel. He worked hard to summarize the background and main plot of the entire story, hoping to attract the attention of more readers.
Liu Ze is also helping him to promote it, sharing the release of Su Ming's novel in this community, encouraging his readers and fans to come and support. Their combined efforts have resulted in the novel gaining some attention within the community.
Su Ming watched the successful release of the novel, and his mood was both excited and nervous. He knows that the journey ahead will be even more challenging. He decided to take time out of his day to pay attention to readers' feedback and understand their thoughts and opinions, so that he could continuously improve his creation.
One day, he received a message from his first reader. He was comforted and encouraged by the readers' praise for his story. But the reader also made some suggestions that he wanted to highlight the personalities of the characters more and make the story more engaging.
He hastened to reply to the reader's message, expressing his gratitude and telling the reader that he would seriously consider their suggestion. He also recorded these suggestions and decided to improve them in the following chapters.
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