Become a Passerby Heroine

Not only Han Leng, Zhao Youyue also noticed the explosion of the book review section of "The Strongest King" at night. After all, night is the peak time for many readers to read books. Praise the author, or even reward the author directly, but if you don't like it, or encounter poisonous points, of course you will complain about the author.

Zhao Youyue saw that in the latest chapter of "This Chapter Says", the description of "Yu Shengfan"'s appearance has already had more than a hundred complaints, such as "embarrassing", "very poisonous", "vomiting blood ", "spicy eyes", "can't bear to look straight" and other words emerge in endlessly, and in the book review area, some complaint posts with a lot of words also appeared——

"What the hell is this female character 'Yu Shengfan'? Could it be that Rosemary is going to appoint her as the heroine? If that's the case, I will definitely abandon the book, it's too poisonous!"

"I seem to have seen the description of Miss Vase in an ancient web article. Rosemary, I advise you to save yourself. You really don't want to write female characters anymore. It's really embarrassing and cancerous..."

"Yu Shengfan get out of "The Strongest King", otherwise I will absolutely abandon the book!"

"E-sports doesn't need a girlfriend, begging Lin Feng to be alone all his life!"

"As an old reader of Rosemary, this scene is so familiar, you should recognize it, don't write about female characters anymore!"

"Seeing that everyone feels the same as me, I immediately feel relieved. Rosemary's skills in plot and game description are indeed very deep, but the portrayal of this female character is really eye-catching..."

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When Zhao Youyue saw the exploding book review section, she couldn't help stroking her forehead. She only hoped that Rosemary could have a stronger psychological endurance, and wait for her to enter "The Strongest King" when she sleeps tonight and save "Yu Shengfan".

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At the same time, Ye Hai was complained about by his loving wife Li Mengyao, because Li Mengyao was also his reader and liked to read her husband's books very much.

Li Mengyao usually uses a tablet computer to read books. She pointed to the description of "Yu Shengfan"'s appearance, and said to Ye Hai: "I said, why did you write female characters on a whim? Not a good female character, why don't you admit this..."

Ye Hai looked embarrassed, and smiled apologetically: "Actually, it's not my fault, it's just a trick that a wealthy reader wants. Look, she has already rewarded me with 2,000 yuan for this book, and she is the number one fan of this book." !"

Li Mengyao looked at the fan list, and the number one among them is indeed a leader nicknamed [You Yue]. The other party not only rewarded the book, but also subscribed to it all, but she said with a chuckle: "You think you succeeded in currying favor?" Is it a local rich reader? It’s clearly an offense to them, and if they write their tricks like this, I’m afraid they’ll lose all their rewards in the future!”

When Li Mengyao said this, she couldn't help but think of Ye Hai's portrayal of a heroine based on her. Although that appearance was not as exaggerated as "Yu Shengfan", Mary Su, and embarrassing cancer, but the subsequent description, it was really It made her wish to kick her husband to death, that must be high-level black, portraying the heroine so silly and sweet, she knew that her husband should focus on portraying the kindness and innocence of the heroine, but after writing it, the heroine The impression of the Lord is that it is particularly artificial and annoying, anyway, it is best not to see it.

So when Li Mengyao said that her husband wanted to write more about the interaction between the hero and the heroine and show the beauty of love, she resolutely stopped her husband's behavior, almost forcing her to death!

Well, that's just hyperbole...

What makes Li Mengyao very helpless is that Ye Hai doesn't seem to realize how badly he portrays female characters, and he likes to show his credit to her—wife, wife, look at how I wrote this paragraph, did I portray you very well? To please readers?

like? I like a ghost!

It’s not bad if you don’t hate it, but you still like it, don’t dream!

Wake up, my writer Ye Da!

In the end, under Li Mengyao's strong intervention, the heroine based on her finally disappeared, and she can finally follow the book happily.

For Ye Hai's new work "The Strongest King", Li Mengyao has always been very satisfied, because there are no female characters, and the plot is also very passionate, very powerful, and full of passion (basic love). The setting is also quite novel. After adding online game elements, it makes the work more plump and attractive. At the same time, it also makes her very much looking forward to the later part of the main game e-sports, waiting for the protagonist to lead her own "all-China class" , The Korean e-sports team led by the "big devil" is tough.

As a result, at this moment, he actually made things difficult for her by portraying female characters!

Seeing the embarrassing look on Ye Hai's face, Li Mengyao couldn't help but smile and said, "Haha, did I hit the mark?"

Ye Hai took out his mobile phone, opened the chat box between himself and Zhao Youyue, and directly showed the chat records to his wife, saying: "I am a wealthy reader with a pretty good temper, much better than you were back then."

After reading the chat records, Li Mengyao couldn't help sighing slightly: "This Miss Youyue is really rich, and I rewarded you with another 100,000 starting coins for a disagreement, but you ruined her tricks like this, and I was also drunk! Is there anyone who treats the leader so badly? Also, what is meant by being much better than me at that time, people don’t know that you are using her as the prototype to portray this 'Yu Shengfan', and what is the relationship between me and you, of course you can treat her If you complain directly, people just became friends with you on QQ, and they give you tactful comments, I guess you can't help it."

Ye Hai smiled awkwardly, and then looked at the book review area where he exploded, and couldn't help but said guiltyly: "Then should I just hide this female character, do you have any suggestions?"

That's what he said, but he has actually decided in his heart, try to use the advice given to him by the leader of [You Yue], it can be regarded as his last struggle, if he still can't satisfy the readers, then he will completely accept his fate and never Will go to portray female characters.

"Give it a try! I will always support you anyway. I have no choice. As a wife, besides playing games with you, doing housework, cooking and raising children, I don't know how to write books. The suggestion seems to be helpful, if it can make up for your shortcomings in portraying female characters, maybe you can take a bigger step on the road of writing!" Li Mengyao smiled, in fact, she had already seen the decision in her husband's heart, Of course she chose to support it.

Sure enough, Ye Hai breathed a sigh of relief, and just held his wife's hand, without saying anything.

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That night, while Zhao Youyue was sleeping, she deftly pushed open the "Dimensional Door" in her mind and entered it.

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