Become a Passerby Heroine

Although Ye Hai's wife Li Mengyao supports her husband to try the new way of portraying female characters, that is, portraying male characters according to the way her husband originally portrayed male characters, and then insisting that it is a female character, if the original male character is a handsome guy, then It is said that she is a big beauty, but in terms of personality, there is not much difference between them.

But if she supports it, she still asks her husband to show her the content of the writing before updating it, so as to avoid the description of female characters with hot eyes again.

"My recent writing state is very good, especially when portraying the character 'Yu Shengfan' in [Trouble in the Night Rain], I feel like I am writing like a god, as if I saw her appear in front of me with my own eyes, playing that one A game called "Battle of Eternity"! I can no longer write her exaggerated and false, because she is real! She is a very interesting girl who fell in love with the game because of loneliness, and even for the game She is proficient in multiple languages, and she also likes to talk non-stop while playing games..." Ye Hai said to his wife very excitedly when he gave the manuscript to his wife for review.

Li Mengyao couldn't help but believe Ye Hai when she saw Ye Hai's appearance that he didn't seem to have come out of the world of writing, because Ye Hai was in the state of "inspiration burst" many times in the past. Whenever he was in that state, the code word The speed and efficiency are very high!

Even the quality of the text has been improved. Ye Hai, who is good at portraying male characters and game screens, has made his character portrayals more lifelike, and the sense of picture can make readers feel like they are on the scene!

If the words written by Rosemary in the normal state are at the level of a great god, then the words written by Rosemary in the state of "inspiration" are at the level of the supreme god, which can easily mobilize the emotions of readers and let Readers are immersed in the world he outlines!

Ye Hai also handed over the release of the manuscript to his wife Li Mengyao, and then plunged into writing again. He wanted to write more while he was in good condition.

Li Mengyao also had a great sense of anticipation, but in the end she finished reading the manuscript in one sitting, and then couldn't help but said to her husband who was typing: "Is there any more, is there any more? It's not enough! I really want to see Lin Fenghe Tang Yongkai found out that [Trouble in the Night Rain] turned out to be the story of the peerless beauty that they couldn't take their eyes off, and I'm really looking forward to their reaction..."

In the end, the only response to her was Ye Hai's very rhythmic code words. She saw her husband working so hard, and a trace of tenderness appeared on her face. She began to re-read the saved manuscript, and was going to correct it for her husband. typo.

But what surprised her was that there was not a single typo in the manuscript of more than 10,000 characters!

That's amazing!

It's really done in one go!

But what made her even more gratified was her husband's subsequent portrayal of the female character "Yu Shengfan". She originally thought that this almost exaggerated Mary Sue role was hopeless, and it was impossible for readers to like it anymore, but After she read the archived manuscript, she found this character very interesting!

Originally, the character image of "Yu Shengfan" was extremely empty and pale, seemingly perfect, but in fact it was very fake. The behavior of driving a luxury car to an Internet cafe can be sprayed out by readers who pay more attention to rationality. Forcible explanations can only barely fool readers, but when Yu Shengfan's true character characteristics are revealed, this "Internet addict girl" who loves games and is addicted to PK seems to become friendly and vivid...

And the cutest thing about her is undoubtedly her unstoppable mouth. Of course, it is reflected in the game, which is the word bubble that will never disappear on her head. If this kind of person appears in reality, and in the Appearing as an opponent when playing games, you will definitely hate this guy who likes non-stop BB mocking, but appearing in the book, it seems that "talkative" and "venomous tongue" have become cute attributes, especially among readers After seeing the follow-up plot, we found that this guy is likely to become the protagonist's teammate.

Readers who substitute the protagonist Lin Feng will naturally have a +20 favorability for the characters in the protagonist’s camp. In addition, the character “Yu Shengfan” does not look like a pig teammate at all. Her operation skills are so powerful that even She hasn't revealed her full strength yet, if she can join hands with Lin Feng, how powerful will the "Glory Team" be in the future?

All in all, in the content of the manuscript, the follow-up portrayal of "Yu Shengfan" suddenly raised the anticipation of the whole work, because the follow-up portrayal was so exciting that everyone even subconsciously forgot the beginning The description of the hot eyes will only remember her identity as the chaebol lady, and the setting that is proficient in multiple languages. This is simply convenient for her to vent freely when she is facing e-sports teams from other countries in the future. Ridicule, make trouble!

This Yu Shengfan is just a troublesome girl, and she is steady in pulling up hatred. In this way, it will obviously make the plot more exciting and exciting. Lin Feng, who is steady and calm, likes to hide his sharpness, is responsible for output and punching faces, and occasionally shows his sharpness to pretend to be aggressive, isn't it flattering?

One is the king with a strong mouth, and the other is the strongest king. When the two cooperate, the picture is so beautiful that I can't bear to watch it!

In fact, setting "Yu Shengfan" as a lonely girl without any friends is to imply to readers that once she becomes a friend recognized by her, she will definitely do anything for her friend. If "Yu Shengfan" is regarded as a For a man, it doesn't violate harmony at all. With this kind of "lone wolf" character, whoever can become his friend can turn the "lone wolf" into a "loyal dog". This kind of routine is not uncommon in novels. And readers eat it.

Obviously, Ye Hai has already used the way of portraying male characters on "Yu Shengfan". He no longer regards "Yu Shengfan" as a dispensable small supporting role, but an important supporting role. He didn't even notice that the setting of this character was not actually made by him, but he thought it was the product of his inspiration. Anyway, he himself was very satisfied with this character, and he was very partial to his first writing. A female character with such a feeling, he thinks he has finally portrayed a female character with a soul!

Regardless of whether the reader is satisfied or not, he must continue to write like this!

No one can stop the creators who have already "topped"!

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