Beiyin Great Sage

The journey has come to an end.

Next, is the story that happened in Hongzeyu, which will be updated tomorrow.

There happens to be an event at the starting point on May 15th. I will update 5,000 words and draw a prize. Tomorrow I will try to update as many as possible so that I can draw one more prize.

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According to my experience, the transition between changing maps is very difficult to write.

Most of them, just pass them by in one stroke.

This volume uses the plot of a fragmented world as a way to introduce the forces of Hongze Territory and serve as a foreshadowing. It is quite acceptable and the results have not declined.

However, there is no serious conflict in it, and the Ji family, Ye family, and base overlords are less well-done and only serve as backdrops, which is a pity.

After all, time is limited, and a fragmented world is not suitable for describing too much.

The key is,

lack of ability.

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Here, by the way, I would like to introduce my writing philosophy.

I believe that every writer has his or her own opinions on writing. My opinions are for reference only. If you have other ideas, you can discuss them.

I personally like to divide an online article into three parts. When I read other people's novels, I analyze them from these three aspects, and I also write from these three aspects.

I've said this many times.

1. Sense of rhythm: the ability to tell stories.

2. Sense of anticipation: the ability to arouse readers’ emotions.

3. Sense of immersion: the audience of the work.

The three complement each other and overlap in some places.

Here we talk about the sense of substitution.

To make an article feel immersive, the most common way to write it is to use more words about vision, smell, and taste in the description.

Just like a stone brick.

It can be written as light gray stone bricks with uneven surfaces and mottled rust.

This is not just for water text.

But if people want to resonate, it is most effective to start from a place where they can feel it. It is also easy to empathize with people by using their five senses in words.

Of course, if you write too much, you will be suspected of writing watery words.

Second.

Be emotionally involved.

There is a book called "The Account Was Stolen at the Start, and I Recharged One Million Backhand." This book uses people's empathy for various things to let readers take their place.

Recommended to take a look.

Third.

Describe an attractive world that allows people to immerse themselves in it and feel the story from the perspective of the characters in the book.

I read books on many websites.

In comparison, Qidian’s online articles are of higher quality.

In my opinion, it is because many authors of Qidian are carefully creating a world in the book of their own, rather than simply pursuing fast-paced fun.

For example: Lord of Mysteries, Above the Sky, Detective Chief attached to reality, etc.

This is a slow and continuous process, and the author needs to spend a lot of pen and ink to describe the world, even basic clothing, currency...

Sometimes, it’s thankless.

I remember when I was chasing the Lord of Mysteries, I marveled at the author's detailed description of the protagonist. The price of goods did not collapse until the end. It took a lot of effort.

But many readers find it verbose and watery.

It is meaningless to use words to describe hanging bells, crutches, clothes, and roads.

Reality.

It is these seemingly meaningless words that form a mysterious world that looks like reality and makes people addicted to it.

A good book is not necessarily a book with good grades.

As an online writer and a solid coder, although my grades are not very good, I have been studying hard and striving to make my works better.

The first volume of this book took more than twenty chapters to set the stage, and it took more than ten chapters to get the golden finger. It was too slow. In fact, I thought about whether to add it for a long time.

If you add it up, you will probably get poor results.

Today's readers, unlike more than ten years ago, no longer like this kind of long-winded beginning.

It's better to just go back in time and start with Golden Finger, starting from the second volume.

After thinking about it later, I decided to add it, just because I didn’t want to regret it. That’s why I said in my review that this book might have some success after it reaches 500,000 words.

Good thing.

I have your support.

Unknowingly, I have written more than a thousand words, so I won’t go into too much detail. We will talk about the sense of anticipation and rhythm later.

at last.

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