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Chapter 726 The next story... Nanoha?

It's already late September, but in California, the temperature has remained high.

But because of the magical invention of air conditioning, the situation is not so bad when indoors.

At least Catherine, who was leisurely reading the manuscript of "Mass Effect" in the room, didn't feel hot.

"Maybe we should put up curtains..."

Elsa glanced outside the window.

"Um……"

Catherine was a little absent-minded, because she was reading the manuscript of "Mass Effect" here.

The manuscript was well written, and Catherine was very satisfied with it.

Although the story is still far from what Catherine imagined, the writing style has gradually become unified, and the article looks like it was written by one person.

In fact, when writing in English, it is much easier to unify the writing style than in Chinese.

Although there are many slangs or proverbs in English, there are far fewer ways to describe something in English than in Chinese.

There are too many modifiers in Chinese, and every author always wants to use different modifiers. Although this situation also exists in English, it is not as troublesome as Chinese.

Catherine looked through the article and was very satisfied with the effect.

What Catherine got in hand was the first 600,000-word novel. In addition to the plot, there were also many plots added by these people themselves.

From July to the end of September now, with the efforts of more than a dozen people, they only spent two months to complete the first part of this novel.

The three novels total 1.8 million words, which is not a lot.

However, everyone who participated in this writing can get a free license, that is, they can write their own "official fan" for the story. If these stories can be written well, they can also be published.

To be precise, it seems a little inappropriate to say "fans". It would be better to use "derivative novels" to describe it.

It seems that within this year, the whole story will be completed, and at that time, I

"You seem to like this story very much?"

Elsa asked from the side.

"One thing. There is indeed a part of the future world in this story that I like." Catherine thought for a moment: "But I think it would be good if it was a future world where magic was used?"

"The future version of Harrybot?"

Elsa is a little funny.

It would be interesting to write Harry Potter as a future story...?

"No, Harrybot's world view is very good, but what I want to write is not that kind of story...well...how should I put it, it should be a pure magical world that is not so closely connected with the past.

The story of the future... is probably similar to this...? Look, the development of science and technology gradually develops with the pace of human civilization, why can't magic be like this?"

Catherine felt that her idea was too bāng.

"Just the same idea as the "Fate" series?"

The most important keyword in the "Fate" series is "mystery". The more people know it and the greater the reputation, the more effective this trick will be. But at the same time, the more people understand it, the more effective the magic will be.

It is low, thus ensuring that the magician remains mysterious and reasonable among the crowd.

But the world Catherine just described is obviously a different situation from the world of "fate".

"Well, it's a little bit, but it's not completely the opposite," Catherine continued, "This should be a world where magic develops like human technological civilization... Well, the magic wands used by humans also have artificial intelligence.

...Well, that’s it.”

Do you want to move to class six?

Catherine suddenly thought of "Nanoye". It seems that in the third part, the story of "Nanoye" will become a future magical world similar to this...

Thinking about it this way, Catherine was shocked to find that this seemed to be really the case.

Well, Magic Gundam Nanoha...

Well, speaking of it, if the Gundam is placed in a fantasy world, it does seem to be much more reasonable than placing it in a science fiction world. The Gundam in the science fiction world is far less enjoyable than the cannon giant ship. Think about it, a mothership filled with turrets leads a

He led countless small fleets over, and then fired a siege cannon, and all the Gundams in front of him were reduced to rubbish...

(Ah... strange, why is the scene in front of me a white Gundam destroying the entire fleet?)

Something strange seemed to appear in Catherine's mind.

What is the Heart of the Rising Sun...?

"It's really strange to use magic for interstellar travel." Elsa thought for a while: "But...it seems to be somewhat similar to "Star Wars", right? There are also Jedi Knights in it, and their powers are also very magical?"

"That's different," Catherine shook her head. "The world I'm talking about is a world dominated by magic. Magic has been integrated into every part of people's lives."

Elsa didn't seem to understand. After a while, she seemed to think of something: "Is this the same as everyone in China knowing Kung Fu?"

This misunderstanding was huge, but Catherine smiled bitterly: "That's probably it."

Although it is not the same, but to understand it, it should be like this...

"What about the story?"

Elsa was obviously more interested in the story.

"That's it...let me think about it..."

Europeans and Americans don’t seem to know much about Nanoha’s story, right?

In this case, it seems that I can't plagiarize... No, I borrowed it.

"Let me think about this."

Catherine began to think.

What kind of story do you want to write?

"Well, in this future magical world, there are three dark demons who rule the world. They dominate the entire process of the world, and the protagonist is a cute nv child who wants to defeat the demons."

(Vivio’s heaven-defying journey? Will the three giants of the Space-Time Administration be defeated by Vivio?...Okay, should I complain?)

Catherine sweats.

Although the plot Elsa mentioned seemed to be nothing, Catherine was always connected to the plot of the original anime. At this time, Catherine always felt... well, there seemed to be something strange.

"The plot can't be that way. If it were all female protagonists, everyone wouldn't necessarily be interested. The male protagonist also needs to exist..."

Catherine began to think.

If it is the male protagonist, how should the story be set?

According to the niàoxìng of European and American people, if it is a male protagonist, most of them are single-minded. In most cases, the protagonist is a loser. In a few cases, he may be rich, handsome, and rich.

There seem to be more cases of going to extremes. In novels with more intense conflicts, there seem to be very few ordinary people appearing, either losers or tall, rich and handsome people.

Let’s just write the protagonist who is tall, rich and handsome?

If it were this plot, Catherine felt that it would be a little difficult to leave it to someone else to write it.

"Mass Effect" is okay, it belongs to the European and American people, but what they adapted themselves is different.

Although the creativity of European and American people is good, Catherine always feels that their stories are sometimes...well, very strange.

Catherine can let others write this story, but that must wait until she has basically understood the main line, and the theme story must be completed by herself.

Otherwise, if it were written by Europeans and Americans, maybe Naoha, the cute queen, would become a bad girl who was abused and drugged...

Don't doubt it, they are really capable of this.

So Catherine decided to be cautious.

Otherwise, if something weird like "Hollywood's Secret Kitchen" pops up, it would be really worth complaining about.

Although Catherine is very nervous, complaining too much is not good for her physical and mental health...

If he is simply short and poor, then his story does not seem to be in line with his own wishes.

Tall, rich and handsome……?

Well, to be honest, when Catherine saw the tall, rich and handsome man in the novel, her first thought was how to torture him to her satisfaction.

"Otherwise, the protagonist is the male protagonist after the reincarnation of the goddess. The messenger of the goddess found the protagonist and wanted to help him restore his memory..." Elsa had another bad idea.

"Then this story is weird enough." Catherine was tired and didn't want to complain.

"Isn't it the opposite of "Fate", where the protagonist is a girl who turned into a boy?"

"This is a group of readers that we will drive away first."

Catherine rolled her eyes.

"Is that so?" Elsa looked at Catherine with innocent eyes.

"Let me think about it..."

First of all, I want to know what kind of story the story should describe.

This is simple. Conspiracy theories are something that the world likes to hear. If you want science fiction and magic, then this story should be as liberal as possible.

Demonic nv masters are too traditional. In the original story, the three managers with only brains seemed to be just right.

The people who manage the world are rulers with only three brains and no body.

Of course, like Matou Zōyan in "Fate", they have all fallen. They try to control the world instead of adhering to the materialistic scientific view of development...

Well, magic itself is not scientific.

All in all, these people are the final bosses, and the mastermind must be the mastermind behind it, so that the story will be interesting.

As for the protagonist, he is a border guard sent by the country to maintain world peace.

Well, under the command of the final boss, soldiers like the protagonist attack the city and defeat the enemy.

Of course, there must be some conspiracy organizations involved.

It seems good to arrange a Masonic existence.

At the end of the story, the protagonist has to discover the ending of the final boss, and according to the usual niàoxìng of Europeans and Americans, this will be a great ending where the protagonist defeats the final boss.

What if the protagonist fails?

Then this story is definitely not over yet...

"But in this case...isn't it a bit hidden now?"

In that case, would Nixon be viewed by many as the final boss?

Catherine sweats.

…

Today’s old girl’s QQ status: Your sister can’t be that cute…

I……

Okay, one more update, I should be able to get rid of Sany Heavy Industry's situation today...