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Episode 037: The flapping of the wings of a caged bird (3)

... Recently, in Japan, the term “lead-free society” has emerged as a term to refer to a new form of society. A lead-free society refers to a society in which the traditional support system between individuals through blood ties and ties is broken and people do not want to form bonds with others...

. . . Singleton is not a term that simply refers to a single person, but a term that refers to a ‘single-person household’ who lives entirely alone without living with a lover, roommate, parents, or children. . . . Omitted... For modern people, 'living alone' and 'living alone' are by no means synonymous, and those living alone are not necessarily considered lonely or isolated. rather···

On the other hand, eating alone is not limited to young people. According to a survey by the Ministry of Health and Welfare, as of 2015, there are 740,000 elderly people living alone, and about 15% of them are living in isolation without meeting with family or neighbors...

[Problem 1] Explain the phenomenon of proposal from each point of view and , choose one of them and discuss your point of view. (40 points within 500 characters)

What I presented to Il-Han Park was the essay test question at Seoyul University last year.

The expression on the face of Il-han Park, who first accepted the test paper, was, ‘ㅤㅁㅝㅇmi?’ without adding a single lie.

However, after telling him to try it, he left for about 90 minutes, and then wrote down the answer with all his heart and soul.

····· shows the trend of a rapid increase in the number of single-person households in Korea, and shows that the number of people eating alone, not only young people but also the elderly, is increasing.

describes the negative aspects of a lead-free society.

···syncopation···

On the other hand, the singleton phenomenon in shows a positive outlook for single-person households...

Even though they gave me the exam papers, I didn't expect much from the beginning.

It was just a question I gave this guy to see if this would work, so he just wanted me to at least write down his own answer.

“·················ogue.”

As I silently looked down at the exam paper, he opened his mouth with a nervous expression on his face.

"why? Weird?"

The guy fiddles with the pen with a shaky expression on his face, as if he was not confident in the answers he wrote.

"no. I’m admiring you for how well you wrote it.”

I said with a small smile.

Then the boy's face turns vaguely. It looks like he didn't expect to hear such a word.

In fact, at first, I was a little worried about giving out the test papers.

Contrary to what ordinary people think, good writing skills do not guarantee that you will be good at essays.

However, when I checked the test paper he had written down, I was able to realize once again that my worries like this were nothing more than a fluke.

According to the guy, he must have solved the problem for the first time after seeing this type of essay passage for the first time, but he wrote down the answers that did not deviate from the frame of the exam questions.

Essay (論述).

To logically state an opinion about something.

However, in Korea, the term essay writing is used more often to refer to a method of college admissions.In general, university entrance examinations are often divided into regular admissions and regular admissions, which are further subdivided into general admissions and special admissions.

The general admission is further divided into sub-subject selection, student division general selection, essay exam, aptitude test, practical test, and special talent selection.

However, with the clean student record of Il-Han Park, no one can try any of them, without the grades 1st and 2nd grades being devastated, no awards or creative experiences.

The only thing that can be tried is an essay test and essay writing for special writers, but since there is a strong feeling that the special writer selection itself is a typical high school, essay writing was the only way to realistically aim for the entrance exam.

Well, it wasn't a kind field enough that he could be 100% attached to it, but it was this that, at least, had potential.

Otherwise, it would be crazy the moment you put in the application, but this is because if you have a good strategy, you will see a place to rub.

“·················ogue.”

I looked down at the guy who was smirking as he looked at the writing he was going to write.

The trajectory he had to follow became clearer.

* * *

[Problem 1] Sentences - Sentences contain views on ‘the existence or absence of universal conditions that determine happiness’. Classify these statements into two opposing positions, and summarize each position. (25 points)

“This is today.”

Park Il-han's eyes, who were beating on the laptop, turn blunt.

He is fluttering while holding a piece of paper with a lot of writing on it, making a silent protest at me.

The paper he is holding and shaking is the essay test paper he handed out yesterday.

It was a paper with no blanks, with traces of corrections drawn in red and the content he rewritten.

But I just smile and put the test paper in front of him.

"sudden! So you're not going to solve it?"

Hearing my playful words, he sighs and accepts the question paper.

He then begins to untie, and he seems to think that continuing to look at him while unraveling is probably a trap for me.

“Because my mother allowed it. Let’s work hard.”

A few days ago, I spoke to Il-Han Park's mother on the phone.

‘I will only trust your teacher.’

She cares only about her son's education, and doesn't seem to care much about the kind of effort that must be entailed for her education.

In the case of the first and second cases, grades were created by paying only money.

However, in the case of Il-Han Park, that method didn't work, so she seemed to have given up.

“If you use it all, tell me and I’ll edit it.”

When I say it, he just nods his head as if not to disturb him.

Training with him has been going on for several days already.

One question a day, when he completes an essay passage according to the type of problem, I make corrections, and after he writes again based on the corrections, the process of comparing it with the previous writing was repeated.

Of course, it was a tedious and difficult process, but it was a necessary part for the goal of sending him to college.

In general, people think that writing essays is a good way to write, but writing essays is not something that you can jump into with such a simple idea.

‘If you jump in thinking it will be easy, you are likely to see blood.’

In general, most of the topics presented in the dissertation have clear issues.

Therefore, after mastering the basic logic development method, it was important to make the logic development method my own through actual problems.

For that, I made a deal with him.

‘Instead of giving me time and space to write my novels freely, I will follow my guidance without words’

As a result, he often followed my guidance without hiding his displeasure.

“·················ogue.”

As I watched the guy writing fiercely, I started to organize the process for the future.

Once he had become accustomed to the writing style beyond a certain level, he was going to slowly start with the basics of other subjects.

Of course, as he is still under extreme stress from studying the subject, he must adjust the line so that he does not feel pressured through appropriate adjustments.

I've provided a breathing space for the guy who's been under pressure all along, so he'll be able to take normal classes soon.

And by that time, it was certain that the now locked [Essay] folder would also be unlocked.

Therefore, if you use a USB to make him solve the essay exam problems of the school he can go to, he will probably be able to achieve his college entrance exam stably.

However.

“Look at this, are you flirting again? I told you. First of all, it is important to keep in mind that writing an entrance exam essay is not writing. For now, I try to focus on writing as much as possible.”

Well, there was still a long way to go.

* * *

[Blue Glass: Author, is your writing more interesting these days? Oh?]

[Muansanin: I'm going to take a good look ^^ You've improved your sentences.]

[Wolf Driving: Good! Don't you have a lottery?]

[Hermit crab: The writing is very neat. I really like the readability. I really recommend it ^^]

[tkstlsfud: I'm going to watch it.]

Ilhan checking the comments on his novels.

I can't hold back the laughter that leaked out.

As Ilhan responded to each comment on his novel, he realized that he had never been able to write as enjoyable as he is today.

Although Il-han had been writing as a habit, it was an escape from everything around him, not because he really enjoyed it.

But these days, writing itself is fun.

So naturally, he developed a love for his writing, and the more he did it, the more he appreciated the people who looked at his writing.

And he knew well that all those changes were made by meeting one person.

‘The school you can go to will be different depending on how well you follow me for a year. So, until then, don’t slow down and follow along.’‘Then I will raise the score even if I hold you by the neck.’

‘Oh, don’t overdo it, there is still a long way to go.

He always walks around with a relaxed expression.

It's Jun-yeong, the instructor and director of an academy that has a job.

At first he thought he was a no-nonsense person.

Of course, I knew from my mother that Jun-young was the only perfect scorer on the SAT this year, which was famous for her non-compulsory exam, and that she became famous as a tweezers through Yo Tube View after the entrance exam.

But it was all about a distant country that didn't matter to him.

Like all the instructors before I met Junyoung, I thought that Junyoung was just something that I had to endure.

However, in reality, Jun-young was different from other instructors.

'The old Wurim? Is this site or the place where you stayed before joining the military?’

First of all, I was also the first person to hear that Il Han was writing a novel.

‘Your novels are interesting these days, so let’s do it right now’

He was the first to remind me that his writing was interesting.

‘How about teaching a class? Talk to me whenever you're having a hard time. So, when are you going to do the lottery?’

And he was also the kind of person who said that he could take a break from time to time when he was tired, unlike others who only whip him to run forward.

'Our goal is to get the lowest score in the essay. Don't worry too much, as you only have to go up to that score. One year is enough.’

Thanks to this, these days, besides solving the essay papers, I am not feeling upset even though I am slowly listening to the basic lectures of state-run research.

No, it's not completely gone, but it's definitely decreased compared to before.

However, the biggest thing Jun-young gave Il-han was not advice on entrance exams or how to write.

‘You write well, but what are you so worried about? You just have to do it the way you are now.’

The biggest and heaviest thing Joon-young gave him.

It was a faith and rest that he had never felt in his own family.

As a result, he found both of those things he had lost from the moment he graduated from elementary school.

smart-

“Ilhan, is there anything you want to eat? Shall we go eat something delicious with Mom?”

His mother's attitude also changed markedly.

It was a change that occurred after he got an even overall score in this midterm exam.

“Hold on. I'll finish it soon and leave."

“Yeah, hurry up and get ready. Think about what to eat.”

Although it was not that her attitude was changed through her mother's own change of heart, Ilhan could be grateful that the pressure on her had been significantly reduced so far.

'Yeah, it was good to see you. By the time you read your essay, it's not a joke, is it?'

Now, if I just follow Joon-young for a year, I can hope that one day her mother will understand her too.

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