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Long.

He finally closed the title page.

He had a long groan.

"What's wrong?Is there something wrong with where it's written?".

Kasumigaoka Shiyu looked at him silently.

A heart suddenly lifted.

It seems to be dangling in mid-air.

I was anxious and apprehensive.

In comparison, Zhou Xuanye, who has successfully published books and emerged.

She's still a newcomer.

There is a real need for real advice from a senior in the industry.

"How so?"

Zhou Xuanye pinched his chin, admiring the anxious expression of the black-haired beauty, and said slowly, "The writing and paragraphs are fine, but what about ..... The depiction of feelings seems to lack a sense of reality. "

"If I'm not mistaken, Senior Sister Shiyu, you..... Haven't been in a relationship yet?".

"Huh?".

"Why, why do you say that?!".

Kasumigaoka Shiyu was shocked when she heard this.

The mature and beautiful face flashed a hint of embarrassment.

Reflected on the crystal skin as white as snow, it looks very beautiful and beautiful.

"Look here, Sha Yujia's character is a quiet girl who likes to read.......

".

Zhou Xuanye's words were like a sharp scalpel.

Accurately cut out the hidden foreshadowing and article context of the girl's pride.

Her face turned pale.

"For you, it's the first character you've created, and it's the character that brings your personality straight in.

It contains some of your own features....

Therefore, you can always depict the yarn Yujia vividly and vividly. "

"But, about the emotional story of the main line...... Undoubtedly, very badly written. "

Zhou Xuanye made his own comments mercilessly.

"If it's such a work, it's not surprising that it was cut in half. "

"I, I ......".

"Woo, what should I do then?".

Kasumigaoka Shiha didn't expect it.

Zhou Xuanye said it so ruthlessly.

There is no affection at all.

Her heartstrings have been tightened.

Being under tremendous stress for long periods of time.

Blows followed.

I can no longer suppress the grievances in my heart.

Turning his head, he bit his pink cherry lips and sobbed quietly.

"It's very simple, just have a relationship. "

Zhou Xuanye handed her a tissue.

Mentally added, "Of course, it's with me." "

"Talk, fall in love?!".

Kasumigaoka's watery and beautiful eyes are full of crystal tears

The handsome face of the young man opposite is clearly reflected.

The face of the pear blossom with rain is particularly delicate.

At this moment, her mood suddenly became very complicated.

"That's right, if you can't write a good article, it's nothing more than a lack of realism. "

"False feelings, after all, it is difficult to capture the reader's heart. "

Zhou Xuanye continued to talk eloquently

"Believe me, this is the optimal solution. "

End of discourse.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu inevitably fell into a long contemplation.

Zhou Xuanye was not in a hurry.

The fish has already bitten the hook.

It's only a matter of time before you catch the fish.

As an experienced "angler".

The last thing Zhou Xuanye lacks is patience.

"Xuanye-kun...... I understand. "

After a long time.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu seems to have finally figured it out.

This beautiful black silk girl with a beautiful posture raised her beautiful head and stared at the young man seriously with her watery red eyes.

"Please, please try something with me as a couple!"

"Hmm, ahem......".

Zhou Xuanye, who was drinking water, almost couldn't hold back a mouthful of water and squirted out.

Although it is said that Kasumigaoka Shiyu was moved.

But it seems like the pace is a little too fast, right?

"Please don't get me wrong..... I'm not talking about those things. "

Kasumigaoka Shiyu also blushed a little.

The white and delicate slender fingers gently pinched the soft and smooth palms.

Under the table, the pair of slender jade legs wrapped in thin and transparent black silk, round and straight, were tightly together.

The white skin of the light ski is faintly visible in the fine and delicate black silk, reflecting the shimmer of oily and elastic.

"I—I mainly want you to show me a little bit of it...... Those things couples do!".

"But, is that okay?".

“........"

"Since, senior sister, if you think so, I will definitely help. "

Zhou Xuanye pretended to be an innocent teenager.

The delicate handsome man blushed slightly.

"It's just that I don't know much about these doorways. "

"It's okay, I'm grateful for your help. "

"For specific matters, I will look up the strategy on the Internet..... Thank you, Genya-kun. "

With the beautiful face of Kasumigaoka Shiyu.

A relieved smile blooms again.

Zhou Xuanye also received this reward in an instant.

【Ding...... The host interacts with the daughter of the Heavenly Destiny, Kasumigaoka Shiyu, which greatly increases her favorability. 】

[Reward: The first level of the Great Yan Jue *1].

"It's not in vain that I've worked so hard to get wool...... Finally, a good trick has been revealed!".

Zhou Xuanye's face was instantly replaced by surprise.

Unexpectedly, the sexy black silk senior sister directly broke out a little best for him.

The Great Yan Decision is an original exercise created by the Great Yan Divine Monarch located in the extreme west of the human realm in the Legend of Mortal Demon Cultivation.

Specializing in powerful divine consciousness and cultivating the art of distraction, it is divided into seven layers.

The main function is to enhance the divine consciousness of immortal cultivators.

Han Lao Mo in the original book is because after cultivating the Great Yan Decision, his divine sense is extremely powerful.

You can even skip the level to challenge opponents who are higher than your level.

"It's cool, with the strength of my current divine consciousness, after cultivating the Great Yan Decision, isn't that equivalent to adding wings to a tiger!?"

Zhou Xuanye's divine sense was far beyond that of his fellow monks.

After cultivating the Great Yan Decision.

Presumably, its own strength is taking off again!

Looking at the pretty face is ruddy, the beautiful eyes are like water, and the figure is bewitching.

The expression on Zhou Xuanye's face suddenly became more gentle.

"Let's explode some more gold coins, senior sister. "

.........

"A good day!".

Not only did I make an appointment with the beautiful editor Machida Yuanko, but I also received a love invitation from Kasumigaoka Shiyu....... Tut-tut, it's really cool and crooked~~".

When Zhou Xuanye stepped on the afterglow of the sunset at sunset, whistled, and returned home leisurely.

Open the gate with the key.

was stunned to find that there was a pair of women's high heels at the door of his entrance.

Pure black high heels, small size, small and delicate appearance.

It's expensive to look at.