Comprehensive comics: I am the master of depressive comics

Miyamae Ken reviews manga, and needs to observe the artwork, style, and plot of the work.

"This painter.... It's really good, is it really a trumpet of a veteran cartoonist. "

Miyamae Ken excludes the newcomer manga artist who was previously speculated, after all, the manga drawing can best reflect the author's skills, and the drawing worker carries the experience and technology of the manga author.

No, it should not be a senior cartoonist, after all, no one should leave their faces and come to the Newcomer Award to fry fish.

Most of them are the assistants of a certain cartoonist, publishing new works, after all, many senior cartoonists' first comics are for old cartoonists as assistants, gradually learned and published.

"But then again, the style of this manga is a bit like Ito Wakaba-sensei's "Terror Tremors".

Miyamae thought carefully, constantly thinking of manga artists/assistants who were similar to the manga style.

After thinking for a while, Miyamae Jian still gave up, after all, no matter how good the painting is, the plot is useless.

This is the best manga artist that Miyamae Ken has met today.

"If the plot is also good, there should not be much problem in winning the silver reward. He thought so.

Eyes constantly examine the comic, now see how the plot is, if you can, leave it to the editor-in-chief for review.

The story begins with the self-narration of Octopus Crackle.

Octopuses crackle on the planet of happiness and come to Earth in order to make people happy.

When there is no food, Shizuka in front of me reaches out to it.

In order to repay Shizuka, Octopus gives her props that can fly, but Shizuka refuses. "Even if you can fly in the sky, it won't change anything.

Miyamae Ken looked down, and Shizuka's bag had a lot of obscenities on it.

"Is it really a school bullying theme?" after

which Shizuka tells her story to Octopus, who wants to invite her to Happy Planet. But Shizuka refused, with an uncomfortable expression on her face.

"I really want Shizuka to smile a little more." The octopus chirped.

When Miyamae Jian sees the middle of the first episode, that is, about page 28, the plot changes from warm to melancholy.

I saw a large picture, Shizuka hanging on the beam, and a bench at her feet, which can be thought to be a suicide scene.

..........

Miyamae Jian only felt a buzz in his head, and he didn't expect the plot to unfold like this.

And after that? How to write the plot? With doubts, Miyamae Jian continued to look down.

Octopus Crack reverses time with the Happy Camera, stretching the timeline to yesterday when he took a picture with Shizuka. Octopus is curious about why Shizuka is committing suicide, so he proposes to her: go to school with her.

The first sentence ended, and the sword in front of the palace did not come to mind.

"Is Shizuka being bullied at school? Are they the girls from the previous episodes, can Octopus Crackle save Shizuka?"

Miyazen Ken kept asking questions, and now his interest was piqued, making him want to continue watching.

In fact, seeing this, Miyamae Jian already thinks that this is a masterpiece.

This opening narrative is straightforward and straightforward, without dragging any mud. The style and plot are quite good, and they can also pique the reader's interest.

"It looks like this comic is going to be selected. "

Every manga artist has their own evaluation criteria, and Miyamae Ken believes that the beginning of the manga is extremely important, which is the key to attracting readers.

"The story behind should be the same as Doraemon, Octopus Crackle takes out various props to help Shizuka, it should be quite warm. With

such an idea, Miyamae Jian continued to look down.

With the help of Octopus Crack, Shizuka successfully answers the teacher's question, and the students in the classroom are surprised, except for Shinna behind her.

"Sure enough, I guessed correctly, the plot direction is that the octopus crackles to help Shizuka get rid of the bullying. Seeing

this scene, Gongqian Jian firmed his previous speculation, and continued to look down with a smile.

Shinna asks Shizuka to go to the sports warehouse at noon, but Shizuka hesitates. Seeing this, the octopus offered her to go to the banquet instead of her.

"I'll make the relationship between the two better," Octopus Crack went to the banquet with this thought.

A large word snapped

to occupy a square, and the octopus crackled fake Shizuka and fell to the ground. The truth Nai in front of him kept speaking viciously, and even took out a pencil and stabbed at it.

[Isn't this plot going a little wrong, shouldn't it be a healing plot

?] [Is Shinna a bully? Why would she bully Shizuka?]

Miyamae Ken sighed, and at the same time such a thought came to mind. At the end of the second episode, I realized that it was related to Shinnai's father.

The third episode mainly tells the story of Shinna's design, which takes Shizuka's dog Charlie away from her side. In order to reverse this ending, Octopus Crack constantly uses the Happy Camera and retreats to the past.

On the last page of this sentence, the drawing is enlarged here, portraying the expressions of Shizuka and Shinna, which makes Miyamae Ken's heart tighten. And the third episode ends here.

Seeing the manga in the hand of the sword in front of the palace here, he was excited and kept muttering.

"This work is a masterpiece, at least it is also a silver award or above, if the later plot has maintained this level."

Miyamae Jian stood up a little excitedly, the fat on his body constantly swaying in his sportswear, you can imagine that he wants to be very happy, especially by discovering a work with great potential.

The sound of the sword in front of the palace attracted the attention of the editors around him, and many people looked towards him.

"Screenwriter Miyamae Sword, has something happened?

A mature female editor dressed in professional clothes with eyes asked.

"Sorry, sorry. I'm a little too excited to see good work.

Miyamae Jian bent down and bowed, apologizing to everyone in the editing room, after all, he had affected their censorship.

Everyone quickly responded: let him not be so restrained, it is normal to find good works excited.

However, a passage from the sword in front of the palace also aroused their interest, what kind of work made him so excited. Everyone hurriedly stopped their work and gathered around him.

Seeing everyone's movements, Gongqian Jian consciously walked towards the photocopier, printed five copies and distributed them to everyone.

Ten minutes later, there was a whole uproar in the editing room.

"It's really nice that this kind of subject matter about school bullying is really rare, and it is written so well.

"Yes, especially its character portrayal is very good, and it also gives a sense of substitution."

"The title Octopus Crack's Original Sin, I guess it was Octopus Crack who kindly helped Shizuka, and it turned out to be a bad thing."

"This comic should be able to hit the gold award of the Newcomer Award, as long as there is not much problem with the plot later." "

Many editors continue to put forward their own opinions, and in a large company like Shueisha the professional quality of every editor is good, after all, the poor ones are eliminated early and kicked out of the company.

After Miyamae Ken handed in the manga, he once again set his eyes on the card he sent.

"Kamiya-sensei, it's really amazing to be able to draw such works. "