"Have you waited long?"
In a coffee shop not far away, Xia Chuan was replying to pictures and content sent by friends on his mobile phone. It wasn't until he heard Kasumigaoka Shiu's voice that he raised his head slightly.
The first thing that caught his eye was a pair of voluptuous legs, covering Among the black pantyhose, and then there are Kasumigaoka Shiha's graceful body curves and her exquisite appearance.
"It's bad behavior to stare at a beautiful girl like this"
"Feel sorry."
Xia Chuan smiled and then asked the waiter to add more coffee.
"But there's nothing we can do about it. After all, isn't the senior a rare and beautiful girl?"
Kasumigaoka Shiyu did not deny this. He took the opportunity to sit across from Xia Chuan, and he also had some personality analysis of this relatively new junior student.
After ordering another coffee and delivering it, the steaming heat filled the air on both sides. Gaze, Kasumigaoka Shiyu spoke first
"Natsu Chuan-kun, since you call me senior, I will call you junior from now on, how about that?"
She raised her head slightly, raised the medium-sized coffee cup, and tasted the taste with her red lips, and said with a hint of smile in her eyes.
"Of course there is no problem with this."
Xia Chuan didn't mind such a title. On the contrary, it was a step forward in the relationship between the two parties.
"So, junior, let’s get back to the topic.......As you said at the book signing, I want to hear what you think of"Metronome of Love" I wrote, and what are the shortcomings?"
Kasumigaoka Shiyu asked straight to the point.
For her, she was very touched that Natsu Chuan could support her.
But what Natsu Chuan had mentioned about the novel before was what she cared about at the moment.
She once thought that light novels were nothing. It is a very simple thing, and the first volume is also very beautifully completed. It can attract so many people, which is already a very good achievement for a newly debuted light novel author.
But... it is not enough.
Because She is an arrogant literary girl. Since she is determined to become a light novel author, she must be the best.
Especially the second volume is not very effective, which is a situation she has never imagined since writing the novel.
Xia Chuan Shao is in After circling the coffee cup a few times, he slowly spoke.:
"Shiyu-senpai, Love Metronome is a good work among light novels. The characters are vivid and the plot is very clever. If it is the end of the first volume, it will be a good work. But if it continues to be postponed, I I don’t think it will achieve much."
When it came to the point that troubled Kasumigaoka Shiyu the most, she didn't even care that the other party directly called her Shiyu-senpai, and quickly asked:"Why?"
"Because the relationship between Naoto and Sayuka in the first volume is too rich, like a love story that comes naturally"
"The content of only one volume is naturally enough to satisfy the senses, but if two or three volumes are added, readers will soon feel bored."
"Is there anything wrong with this? Romance novels are like this."
Xia Chuan stretched out his index finger and shook it
"Therefore, apart from those master-level works of love novels, who can achieve good results in the market? Shiyu-senpai should not think that just one work is already a master-level figure in love literature. Seeing that
Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was speechless, Xia Chuan continued:
"There are only female protagonists and male protagonists in this book. No matter what happens, I know how the other person will grow in love, so it will become more and more boring to continue reading."
Speaking of this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu also understood the problem.
Indeed, because of this, the content of the second volume of"Love Metronome" has gradually made Kasumigaoka Shiyu feel strenuous, and she no longer feels as comfortable as when she first started.
"Regarding the content of the second volume, has Senior Shiyu started writing?"
This sudden question made Kasumigaoka Shiyu stunned.
"I put pen to paper... but it was rejected."
As he spoke, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's eyes flickered slightly.
"Do you have a belt?"
Kasumigaoka Shiyu nodded slightly. She was used to bringing her laptop with her, just so that she could write down the inspiration she saw on the road occasionally.
Without Xia Chuan's continued questioning, Kasumigaoka Shiyu took the initiative to open the notebook and display the contents. To Xia Chuan.
This is a big taboo for an author. For some reason, she has an inexplicable trust in Xia Chuan at this moment.
Xia Chuan scanned them one by one, and time slowly passed by.
"Times have changed, Shiyu-senpai."
Xia Chuan sighed.
"If you want your works to sell well, you must first understand the market. Nowadays, the mainstream consumer groups of light novels are students and young people who are out and about in society. In this increasingly impetuous era, you cannot expect that many people will be willing to calm down and enjoy it. Those beautiful works of pure love."
Kasumigaoka Shiyu naturally realized this, and couldn't help but look at Xia Chuan with a confused expression:"Is there really no future for my works?
When he got to the point, Xia Chuan raised the corner of his mouth and said,"I have an idea. Senior Sister Shiyu might as well add a character to it."
Kasumigaoka Shiyu quickly figured it out:"You mean to let the male protagonist or the female protagonist have a harem?""
"It doesn’t have to be a harem. Since the senior wants to write a light novel in a series, how can the plot always be pure and pure without ups and downs?"
"The senior can also design a few more characters, or have several men compete for the heroine, or a new supporting female character enters the scene to compete with the heroine."
"In this way, not only the theme of the story is expanded, but the story can also have ups and downs and new ideas. Anyway, isn't plot design your strong point, Shiyu-senpai?"
Xia Chuan leaned on the chair and talked. Anyway, he didn't continue the idea of copying the public, so what's the harm in sharing the knowledge about the stock market that he didn't need with Kasumigaoka Shiyu. After listening to Xia Chuan
's opinions, his inspiration was like a water pump. The words appeared in Kasumigaoka Shiyu's mind.
Those red pupils bloomed like golden light. Kasumigaoka Shiyu quickly retrieved his notebook, opened the memo and quickly recorded the inspiration on it. It wasn't until the coffee had turned cold for a while that Kasumigaoka Shiyu stopped. hands typing keyboard
"Huh~"
He breathed a long sigh of relief, and Kasumigaoka Shiyu looked at Xia Chuan with his eyes wandering.
"Thanks to senior Xia Chuan, I probably have an idea for the direction of the second volume!
Xia Chuan responded with a smile:"Then I'm looking forward to the content of Shiyu-senpai's second volume.""
Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu nodded heavily, as if he thought of something again. He hesitated and said,"Can you give me your email address? If possible, I would like to ask you to taste the content of the second volume first."
Xia Chuan's smile did not diminish.
For Kasumigaoka Shiyu now, loyal fans and helping her works are the most effective offensive.
Just like now, isn't this senior's favorability going up?
It's not in vain for him. Yesterday I stayed up all night reading"Metronome of Love" and I came here specially to attend the book signing today.
Natsukawa took out his mobile phone, clicked on the email code with a very skillful movement, then stretched out his hand to Kasumigaoka Shiu, and said at the same time:
"Am I the first boy who has taken the initiative to add his email address to Shiyu-senpai?"
Kasumigaoka Shiyu was stunned when he heard this, then added Xia Chuan to his contacts and looked at Xia Chuan with a smile.
"Of course, you are the first boy I have taken the initiative to join, Junior Xia Chuan~"
"That's really fun, Shiyu-senpai."
Originally, I wanted to see if this junior would have any expression because of her special words, but when Kasumigaoka Shiyu saw Xia Chuan's smiling expression, she felt her heart flutter. However,
Kasumigaoka Shiyu quickly sorted out her thoughts and deliberately said Glancing at Xia Chuan
"I seem to know why Junior Xia Chuan is so popular in school, so please contact me via email later, Senior Xia Chuan~"
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