Okay.

Although I don’t want to admit it, the ending is still a mess. o(╥﹏╥)o

I said I would write a book with a million words, and it was indeed completed, but it still has a bad ending.

However, let me quibble in the end.

It has been nine months since the beginning of the book, and it has more than 1.1 million words.

It is the longest and best book I have ever written.

There is absolutely no change of author in the middle, the author typed it purely by hand! ! !

To be honest, this book has a lot of problems.

I personally think that it has completely collapsed since the beginning of 500,000.

Of course, you may think it is normal that it was earlier. ┗( T﹏T )┛ Surrender

Because of the lack of quantity and my limited ability.

After all, the author has never written a long novel, and the previous one was also 600,000...

There are also comments, and I basically read them at the beginning.

Starting from 300,000, there were too many scolds later, so I didn’t read it much.

It was really broken, and I didn’t dare to open a reader group, for fear of being scolded in the group. ●| ̄|_I'm so down on my knees

Also, thank you for your small gifts.

I can see them in the background, muah! ٩( 'ω' )و Crab!

After that, let me summarize the criticisms.

The pace is slow, it's dragging, it's suppressing the combat power, and the character design is shitty, etc.

First of all, the pace is slow and dragging.

For example, it took four months to write a competition...

Originally, the national competition chapter was planned to end with a maximum of 200,000 words.

But because it is the biggest climax of the whole book, I want to write it very hard, very grand, etc.

In the end, you also saw that I didn't grasp it, and I didn't know how to adjust the pace in the middle. o(╥﹏╥)o

Then it became a competition with 500,000 words, which couldn't be more watery.

Really, I couldn't stand it myself, so I had to bite the bullet and write it down.

Secondly, it's suppressing the combat power.

I first learned about this thing when I saw readers complaining. (T▽T)

After understanding it, there is no quibble, it is indeed suppressing the combat power.

The main reason was that I didn't know about this thing at the beginning, and I was afraid that the protagonist's combat power would collapse if he upgraded too quickly.

So I subconsciously suppressed the combat power, which made people feel very uncomfortable. ●| ̄|_ I knelt down again.

Next, as for the bad character design, I can only say that the author has not practiced enough.

In fact, this book is an attempt, because I don't know how to do character design at all.

Pure newbie. (T ^ T)

Of course, I have to brag that the first 100,000 words are simply explosive. ๑乛◡乛๑

I, the author, don't know how to write the chapter of the mechanical planet. (✪ω✪)

Ahem!

Let's get back to the point.

It's a pure high start and low end, and it's a mess in the later stage.

I felt it was okay in the beginning, and the reaction was the most intense when the Zhong Peng chapter started.

The same reason was used at that time. I wanted to write a grand feeling, but I didn't write it clearly, and wrote a history...

The prelude to the Su Lin Academy chapter was also too long.

This is subconscious, I just started to write nonsense, and I don't know where to start if I want to adjust.

I really don't read much and don't have much experience. o(╥﹏╥)o

But I was so moved to see this, they are all true fans, I just cried. (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`)

I can't help it, I'll just briefly talk about the final plot and some pitfalls.

I don't know how many years later.

Anyway, the protagonist is promoted, and each creature corresponds to the awakening of the godhood, and there are more than a dozen invincible fields.

In the end, he became the ruler of the federation, surpassing the god king level, and became the only creator-level strongman.

All the creatures under his command surpassed the outer god level, reaching the origin level, and immortal.

A bunch of alien races came to invade, and the protagonist pushed them with both hands, invincible in the world.

Then he was awesome, and had a bunch of confidantes...

That's about it. ╮(─▽─)╭

There are still many pitfalls.

Let's talk slowly, first of all, the subsequent level division.

In the text, it is not very clear, so I will mark it here directly.

Subsequent levels of creatures: True God, Lord God, Old God, Dominator, Outer God

Subsequent levels of Creator: Lower God, Middle God, Upper God, Lord God, God King

Note: In the later stage, all the protagonists surpass the known levels.

Now, let's talk about the pit.

The ten principals and eight star commanders are all set as Lord Gods.

The God of the Federation is set as God King, which is a realm that no one can reach.

In the end, he will definitely be surpassed by the protagonist, there is no doubt about it.

As for Ouyang Na, the setting is a fifth-level creator, with emperor-level creatures, half a step into God.

Unfortunately, the number of appearances is too small.

Also, the coordinates of the lich planet.

The initial setting is that there are ten lich generals and the lich god.

Prepare to put it in the later stage.

The protagonist uses the portal to enter the lich planet.

Purify it and start colonization.

As for the setting of the lich generals, each person represents a weapon, ranging from monarch to true god.

There are swords, knives, guns, shields, bows, spells, axes, claws, hammers, cannons, and ten great generals!

The God of Liches, originally the main god.

But if I really want to write about it, I guess I have to raise the level.

That's about it for the Lich chapter, and then there's Rebrando.

This thing is also a lead, but the author didn't think much about it when he added it.

It's basically about him being resurrected, and his clones are all over the universe.

Later, he declared war on the Federation, and everyone tried to stop him from resurrecting, but it didn't work.

In the end, facing a desperate situation, the protagonist appeared, directly saved the world, and was completely invincible.

That's about it.

At this point, most of the things have actually been said.

Take a look, there are still a lot of things to write about later.

But I still have to choose to finish it.

I definitely can't throw the gun.

But if I continue to write, it will be boring and long, and it will continue to drag.

You are not interesting to read, and I am not interesting to write. (T ^ T)

The main reason is that the timeline of the national competition is too long, which leads to the collapse of the follow-up.

My fault! ! ! (.﹏.*) Sorry

As for the new book, I won't go into details about the high-level martial arts theme.

If it fails, it will be interrupted for more than 100,000 times, and you will be embarrassed when you read it. 〒▽〒

We are destined to be together, and I will naturally be able to find it in the bookstore.

However, if the new book has a chance to exceed 500,000, I believe I can write it better this time!

I must write a truly complete book! ! !

Ahem.

Then.

That's all I have to say.

It's finally time to say goodbye.

Thank you readers for your company until now!

Accompany me through the darkest time.

The mountains are high and the roads are long, and the road is long and difficult. This long road of life is indeed interesting.

Finally.

Accompany you to drink and laugh for three thousand times, don't talk about parting sorrow.

Goodbye, everyone!

July 8, 2023.

1:33 am.

Cloudy.

(End of this book)

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