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Chapter 67 Qian Wenlin: As long as you have the skills to pass the manuscript!

Author: Dr. Silver

Chapter 67 Qian Wenlin: As long as you have the skills to pass the manuscript!

Qian Quan returned to his dormitory and took a brief inventory of his property.

Not counting Lin Xiaohuang's card, he has more than 400,000 in cash. When the prize money from the martial arts competition comes down, it will exceed 500,000 again.

However, he has decided that once the bonus is paid, he will first give 30,000 to his parents.

In addition to cash, he also has a black and red Funing No. 1 card and 20 shopping cards worth a total of 100,000 yuan.

In addition, the annual scholarship of 50,000 yuan set by Lin Xiaohuang for him will definitely not be spent in full.

For a college student, there is no need to worry about money for the next four years.

Study hard, experience college life well, and do more meaningful things.

As the old saying goes, money strengthens the courage of heroes. In terms of rules in the secular sense, money is indeed one of the most effective means of giving people confidence.

Qian Quan put away all kinds of cards, and he was going to practice "Wudang Small Circuit Kung Fu", also known as "Wudang Quiet Kung Fu".

He gained a lot from this meeting with Gong Xuanzhu.

The other party has studied martial arts intensively for decades and has rich theoretical and practical experience. Many of his insights are refreshing to Qian Quan.

For example, he mentioned that the body is the altar of man, and the spirit is the god it worships. Therefore, we must always keep the body strong, clean and healthy, and constantly toil and temper, so that the spirit can always remain resilient and strong.

This is the meaning of martial arts training.

For example, when he talked about the unity of man and nature, he gave an example: when a person stands in the wild, butterflies and sparrows dare not approach him because people have a unique "popularity". The only way is to eliminate the popularity and let the butterflies fly around you and the sparrows fall on you.

Your shoulders are truly integrated into nature.

The first one talks about movement, and the second one talks about stillness.

Qian Quan has master-level Wing Chun Kung Fu, and his "moving" Kung Fu has reached the top, so exploring "quiet Kung Fu" has more practical significance for him.

In fact, in real life, many political and business leaders are keen to meditate and meditate, which is also a manifestation of practicing meditation.

Qian Quan stood facing south, closed his eyes and mouth, relaxed his whole body, calmed his mind, concentrated his attention, fine-tuned his breathing, concentrated on his Dantian, and his breath naturally rose, through the Weilu point, directly to the back, up to the Niwan, and then from the Niwan.

The pill goes to the Yintang, to the nose, the nose to the throat, the throat to the back, the back to the front of the heart, and then returns to the Dantian...

This goes on and on again and again, depending on the heaven and the earth, the breath becomes stronger (breathing becomes smoother and longer, the heartbeat becomes more stable), and the spirit becomes enlightened (the energy is stronger, the thinking becomes clearer).

The next day, Qian Quan and his roommates went to class as normal.

Before he arrived at the classroom, he unexpectedly received a message from Li Zihe, who asked him to have a meal with him at noon and said he had something important to discuss.

Qian Quan remembered that after the martial arts competition, he also found him and seemed to have something to say. Later, he changed his mind temporarily because he saw Zhao Chunjia.

Qian Quan was also a little curious, secretly guessing that he was definitely not here to perform a show of kicking rocks this time, and replied "Okay".

There are two ancient history classes this morning, and they are also taught by Professor Zhou Wenhan, who is very popular among the students.

Everyone privately likes to call him "Angry Old Zhou" because he is very passionate in class and has clear views. He can make the students' blood boil when he talks about ancient history.

For example, every time Professor Zhou gives the first class to freshmen, he will ask them the same two questions:

"Do you know which are the four major ancient civilizations in the world?"

Almost all students can answer this question:

"Old Babylon, Ancient Egypt, Ancient India and China."

After getting the answer, he will then ask: "Do you know why the first three ancient civilizations are prefixed with the word "ancient", but China does not need to?"

At least most of the students cannot answer this question.

Whenever this happens, Professor Zhou will announce the answer impassionedly:

“Because China’s 5,000-year history of splendid civilization has stretched from the day it emerged to the present day and has gone through vicissitudes of life without any gaps!”

Then he will give everyone popular science about why the history of Chinese civilization is a history of benevolence, justice, propriety, wisdom, trust, gentleness, humility and humility, as well as the courage to fight against heaven and earth.

“Moderateness, humility, gentleness, and reserve are our national spirit, but speaking out when injustice is not done and fighting bravely are also our national background.

“If you look through our ancient mythology history, you will find that Pangu opened the sky, Nuwa mended the sky, Shennong tasted the herbs, Houyi shot the sun, Kuafu chased the sun, Jingwei filled the sea, Dayu controlled the floods, and Foolish Old Man moved the mountains, all are positive and positive.

, nothing to be afraid of!

"So I often tell my students that the history of Chinese civilization is not only a history of moral etiquette of love and peace, but also a history of unyielding heroes who fought against oppression and fought against oppression!"

The fresh-blooded and energetic freshmen could not withstand this heart-stirring encouragement, and they felt proud every minute!

It was under this tone that Professor Zhou Wenhan started his teaching journey in the new semester.

In today's class, he somehow brought the topic to the point where some scholars and netizens at home and abroad believed that China did not have a civilization history of 5,000 years, but at most 3,000 years. Lao Zhou was angry again.

"What's the saddest thing about this matter? My classmates! It's not their disapproval, but that some of us recognize their disapproval! We have succumbed to their standards!

"Let me tell you, these scholars in the West may not mean to slander or discredit our history, although they never mind doing so. Just take this matter as an example. What they want more is the right to speak and definition.

right!

“What is civilization and what is the history of civilization must abide by their standards and listen to their definition!

"Have you noticed, students, what have Western countries been doing in these years? Seizing the right to speak, the right to speak in all walks of life!

"What is civilization, what is fashion, what is culture, what is qualified, and what are universal values, all are subject to them, do you understand?

“With the right to speak and the right to set standards, you have the right to extort wealth, suppress and throw dirty water!

"Therefore, students, take history as a mirror, you must not only face up to the gap, but also recognize the essence, and you must not blindly follow it."

One of the reasons why Professor Zhou's history classes are popular is that he can combine the history classes with some current hot topics, making you feel excited and thoughtful after listening.

Of course, Professor Zhou's three views are also very upright, and he often debates with his colleagues on some topics.

After class in the morning, Qian Quan did not go to dinner with his roommates, but left the school directly and took a taxi to meet Li Zihe.

When they arrived at the agreed place, they found that Li Zhiyi was also there.

"Hey, it's you, brother and sister, who are here together?" Qian Quan was surprised.

"The things we are going to talk about today are related to the three of us. Please sit down quickly." Li Zihe greeted.

Li Zhiyi waved his hand at Qian Quan as a greeting.

"You have no class this morning?" Qian Quan asked Li Zhiyi.

"Yes, after two classes, my brother and I will come to see you."

"Oh, you've been waiting for a long time."

"Indeed." Li Zhiyi smiled and nodded.

Li Zihe was in a trance as he listened to the conversation between the two of them.

When did my sister become so cheerful and talkative?

When did they become so familiar?

And how many times have they met in private?

"What are we talking about today?" Qian Quan asked after sitting down.

Li Zihe calmed down and said, "Let's talk business."

"Huh?" Qian Quan was confused.

Li Zihe adjusted his tone: "Didn't you mention to me before that the chess software and Go software written by Ah Jiu are suitable for development and promotion? I am planning to set up a company to do this.

"Of course, it's not just about playing chess and Go, it's just about using them for cutting."

"I understand, you are really strong in action." Qian Quan gave a thumbs up, "But why did you come to me?"

"Invite you to buy shares." Li Zihe said bluntly.

"Huh?" Qian Quan was confused again, but then he understood, "I can invest some money, but I'm afraid it won't be enough."

"You don't have to worry about the investment, I've already taken care of it."

"What do you mean, you got angel investment?" Qian Quan has also watched business war movies.

"You can say that." Li Zihe smiled.

"Which angel?"

When Li Zhi heard this, he suddenly pursed his lips and smiled.

Li Zihe's expression remained unchanged, he paused and said, "Father."

Qian Quan: "..." Sure enough, every father is an angel with wings.

Li Zihe coughed and said, "If you count as a technical investor, you will get 5% of the shares."

"I don't understand technology, I study history."

"I know, but Ah Jiu said that you are needed to train the system. You happen to be a teacher major, so you can be considered a professional counterpart. Moreover, this idea was also the first one you proposed..."

"That 5% is too much. Otherwise, I'll pay some money."

"I just said that I am planning to use chess and Go as an entry point to build a systematic AI education software. An additional 50,000 to 100,000 yuan does not mean much."

"I'll invest 110,000."

Li Zhi burst into laughter.

"Haha, it's quite funny." Li Zihe was not amused by Qian Quan, but when he saw his sister laughing, he felt helpless.

Qian Quan stopped joking and asked: "What is the name of the company?"

"Tentatively, 'one nine gets nine'."

"Good name," Qian Quan laughed, "Actually, I have always had a wish, that is, we can have an educational software designed for children that is universally accessible and requires facial recognition to log in.

"Then the backend of this software can be linked to the national missing children's photo database, and once the system matches, it will give a warning.

"Of course, this is just my wild imagination as a layman and has no scientific basis."

Li Zhiyi listened thoughtfully.

Li Zihe said: "According to the current development speed of artificial intelligence, what you said should be realized soon."

Qian Quan nodded and said: "However, I hope it is a closed system, otherwise many new problems will arise."

Li Zihe had a keen sense of smell and asked: "You seem to be very interested in artificial intelligence?"

"It's fashionable. Now everyone around is paying attention." Qian Quan didn't hear the underlying meaning at all.

"Oh, what do you think of the future of artificial intelligence?" Li Zihe continued to ask.

“I, rationally, feel that advanced tools should not be rejected, as they represent the future after all;

“But I’m a little worried emotionally, not knowing where artificial intelligence will take mankind.

“So, I sometimes have full confidence in human beings and feel that human intelligence can create so many magical tools;

"Sometimes I am very pessimistic. I feel that we humans are heading for a self-destructive path. Even if we know that we will create a monster, we will never stop. Instead, we will chase each other like a race.

"After all, with the new iterations of the Internet world, if you are behind for a year, it may be a lifetime."

"That's not something we can control. If one day artificial intelligence really gives birth to self-awareness, all the people will turn off the electricity and unplug the Internet cable." Li Zihe said.

Qian Quan smiled, then turned to ask Li Zhiyi: "Classmate Ahjiu, what do you think the 'consciousness' displayed by the current artificial intelligence is about?"

Li Zhiyi said: "Complete the instructions according to the established path."

Qian Quan didn’t understand the terminology, but he understood the meaning, and sighed: “In the future, the saying ‘the Internet has memory’ might become a reality.”

The three of them chatted while eating, and finally Qian Quan confirmed that he would invest in the "One Nine Gets Nine" technology company.

Throughout the whole process, Li Zihe did not mention a single topic related to kung fu, although he had many questions to ask.

…

Guangming Middle School.

Qian Wenlin was sitting alone in the office, typing on the keyboard intently.

The manuscript I submitted last time finally received a positive response from the editor (not a rejection reply). I thought the manuscript was of excellent quality and met the acceptance criteria, but the ending concept needed to be modified.

According to the setting of Qian Wenlin's original manuscript, after the male protagonist cheated on his first love girlfriend several times, the prodigal son finally turned around and returned to his family.

In the last scene of the novel, the male protagonist takes his wife and son to a shopping mall and takes the escalator from bottom to top. His first love girlfriend takes the elevator from top to bottom alone. When the two of them cross paths, the two exchange a faint look that reminds them of the past.

.

The editor believes that this treatment is too understated, and the male protagonist's reflection is not strong enough. It is suspected of being poorly directed. He wants to revise the ending and sublimate it.

So Qian Wenlin decided to add a paragraph and arranged for the male protagonist to cheat on his first love girlfriend for the last time in the office under the coercion of her. In the fierce conflict between soul and body, he repented and returned to innocence.

In this affair, the first girlfriend took the full initiative, showing an evil image that tempted Adam and Eve to eat apples.

She hugged the male protagonist tightly, spoke hot and false words of love, and took the initiative to get closer and forcefully ask for a kiss.

"Her lips were like an inescapable karmic fire that burned through his whole body from the inside out. In ecstasy, he was burned to ashes, his whole body was transparent, his soul and body were completely distorted, and his whole person presented a kind of

That state of ecstasy that only exists in dreams."

"He is no longer a person, his humanity as a human being has disappeared. He has transformed into desire itself, surrendering to her, surrendering to desire, full of desire and joy!"

…

"That's not admiration, absolutely not! It's just the instinct of an animal! He has become a slave of desire! Weak! Despicable! Even worse than a male prostitute!"

"What kind of rekindled old relationship? It's just the past filtered by time that seems unusual. In fact, at this moment, he is disgusting and dirty!"

…

In the revised version, Qian Wenlin mercilessly criticized and flogged the male protagonist, and finally arranged for the male protagonist's wife to file for divorce, run away from home, and travel to relax.

The hero's first girlfriend had an inappropriate relationship with a colleague and had a bad influence. She was reported internally and lost her job.

After that, the male protagonist takes his children around the world to find a wife.

The last scene is that the male protagonist is standing on the street with his children, squatting on the ground and repenting, crying bitterly.

And his first love girlfriend, who had just completed the resignation procedures, drove by in his car, rolled down the window, looked at him expressionlessly, then rolled up the window and drove away.

Qian Wenlin sent the revised version to the editor.

Not long after, the editor replied: "Perfect! I will go through the process with the editor-in-chief and will get back to you as soon as I have the results."

If the editor says this, it’s basically settled.

"OK."

After Qian Wenlin replied to the message, he let out a breath and leaned back in his chair, feeling extremely happy.

After lunch, colleagues returned to the office one after another.

The colleague who was the first to publish an article in "Story Monthly" and received a royalties of 5,000 yuan saw Qian Wenlin half-lying on a chair with a thoughtful expression on his face and asked: "Old Qian, haven't you gone to dinner yet?"

"Here you go, I was just editing the message."

"What editor?"

"As for the editor of "Story Monthly", didn't you suggest that we submit articles before? I just took the time to write a short novel some time ago and submitted it casually.

"Then their editor contacted me today and asked me to change the ending, so I changed it and sent it back. Then the editor asked me to go through the process with the editor in chief, and asked me to continue waiting for a reply. I didn't know what it meant."

"He said he would go through the process with the editor-in-chief?"

"Well, that's what I said."

"Then it's most likely that the manuscript is overdue. The editor will apply for scheduling."

"Really? I just wrote it casually. Let's wait and see."

"..."

What’s with Lao Qian’s expression of “I’ve just finished the draft, as long as I have the skills”?

Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, don’t bully the middle-aged and poor?

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