Dad's comic life

"It's really a day."

Seeing the reason for retreating, Hao Ren was dumbfounded.

It's not because his plot is bad, nor is it because he was censored.

The problem lies in the character's skills.

That's right, it's the skill of playing football.

People from the Football Association think that the young football player's playing skills are too unscientific.

In other words, the actions and rules designed for the characters in "Captain" made the officials of the Football Association feel that Newton's coffin could not be suppressed.

But it's no wonder that in his previous life, Hao Ren often felt that the actions of "Little Football Player" could make Newton lift his coffin.

Although "Captain" does have many advanced skills based on reality.

But in the previous life, Takahashi Yoichi came up with super special moves and personal stunts to play football to an extent that no one can estimate:

For example, the combined skill of two people kicking a ball together must be far more powerful than one person kicking the ball.

A powerful shot can knock his teammates into the goal along with the opponent's goalkeeper No. 6 or 7.

Also, if your dribbling ability reaches a certain level, even transportation can be saved, and people can walk on the football.

But it is precisely because of these skills that many children find football quite interesting.

In his previous life, Hao Ren also liked football because of these seemingly cool abilities.

It seems that although this world is more open in terms of comics than the country in the previous life, the men of the Football Association are still relatively conservative in this regard.

"Okay, I'll revise it again."

After getting the document, Hao Ren took the manuscript back and prepared to revise it.

But for some reason, without the kicking skills that made Newton dissatisfied, Hao Ren became more and more frustrated as he watched.

It always feels like something is missing.

"No, a scientific football player is no longer a football player." Hao Ren pointed his index finger on the desk and began to think.

He planned to draw another one.

Suddenly Hao Ren's eyes lit up.

It seems that "Slam Dunk" and "Slam Dunk" can be slightly integrated.

It just so happened that he only remembered the general plot of these two.

Complementing the two seems to be a good choice.

In his previous life, Hao Ren once read an online article called "Fox in the Forbidden Zone". This work was about playing football and had a similar feeling.

He could do something similar.

But if you are planning to make something similar, there are a lot of things that need to be changed.

For example, the position of the character.

The gorilla captain in the slam dunk is a center, but in Hao Ren's view, compared to the powerful offense, the gorilla captain's iron-clad defensive skills are his strongest point. In this case, the center back and The two positions of midfielder are comparable to those of the orangutan captain.

Hanamichi Sakuragi plays the power forward position in Slam Dunk, which is a bit difficult. In the comics, his rebounding ability is quite strong, but in football, it seems that goalkeeper is quite suitable for him, but Hanamichi Sakuragi is not only He is a rebounder. Thinking about it this way, it seems that the positions of center back and center are also suitable.

Rukawa Kaede is a small forward, an offensive genius who can score both at the basket and from the outside. In football, Hao Ren feels that both center and winger are suitable for him.

The positions of other characters such as Hisashi Mitsui and Konobu Mumu were also formed in Hao Ren's mind.

Although the positions of football and basketball are not mutually exclusive, Hao Ren did not divide football based on the positions of the characters in previous slam dunks, but based on what the characters in previous slam dunks were good at.

Those who are good at defense are assigned to positions where they are good at defense, and those who are good at attacking are assigned to the positions where they are good at attacking and scoring.

Those who are good at controlling the ball should be assigned to the position of controlling the ball.

As for the goalkeeper? Let's add some new characters.

Hao Ren's inspiration came when he thought about it.

Of course, apart from the location, some other more classic pictures will not change.

For example, Hisashi Mitsui in the next "Soccer Master" will still be a very good shooter, but he took a break from football due to a knee injury and became a decadent teenager for a time.

Then the last classic words will also appear in the comics - 'Coach, I want to play football! ’

I have to say that compared to the plot of "Slam Dunk", Hao Ren remembered it in more detail.

Of course, some of the over-the-top plots were included by Hao Ren after much thought.

For example, Hao Ren thought of Mitsui Hisashi before. He did not become a bad boy who got into fights, but became a decadent boy who did not fight, but would often bring his friends to laugh at those who kicked him. ball man.

no way.

After all, according to the documents, this football cartoon was a collaboration between the Football Association and the education department, which is different from the cartoons he drew in the past.

In the past, some of the comics he drew did feature scenes of bad gangsters fighting, but after all, they were not in cooperation with the government, and the government had no control over him.

But this comic is customized by the official, so the official can control it. If you see this scene of a fight, it may not be approved again!

So there should be as few fights as possible.

Even if it can appear, it cannot be like Hisashi Mitsui in Slam Dunk, who led a bad group to the gymnasium with the goal of destroying the basketball club, leading to violence in the basketball club.

You must know that this thing is a gathering of people to fight.

Therefore, there are many places to make changes.

The key is--

"Honey, say hello to the Football Association. I will go to them to collect information then."

Why was the slam dunk so popular back then?

In addition to the content of the story and the well-developed characters, there are two important points.

One is a painter.

You must know that there is a big problem with sports comics, that is, comics are paper-based and two-dimensional, while sports are full of various actions. If it were not an animated movie and only used paper media, it would be very difficult to capture the excitement of the entire scene. The game is presented.

Takehiko Inoue, on the other hand, used storyboards, a lot of storyboards.

Because storyboards with multiple camera angles will be more conducive to readers' imagination and observation, making the people on the paper come alive and start interacting and confronting each other, which is as enjoyable as watching a truly exciting game.

Inoue's comics in the early stages were still a bit immature, but in the later stages, his style of painting was exciting to more and more readers.

Of course, apart from the painting skills, it is more realistic.

Inoue himself is a basketball fan, so the basketball courts, games, tactics, and character movements in his works are all very professional.

In order to make this comic more professional, Hao Ren needed to let professionals provide guidance.

Although the Tianchao team's record was somewhat tragic.

But it doesn’t mean that you can’t even provide this kind of guidance, right?