Dark Moon Era

In this article, I have a lot of ideas. I'm studying in a hurry, maybe I can't learn well, but what I can contribute is attitude.

I definitely believe that many readers have very professional people.

I hope that in the future when I write a place that is more 'hard core', a reader who is accompanying me can always give me corrections at any time.

I will not justify, I will study carefully, and then read the materials again and again to strive for more rigorous writing.

After all, I always felt that I was professional in writing, at least maintaining a professional spirit.

But more professional, I hope everyone can help out.

Back at the dinner today, I read your opinions and made adjustments and word modifications in the three most commented places.

References, I do not post the URL here, write the name directly, and everyone to search.

The Story of Cancer and Immunity

The amendments added in the text:

Original: But unfortunately, before he got any results, he got a terrible fact. After moving the mitochondria, cancer turned out.

Rewriting: But unfortunately, before he got any results, he got a terrible fact. After moving the mitochondria, cancer turned out. Because its strength will lead to unlimited replication of cells, and this part of the cells will not play the role of normal cells, but will also break and erode normal cells, which is cancer cells.

Original text: The first truly complex cell was formed, and the phagocytosed archaea became organelles, namely chloroplasts in plants, and mitochondria in our cells.

Rewrite: The first true compound cell was formed, and the phagocytic archaea became organelles, namely chloroplasts in plants, and mitochondria in our cells. Of course, mitochondria are also found in the organelles of plants.

This sentence is purely not precise enough.

References: A passage from Dr. Sun Yueli on human aging. There is no title because it is a direct answer to someone else's question.

I will not explain the details in this single chapter, the changes are as follows.

Original: Moreover, mitochondria can be consumed. You can even read your life from mitochondria. The shorter the mitochondria, the closer the end of human life, otherwise, it is a fresh life. Of course, I mean in the absence of lesions.

Rewrite: Also, mitochondria can be consumed. You can even read your life from mitochondria. When the mitochondria weakens, human life is nearing the end. On the contrary, this is still a fresh life. Of course, I mean in the absence of lesions.

This is the most rigorous expression.

Following the structure of Dark Moon Era, it will inevitably involve more descriptions of 'hard cores'.

Web articles are a special publishing situation, which requires timely updates and quantitative updates.

In daily updates, I will work hard to be rigorous.

In fact, I also want to calm down and put aside the disturbances to slow down the writing of "Dark Moon", but I also have a lot of burdens, and I dare not slow down.

This, if you have professional knowledge in some knowledge points, please help me as much as possible and be more rigorous.

This is the original intention that I can't give up, even if it is a web article? There are so many readers to see, including many students in the middle.

The text contains the words, maybe it is not that I want to say how advanced the truth is, but to ensure that what is written in the text does not pass on to everyone a wrong message, a wrong three perspectives.

Here, Twenty-three thank you all, "Dark Moon" accompanied me along the way.

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