Different Dimension Game

If there are no accidents, "Wish" should be the last volume of this book. Write some simple and relaxing stories, and then find a way to fill in some pitfalls, and it will almost be over.

Looking back at the plot of the whole book, you will find that this book has many advantages and many flaws.

First of all, the first big flaw, this book tells the story in the form of copies, written down one by one in small copies, and each copy will lose some readers.

The specific manifestation is that every time a new copy is opened, the follow-up will plummet by about 30%.

This kind of phenomenon is actually very normal. After all, everyone likes a coherent plot, not a sporadic one.

Especially the dungeons of the puzzle-solving type, if you don’t connect them together and read them all at once, you will feel confused, so you simply abandon the pit.

Therefore, this form of writing greatly affects follow-up reading. Follow-up reading is an important part of judging grades. It is natural that the follow-up reading of this book has not been very good.

The second flaw is that the difficulty of writing is too high.

The first chapter [Blood Demon Chapter] is fairly well-prepared, and I can code 6,000 words a day, but [Paradise Chapter] is already a little weak at the beginning. I have never written such a difficult novel, and I always feel exhausted.

In the past, if you write smoothly, you can write 2,000 words an hour, and you can finish the project in 3 hours. Some four or five hours are enough for Calvin.

But this book is very good at Kawenka. Sometimes I think about two or three o'clock in the morning when I think about the plot, and then I can only code four or five thousand.

This is also the main reason why I changed my writing method after [Paradise Chapter].

too tired!

The sense of fragmentation between the maps is too high. When dealing with different worlds, the previous characters are difficult to use on the ground, and it seems that there is no sense of expectation when reading. I know this, but I don't have the ability to solve it.

On the other hand, the bald head who thinks about the plot, the weird talks about various puzzle-solving rules, and the headache when thinking about it for himself, and everyone is quite irritable after watching too much, and there will be a sense of repetition.

So, after the Paradise Chapter ended, I became lazy and changed my writing method.

The third flaw is that the protagonist's strength and status are exposed a little too early, so that there is less sense of expectation.

If it is dragged to seven or eight hundred thousand words, and the identity of the protagonist is revealed a little bit, this book may be able to be written longer. But now everyone knows that the protagonist is too strong, so there is nothing to look forward to.

There is also a fourth point, if the protagonist is only playing games without growth potential, many readers will be very annoyed. Is the pig's foot an idiot? It's earth-shattering outside, and the protagonist hasn't noticed it yet? Isn't this an idiot?

Although I really want to write a protagonist who just plays games, but readers want to lie flat, but in fact they are quite yearning for introversion.

In this case, the only way to reveal the identity in advance is to reduce this uncomfortable feeling. Even so, there is still a feeling of scratching the surface.

This is also some flaws in the setting.

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Then let’s talk about the [Mountain and Sea Boundary] chapter that just ended.

[Mountain and Sea World] is the result of a creative idea because I want to be lazy.

After all, the plot of farming is much easier to write than the rules and strange stories.

In fact, there are not many designs. I didn’t design this chapter when I started the book. I wanted to write weird types, but when I got tired of writing, I wanted to change my thinking.

But [Shanhaijie] was writing and writing, and found that if this continues, just this chapter alone, non-stop farming is equivalent to opening a new book and writing a million or two million words. There are more than 300,000 words written about the sore birth mother and the turtle spirit mother.

In fact, I don't really like to write a world without end, so I can only think of a way to end it earlier.

Even so, I still wrote more than 300,000 words.

[Shanhaijie] is not considered a big success. Compared with the previous two chapters, the quality has indeed dropped a lot, but the follow-up reading is actually quite stable, about 1500-1600, and the fluctuation is not large. some of the flaws.

At present, the average subscription is 7,300, and the high subscription is 25,000. It is already my best book. After the completion, the average subscription may rise to 8,000.

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Finally, the current [Wish] chapter. UU reading www. uukanshu.com

Why open this chapter?

Because Old Wang is so strong, he is on the verge of awakening, there is nothing he can't do, whether it's resurrecting humans, destroying the world, or destroying some demon god, no matter what it is, it's easy.

The old king's identity was almost revealed.

The purpose of the [game], everyone can almost guess it.

Under this premise, many things can no longer be written, and they are in a state that can be finished at any time.

Therefore, I can only write about small personal troubles, which involve human ethics and morality. No matter how powerful Pharaoh is, he cannot easily solve them. On the contrary, he can have a little fun.

This article has been written for so many days, and it doesn't seem very popular.

In fact, I am quite happy to write. Girls like Qiqi, Yueyue, and Xiaoai have not been able to write well in the past, so I might as well add a few more and write whatever I want. If I can’t write well, I can finish it.

Either way, it's the last chapter.

Get rid of some interpersonal relationships, restore Lao Wang's humanity, and then it can be concluded satisfactorily.

The writing will probably end in January, and at most it will be written before the Chinese New Year.

About 1.3 million to 1.4 million words, you won’t cheat the manuscript fee by just bad words, don’t worry. Otherwise [Shanhaijie] I can write a million words.

Since I have been on the street for a long time, I have opened new books one after another, and I have not had a vacation for a long time. This book has 7,000 subscriptions, so it's not too much. I plan to enrich myself and come back after the Chinese New Year.

Well, the above is some of the current summary!

Hope to work hard in the future!

By the way, I might as well take a leave of absence tomorrow and have a day off!