Divine Lucky Star

Oh, such an enthusiastic female book friend, we are all embarrassed...

Beep beep, the private chat message sounded again——

How much does Hualuo know in the dream: "Handsome guy, can you have a shot?"

Wang Ritian: "..."

Wang Ritian: "Speak human words!"

How much does Hualuo know in a dream: "I wrote all day yesterday, and finally wrote all the information you requested, but I couldn't get it in a chapter! It took more than 8,000 words to write all these things. !"

Wang Ritian: "..."

How many flowers fall in the dream: "Look at the writing first!"

After receiving the opening chapter sent by Hualuo Zhishao in Mengli, Wang Hao read it carefully.

To be honest, this guy's writing is very simple and capable. In many places, just a few paragraphs describe the scene in a very three-dimensional way, which is very graphic.

But unfortunately, it's still a bit long-winded.

Wang Ritian: "There is nothing wrong with the overall plot, and the imagery is not bad, but it's still long-winded. You try to remove the useless parts, and make the connection between the plot and the plot more natural. Look at the last time I talked to you You used more than a thousand words for each of these elements, and you used more than 300 words for the description of this place at the beginning. This is completely unnecessary. This part will be summarized, just mention the name of the high school. Readers will naturally imagine what high school is like."

How much does Hualuo know in the dream: "Oh, it seems that we still need to practice hard, handsome guy, you are very handsome when you lecture well, do you need to warm the bed?"

Wang Ritian: "Get lost!"

How much does Hualuo know in the dream: "Haha, are you blushing?"

Wang Ritian: "Stop talking nonsense! What about the time, place, and character events? Actually, a hundred or so words are enough for time and place, and students don't need to go into too much detail about this part. The key lies in the introduction of the world background, because it is a battle scene. So you need to describe the power of monsters and the strength of human beings against the sky, so as to stimulate readers' expectations."

How much does Hualuo know in the dream: "Okay, is there any more?"

Wang Ritian: "There is nothing else about it. You first edit this part and shorten it to about 5,000 words, and then I will tell you about the plot and setting behind it."

How much does Hualuo know in the dream: "I'll change it right away, handsome guy!"

About an hour later, Mengli Hualuo showed Wang Hao the revised manuscript, and this time it was much better, and everything that should be explained was almost explained, Wang Hao nodded in satisfaction.

Wang Ritian: "It's not bad this time. Okay, I'll give you the setting for the rest of the book. Well, by the way, my setting for this book is very comprehensive, including various characters, levels, plot development, etc. , If you write it well, it will definitely be a big hit! But let’s make an agreement in advance, you said to write a thousand words and give me fifteen, right?”

How much does Hualuo know in the dream: "Of course, handsome guy, I will support you!"

Wang Ritian: "Fuck off! I would rather die than surrender!"

How much does Hualuo know in the dream: "Sooner or later, you will fall under the skirt of my old lady!"

Wang Ritian: "..."

Don't argue with this guy, Wang Hao just summed up the outline of "Swallowing the Starry Sky" he wrote earlier and sent it to Mengli Hualuo.

This outline is exactly what Bai Ya Ning has read before, and it is very comprehensive.

How many flowers fall in the dream: "..."

How much does Hualuo know in the dream: "Fuck, your setting up the plot is so awesome, I really have vision!"

Wang Ritian: "What are you going to do?"

How many flowers fall in the dream: "I've done it, try to write 20,000 words a day!"

Wang Ritian: "..."

Fuck, 15,000 words and 20,000 words a day is 300 yuan!

Wang Ritian: "Don't tell me, let's make it 12,000 a day. Quality assurance is the premise. Don't rush to make up the word count!"

How much does Hualuo know in the dream: "It makes sense! You are worthy of being my man of destiny! Handsome guy, let me show you when you have time~~~"

Wang Ritian: "Go to hell, I would rather die!"

"Jingle Bell--"

Turning off QQ, and casually looking at the news on the Internet, suddenly the phone rang, and looked at the caller ID...

It was actually Zhao Zhenhao who called, what's going on?

When we were having dinner yesterday, the two left a phone number in the end. Anyway, they also gave us a famous watch. It would be rude not to leave the contact information, right?

"Old Zhao, what's the situation?" After the poker game last night, the relationship between the two was still in the past. After connecting, Wang Hao smiled and said, "What's the matter? Call me for something?"

Zhao Zhenhao resumed that magnetic voice again: "I think of you, just call and ask."

So polite? The script is wrong.

You should be thinking of the Bingfei star, right?

Wang Hao: "You care about me so much? Don't be polite to me. Tell me, what's the matter?"

"That's right," Zhao Zhenhao said, "I want to invite you to dinner, are you free?"

Damn, it's eating again, what kind of routine is this?

"Well, it's fine for now, it's okay," Wang Hao thought for a while, and then asked again: "Just the two of us?"

"Yes, just the two of us," Zhao Zhenhao said with a smile, "It's just a light meal. I know a very good French restaurant. Shall we go eat?"

Wang Hao pondered for a while, Zhao Zhenhao couldn't help but give him face, and immediately asked: "Okay, OK, then where can I find you?"

Zhao Zhenhao said: "Send me a location, and I'll pick you up."

It's another car pick-up, not bad.

Wang Hao immediately sent his location, and soon Zhao Zhenhao replied: "Okay, I will be there in twenty minutes."

After leaving the set, Wang Hao saw a black Jaguar approaching after waiting for about 20 minutes, and it was Lao Zhao in the car.

"What do you want from me?" Wang Hao opened the car door and sat up, and asked with a smile, "Isn't he planning to kidnap me and ask some nonsense?"

"How is that possible?" Zhao Zhenhao said with a smile, "You hold a lot of weight in Ms. Ya Ning's heart. I won't bother you until my brain burns out. Get in the car, the seat over there has been reserved."

"Okay," Wang Hao got into the car, and said, "Oh, I'm so embarrassed to eat and drink with you all the time..."

Well, if you really want to give me something nice, I won't be polite, hehe.

"You're welcome." Zhao Zhenhao smiled and started the car.

Wang Hao's family lives in the South Third Ring Road of Zhonghai City, which is generally considered to be in the city center, so they arrived at a western restaurant called Paris Fashion after a short walk. When they arrived, there was already a row of luxury cars parked at the door. The grade of Zhao Xuan's place is high!

This time without Bai Ya Ning present, Wang Hao finally knew how attractive this Zhao Zhenhao was!

As expected of the tough version of Song Joong Ki Oppa, when he appeared on stage, the girls who were eating in the western restaurant turned their heads in unison, their eyes were as bright as a 200-watt light bulb!

"Look, look! The handsome guy! God, look at how charming his smile is!"

"God, it's so handsome, I...I can't do it!"

"It's Master Zhao Zhenhao from the Zhao family! He's actually here!"

"Who is that soil turtle following him? Could it be Mr. Zhao's follower?"

Hearing the whispers around him, Zhao Zhenhao smiled back one after another, occasionally waved his hands in salute, his aura exploded in an instant, no matter how Wang Hao was by his side, he looked like his little brother!

This script is wrong, Nima! You are the protagonist template, right? !

"That's it." Zhao Zhenhao took Wang Hao to an empty table and sat down, and said with a smile, "I went home yesterday and thought about it again. I think we need to get to know each other again."

After saying this, Zhao Zhenhao reached out his hand first: "Zhao Zhenhao, twenty-five years old, the only son of Zhao Changsheng, a branch of the Zhao family, is currently running an Internet technology company."

"Hello, hello," Wang Hao stretched out his hand to shake with a smile, and said, "Wang Hao, twenty-four years old, a temporary worker for a film crew."

With such an introduction, the difference between the two is as big as a pheasant and a phoenix...

"Actually, I invited you here this time because I want to have a good talk with you and apologize to you by the way." Zhao Zhenhao didn't say anything about it, but he was quite calm: "I gave you that omega for dinner last night. I did have a little bit of thought when I bought the watch, and I don’t hide it. I had some hostility towards you before I went yesterday, so the price of that watch is 444,000. This is indeed my faux pas. Please forgive me."

As he spoke, he stood up and bowed to Wang Hao very solemnly, as an apology.

When the girls around saw this scene, they were blown away on the spot!

"Isn't it?! What is the identity of that young man? Can he ask Mr. Zhao to apologize to him?!"

"God, haven't I woke up today? What's going on? Is the sky going to collapse?!"

"It must be weird today, Mr. Zhao of the Zhao family would apologize to a single person!"