First of all, after seeing the large number of negative reviews in the comment area, I admit my own mistakes.

Indeed, in order to properly arrange Laast's appearance this time, it was a bit jealous to make this dumpling.

Everyone feels that this plot arrangement is not good, so it must be my fault, not the readers' fault.

Maybe my logic is a bit taken for granted. First of all, the first question everyone talks about is why the protagonist dares to humiliate Tang San knowing that Tang Hao is there.

In my opinion, the protagonist is just a temptation, and the basis of this temptation is that the protagonist has humiliated Tang San once before, but Tang Hao has not taught the protagonist a lesson. The protagonist is actually thinking It is determined that Tang Hao will not bully children. As long as Tang San is not injured, Tang Hao will not be impatient, so the protagonist dares to test like this.

However, the plot I arranged this time is that the situation identified by the protagonist is deviated.

Tang Hao couldn't help it anymore and wanted to teach the protagonist a lesson. I'm here to teach Tang Hao some wisdom, because no matter what he thought, Tang Hao shouldn't do anything to a child.

In addition, I actually don't think the protagonist is very brainless in doing this. The truly brainless person has already killed Tang San first, instead of... stepping on his face to test whether the person is still there.

I directly arranged for the protagonist to kill Tang San on the spot, and then Tang Hao became so anxious on the spot that he came out and directly forced Laast to jump out. This is even more brainless.

The reason for arranging the appearance of Big Hammer here is indeed to force Rayaste to come out, while maintaining the rationality of some plots.

Otherwise, according to my original setting, Big Hammer would not be so stingy and care about the protagonist. After all, the protagonist really did not hurt his son.

Moreover, the Lu Yuan I write has never been an extremely calm person. Yan Shou also said before that Lu Yuan "actually has a fiery heart under his calm appearance." That is to say, Lu Yuan is usually calm, He won't be calm again.

For example, in the time in King Barak City, the protagonist could ignore those bastards and it was none of his business, but on the surface he said he would not save them, but later he pretended not to save them but was actually very enthusiastic and wanted to save people.

The plot actually written that time also had foreshadowing to foreshadow the existence of Raast.

So I have always said that the protagonist is a person from the chaotic good camp, who likes to do things according to his own ideas, but is actually a good person.

Of course, the protagonist will not be advertised as a messenger of justice, nor will the protagonist be kidnapped by morality.

But in general, no matter how much I say, a plot that readers don’t like is a bad plot.

When I write a domineering protagonist, I shouldn't let him suffer when he is depressed. The protagonist's IQ cannot be reduced by the plot. Only other characters can reduce the protagonist's intelligence. This is indeed something I did not expect.

In short, I agree with everyone who thinks this plot is bad and abandoned the book. I will not delete the comments there. Indeed, it is reasonable to abandon the book if it is not right for you. You have spent money and the author is not good at writing, so it will be even worse to criticize the author. Reasonable.

I am also such a reader, and I quite understand how everyone feels.

Therefore, it is reasonable to abandon the book, and it is not guilty to leave negative reviews.

You must admit your mistakes and stand upright when you are beaten.

This is the result of the author's mistake.

This time I learned a lesson.

In the future, we will try to avoid plots in which the protagonist suffers and loses his intelligence, but in general, the protagonist's character will always be like this. He looks very calm and egoistic, but in fact he will try his best to help most ordinary people (soul). The teacher is not among them).

In this way, the explanation of this matter ends here.

I woke up today and my condition has improved a lot. I’m going to resume writing 10,000 words today (note: last night’s chapter was 5,000 words long and was published at almost 1 a.m., so it’s included in today’s 10,000 words, hehe)

The plot begins to take off, with Spring and Autumn writing explaining the rest of this volume, and then jumping directly four years later to the next chapter of the Academy Competition.

I also have to look up the information and watch Dou Yi, Dou Two, Dou Three and Dou Four again (I really get a headache when I think about this, I really don’t like the second half of Dou II, Dou Three and Dou Four).

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