Douluo: My Father, Titled Douluo
Flowers are over~
Finished with flowers~
This book is finished.
I originally planned to finish it in one million words.
This is my first time writing a novel, and there are still many things I didn’t write well, so readers, please forgive me.
Of course, I would also like to thank all the readers who support me. Thank you for your votes and rewards. I have expressed my gratitude in the words of the writer.
I would also like to thank my editor, Jue Zi Dada, for finally signing the contract for the first time.
Hmm. Actually, the ending of the plot was really rushed.
Sorry, it was not handled well.
I was very rushed with the ending, and I don’t know if it’s considered a bad ending, but I still wrote down where everyone went in the final chapter, and everyone had a result.
Everything that needs to be explained has been explained.
As for the God Realm, I don’t like to write about the God Realm, and I don’t know how to write about the God Realm.
After Yuan Ling'er and Qian Renxue entered the God Realm, they might have sided with the God King of Destruction, and then had a battle of wits and courage with God Shura. Readers should have thought of this.
After all, I am a fan of Douluo One, not Douluo Two, Three, or Four. Things about the future God Realm and the Silver Dragon King are just left to my imagination.
(ps: High emotional intelligence: leaves room for imagination, open ending.
Low emotional intelligence: I don’t know how to write it.)
In short,
The story of Yuan Xunlu and Yuan Linger ends here.
I'm very relaxed now.
It was my first time to sign a contract, and it was also my first time to be on the shelves. Several tense nights seemed to still be vivid in my mind.
Now that the novel is finally over, I am relieved. It feels like I have finally reached the end of a long-distance race.
When I wrote this book, I actually didn’t have an outline at the beginning. It was just when I was reading Douluo Fanren that I suddenly had a flash of inspiration in my brain, and I felt itchy and wanted to write.
At that time there were only side phantoms of two figures:
Yuan Xunlu is not Lao Sepi, he is just a pretentious aristocratic teacher.
Yuan Ling'er's martial spirit is related to Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong'er, but it's just a person I deliberately stitched together.
(ps: So don’t guess what the relationship between Yuan Ling’er, Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong’er is.)
Now, this is how I wrote it down to the signing, and then I designed the outline.
So there are a lot of poisonous points in the front, because I think about it and write it out.
Bibi Dong. Tauren problem;
As a result, I didn’t write the Soul Master Competition at all for the Six Sons of the Yuan Sect;
Ice and Fire Eyes. Why not just get it?
The back is slightly better.
I think I have accumulated some experience.
Next time I write a book, I will definitely make an outline first, then save the revised manuscript before publishing the book.
Haha, I am still reluctant to support my readers, but this story is over.
I think I still have a lot of shortcomings.
For example, the more I write later, the stronger my feeling of being unable to control my novel becomes;
For example, I feel like writing a running account later on, and I don’t think the plot is interesting, especially the last few chapters;
For example, people cannot stand, Yuan Ling'er seems to be a perfect cultivator, a tool man without emotions, the six sons of Yuanmen don't have much drama, Yuan Xunlu Lao Sepi should still be able to stand;
Another example is that my update speed cannot be improved;
Another example is that the plot advances very strangely. It is slow when it should be fast and fast when it should be slow. Sometimes it is inexplicable and makes it difficult for me to write it down.
Hiss~
I'm glad I was able to discover these issues of mine.
If there is a problem, I can discover it myself, which proves that I am not hopeless.
I still have the opportunity to solve these problems and get better and better in the future.
I hope that next time, my novels will be supported by more readers.
above,
I burst into tears and didn't know what to say.
Finished with flowers~
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(End of chapter)
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