Dragon Ball: Shackles of Life

It was completely over at one point. This ending should still be considered bad. I could only cry. I had no choice!

Thank you to all the book friends for your continued support, allowing me to persevere and finish it!

I also read the comment section. Most of the positive comments that supported me allowed me to keep writing. However, there were many negative comments that really made me feel so angry that I would have brain congestion. Many of the plots were problematic. I know, after all, I am also on Namek. After thinking about it for a long time, I didn’t know how to make the transition and how to increase the combat effectiveness. I used Bidili to set off the protagonist’s natural energy, which is the vitality, but I didn’t expect it.

To be honest, I've seen a lot of Dragon Ball fandoms there, where Bulma's potential was developed by the Great Elder, and her combat power was increased by thousands from a novice, and no one complained about it, so I also felt that the natural energy and Bidili practice were added. It’s okay to increase the combat power from a few hundred to 20,000. I didn’t expect that everyone would like it. I’m going to review it here. It’s because I took it too much for granted.

However, this episode is not without its disadvantages. No one complains that the protagonist's combat power has been increased from more than 100,000 to tens of millions.

But there were several weird comments, and I specifically mentioned a few that made people speechless.

For example, if you give me a bad review because of Dragon Ball or the fandom theme, is this person sick? If you don’t like fandoms or Dragon Ball, why did you click here? Are you sick?

There is another one, because there is no protagonist who doesn’t like Bulma, I would say that the protagonist is hypocritical and gives away girls. Your point of view is like if you are walking on the street and see a beautiful woman, and you say beauty, I like you, but the beauty directly rejects you. I don’t like you, and what are you talking about? A beautiful woman pretends to say she doesn’t like you. Such a self-centered guy is so far away from his original point in reality. The most outrageous thing is that there are people who agree with him. Who are these people?

I couldn't like Bulma from the beginning. Even with Yamcha as her boyfriend, he wasn't just a nymphomaniac and handsome guy. He also added friend messages and so on. Just like my ex-girlfriend, I completely I didn’t like it, and everyone said that Yamcha was too frivolous. He was wrong, but after watching the first Dragon Ball, you should know what Bulma is like. As for the subsequent Dragon Ball Super, I started watching it from Dragon Ball. of.

What I like is Qiqi, No. 18. As for saying I don’t want to change the plot, when did I ever write such a thing? Why do I still practice? I just can't sit still, and I don't want to be a salty fish. There is such an extraordinary opportunity, and if I don't fight for it, even if I fail, at least I have tried hard and can still be a salty fish with peace of mind. What you describe is a waste!

I will remember people like you who think they are good. When I write novels in the future, I will know that there can be such a character. I am still very grateful to you for making the character more three-dimensional.

As for why you are still in contact with the protagonist group? The protagonist is picked up by the elderly Sun Wukong, and he is the younger brother of Sun Wukong. This is not even the first chapter, nor the introduction. Dear book friends, tell me who are these bad reviews!

The one who said matryoshka dolls are annoying, I'm sorry \u003c(_ _)\u003e, even if the Cell chapter of the original Dragon Ball and the Zamasu chapter of Dragon Ball Super are like matryoshka dolls, I don't want to (facepalm).

There is also one about Lan Qi, saying that the princess hugged Lan Qi, and then Lan Qi blushed. When did I write about it? As for praising the protagonist for being handsome, it’s nonsense. Why is there no interaction between the sister and the younger brother? The protagonist is younger than Sun Wukong, Lan Qi. How old was Qi when she first met Sun Wulin and Sun Wukong? It would be no exaggeration to say that she had grown up watching them since childhood.

There is absolutely no description of blushing. It’s a woman, a woman. If you want a woman so much, you can’t find a place to have fun by spending money? I'm too lazy to reply to people like you who confuse right and wrong, but it's better than the one above.

Are you saying there is no difference in plot? Sun Wukong is not dead, Raditz was killed by the protagonist, so there is no difference. The fanfic is also based on the original work. In the end, I have been following the plot of the original work!

As for the Dragon Ball Wishing Saiyan bloodline, most of the bad reviews include this. Let’s not talk about the introduction. Didn’t I introduce it before? The protagonist has talent and potential. In this case, if the talent is poor, then that’s it. If you have talent, Why bother with Saiyan blood when you can't fight as an Earthling!

As for those who want the protagonist's genes, they are acquired through cultivation and become good. If they say my writing is poor and my characterization is not good, I accept it with an open mind, but if they say my writing is like a running account, you should check it yourself first. What is the meaning of running accounts? Don't pretend to think you are someone and make blind comments.

There are also those who say there is any difference between it and the original work, and it is exactly the same. I don’t want to explain that kind of person anymore. It has already been written like this, and they still say it is exactly the same as the original work.

There is another person who reported me. In the comment section of Chapter 91, there are all kinds of birds in the forest. The bookshelf of Dragon Ball fans is a system and a large group of harems. Why didn’t you mention it? I don’t know which one. If my muscles are not right, I suddenly go crazy.

Some people say that the more I write, the more nonsense I get, and the more outrageous it becomes, so don’t read the novel! What a stupid reason, and the one who said the protagonist is brainless. I feel like your comments are so brainless.

Namek is very important, by the way, and because of the lack of Klin Sacrifice, Yamcha Guixi gave me a bad review. I really want to complain here, and I will use my closing remarks to talk about the problems here.

I've read a lot of Dragon Ball fanfics. If you're not familiar with Sun Wukong and Krillin, forget it. So it doesn't matter if you deliberately let them kill you?

But what is outrageous is that we are obviously related, we are good friends, and we have the power to solve the problem, but we still deliberately let them kill us. Many Dragon Ball fans come here and I am very angry. My friend, I don’t ask you to do anything for your friends. Dao, at least don't do such an immoral thing. Even with the Dragon Ball, is death a good thing? He died like a tool, but he didn't become distraught because of it.

In this book, the protagonist, Yamcha, Klin, and Tianjin Fan are all friends who can safely trust each other's backs, and can even let their daughters live in their homes without worries. You can't do things like that, and there's nothing you can do if you don't like me. This is the character of the protagonist in this book, and he treats people around him very well.

As for what I wrote about ruining your childhood, I'm sorry, I'm not that powerful. I see on your bookshelf that there are books about Dragon Balls and a harem, and there are no brain systems. I really can't afford it.

There are too many things I won’t complain about. It really refreshed my knowledge. Sorry, I said too much. What kept me going was the book friends who supported me. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

As for some things about the chat group, in terms of word count, if I separated all the parts about talking about marriage and Sun Wufan going to school, without writing about the chat group, I could write more than a hundred words, but I won’t do that in the future. You know how to do this kind of thing!

In fact, the results of this book are average, just a little better than the previous one. I can persist in finishing it because of the support of all of you book friends. I plan to start original work after writing two fanfics!

I was a little excited at the moment, and I’m really sorry that I wrote so much in my closing remarks. The next book is about Naruto, not the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles one (▼ plate▼ # )!

It cannot be integrated with the worldview of The Adventures of Cheng Long at all. The worldview of the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles is too big, even bigger than The Adventures of Cheng Long. There are also twelve talismans and many props in The Adventures of Cheng Long. These props, if used, will make people The plot would collapse. Otherwise, if the protagonist pursues his inner self like Cheng Long, no one would want to watch it.

I have actually finished setting up the protagonist’s abilities. I have obtained the inheritance of the White Cat, the Changhong Sword Technique and the Fire Whirlwind training method. Now I am considering writing Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles or The Adventures of Cheng Long. These two The worldviews can’t be integrated, but Spider-Man definitely can.

Having written so much, I won’t go into too much nonsense. See you in the next book, dear book friends!

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