Dragon Clan: Restart your life

Strictly speaking, this volume is not finished yet, there are still a few chapters left...

But let’s summarize it first.

(The summary of this chapter is not a summary. Everything I thought of before will be recorded.)

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Let’s talk about the worldview setting first.

The setting of this book, from the beginning - Lu Mingfei returning to the supreme position - has been destined to be an invincible novel.

I thought about following the same steps and starting over, making different choices when experiencing the same events, but then I thought about it, there are quite a few of these types, and there is no shortage of mine. What I want to write is just a thorough book. A fan who reverses the ending.

The biggest disadvantage of the invincible flow may be that the combat power will collapse. Generally speaking, the protagonist is suppressed, but I don't want to suppress it. If I want to suppress it, there is no need to write the invincible flow.

I chose to expand my worldview.

In a sense, there will be no such thing as a collapse of combat power in this book, because the Dragon Clan does not have a reasonable combat power system (dog head).

I never think that reversing the ending relies on pure fists (of course hard fists are very, very important)

Just like in Long's second line, Chu Xia has reached this point relying more on the so-called fists.

(To put it bluntly, I didn’t plan to write too much about fighting. The dog’s head saves his life)

I personally think the most beautiful love is a two-way love.

In the original work, it was Xia Mi's unilateral initiative between the two, but in this fanfic, the one who took the initiative first was actually Chu Zihang in Xia Mi's eyes.

He broke through the memory blockade he had set and recalled all the past with her in front of him. This alone was beyond the scope of Xia Mi's explanation.

So she didn't know why she gave up her plan on the roller coaster.

So when Lu Mingfei later told him that memories can be blocked, but feelings can only be suppressed, she was shaken again.

I would like to explain here that I generally do not add or change the content and plot of the original work to describe a person. For example, my descriptions of the most controversial Chen Wenwen and Nonuo are all selected from the original work and do not add any plot points. Beautify or vilify them.

But here at Chu Zihang, I made some modifications.

Because I need their love to be born more reasonably and smoothly, this modification is "Xia Mi dances on the yoga mat, and Chu Zihang sits at the table writing a report." The original work does not say that there is no turning back, and the plot I added is Chu Zihang glanced back and saw the girl's swan-like figure.

How should I put it, it's not an important turning point, it can only be regarded as a lubricant.

In Chu Xia's story line, I spent a lot of pen and ink, and specially added Odin's plot line, just to increase the interaction and bond between them.

Fans of the original work should know very well that although the original work hints at Chu Xia's feelings in many places, such as "Mole, Mole, I am Sweet Potato" (for details, you can search on Baidu), there are really too few stories between them. So much so that we all doubt they really love each other?

Until the end, there was only a hazy feeling between the two.

In the follow-up, when Long San Long Si Chu Zihang misses Xia Mi, I prefer it to be a good memory.

This reminds me of Meng Qi’s love for Xiao Sang in The Honor of One Life——

Memories can beautify a person, guilt and feelings will ferment emotions, and the pain will be sweet to the depths. Today, when the fake is true, the truth is also false.

In my heart, Long San Long Si Li Chu Zihang's love for Xia Mi is roughly like this.

As I said in (Chapter 118) Fingel's conversation with Eva, Chu Zihang's ability to reach this point has reached his limit. He can no longer take the initiative. Due to his personality, naturally the only one who can take the initiative in the early stage is Xia Mi.

And both Chu Zihang and Xia Mi are just dead children. They wear masks to hide their truest side and bear their own destiny.

Before someone fights this fate for them, it will be difficult for them to truly let go of everything and get into each other's heart.

In this fanfic, Lu Mingfei shouldered the unbearable fate for them.

He plays a solitary man who watches the dawn rise.

Without the weight of fate, Xia Mi is just Xia Mi, and Chu Zihang is no longer a dead child who only pursues Odin's footsteps and closes his heart for revenge.

Someone has to make sacrifices.

So it was Lu Mingfei who was sacrificed this time.

He already has enough power to "act as he pleases".

In the eyes of Xia Michu Zihang, these "sacrifice" cannot be repaid in a lifetime.

But in his eyes——

Not worth a penny.

As long as senior brother and Xia Mi can let go of their hearts and be together, it will be fine.

There are millions of couples in this world who love each other till the end, are you one missing?

Isn’t the so-called power used to protect beauty?

I used to hate Lu Mingfei who was always "one step too late", or in other words all the people in anime who were "one step too late because of hesitation".

It's so fucked up that you obviously have enough power to protect beauty, but you're so late because of your own disability. A step that seems within reach is separated by life and death.

If you have power but it is used to clean up the mess every time, and it is still a messy and irreparable mess, then it is better not to have it and the pain will be more enjoyable.

This is probably what I expect from Lu Mingfei.

[[The following is the interpretation of Chu Xia’s emotional line]]

I arranged many scenes to depict their psychological transformation, but some of them may be too obscure, so I will share them here.

In Chapter 104 (If Life Is Only Like the First Meeting), Chu Zihang thought of Nalan Xingde’s poem——

If life is just like the first time we met, why should the autumn wind draw a fan sadly?

Just like what he said, he never expected to fall in love with a girl, get together with a girl, get married and have children, and live an ordinary but happy life.

Because happiness is insulated from him.

In other words, he thinks he is insulated from himself.

He didn't think he was qualified to pursue happiness. He had already decided to devote the rest of his life to the tasks of the Executive Department, so that maybe one day he would meet Odin again.

He is such a dead kid.

A dead child who walks his own way with his neck stiffened and his head lowered.

To paraphrase Frost's words: A disobedient child is the most annoying. Sometimes when I look at his stubborn face, I really want to slap him. But what's the use of pumping it up? Even if you slapped him until his cheeks cracked and blood streaked into his eyes, those ice blue pupils would still look at you with disdain without blinking. This is the real stubbornness, and you will be stubborn until death.

Chu Zihang and Caesar, or the famous characters in the entire Dragon Clan, are the same type of people.

Bloodmourn, or dead children, whatever.

As a dead child, Chu Zihang didn't think he was qualified to pursue happiness, or in other words, he didn't want to pursue happiness at all.

Therefore, he believed that since the good things in the beginning are destined to disappear, it is better to reject them from the beginning. In this way, whether he loses others or others lose him, it will not be too painful, so he carefully keeps a distance from everyone.

This kind of negative thinking was shocked by Chu Zihang in Chapter 108 (Life can't just be like the first time).

There are two points here.

The first point is the anime Five Centimeters Per Second. What this anime ultimately expresses is that youthful first love is ultimately defeated by time and space. The two hearts that were once closest to each other slowly drift away at the speed of falling cherry blossoms, until they are the farthest point in the world. distance.

The second point is Lu Mingfei's "Lu's Essays".

Nalan Xingde said that if life is just like the first sight, Lu Mingfei said that life cannot be just like the first sight.

It is precisely because life cannot be just as it was when we first met, so we must cherish it, so we must seize all the good things we encounter, instead of resisting from the beginning because we are afraid of losing them.

At that moment, the barrier in Chu Zihang's heart was shattered by at least one level.

He hasn't fully realized it yet, but he has taken the first step.

It was precisely because the senior brother's heart was unbalanced at that moment that he mentioned the anime "Voice of the Stars", which was also a work by Makoto Shinkai, but the expression was completely different.

(It turns out that I made a typo in Chapter 108. It was the Voice of the Star, not the Voice of the Heart. Unfortunately, the chapter is locked and I can’t change it. That’s it. Forgive me Abba Abba)

Lu Mingfei’s last sentence in Lu’s essay is——

If you are lucky enough to meet her one day, please tell her on behalf of your former self that I finally found you.

In the last section of "Voice of the Stars", the male and female protagonists say "I am here" at the same time across eight point six light years.

Xia Mi has watched this animation and also seen Lu's essays.

That's why Xia Mi thought in that chapter - is this a confession in disguise?

The character of the senior brother is destined that his love cannot be a big confession, but a step-by-step test.

At this point, the foundation for their relationship has actually been laid.

Everything that happened before, including the trip to England and the love story in Kassel, was all foreshadowing.

By Chapter 119 (spanning 8.6 light years), it was already a matter of course.

But this is not enough. In this relationship, it is Xia Mi who really takes the initiative. The senior brother takes the initiative a little bit, but too little. The real conflict between them has not been resolved. This conflict cannot be broken by a few words. Even though Lu Mingfei declared that he would stand behind Xia Mi, Xia Mi did not completely relax.

I arranged this turning point for Norns.

Norns gave Xia Mi the final stimulus,

I really arranged a lot of scenes to show their emotional lines.

Many of them came from a sudden inspiration. I didn’t have an outline, but I thought it was beautiful to write like this, so I wrote it like this.

I added a lot of bonds to them, and under these bonds, all the emotions came naturally.

That’s it.

Chu Xia's emotional line is complete here.

Next is the third line of dragon.

To be honest, Aloe's love can start very easily, but the process is more difficult than Chu Xia's.

I said before that Chu Xia’s love lines were too few, so I added content for them, but compared with Aloe Vera...

The latter is the really pitiful kind.

Chu Xia still has a bond that spans six years for me to deal with. As for Aloe, there is nothing left. It all depends on my own performance.

At this point, I want to talk about Lu Mingfei’s character.

This book inherits the world view of Long 4 and part of the world of Long 5.

But Lu Mingfei is not the Lu Mingfei who inherited Long Si. After all, it goes without saying who Lu Mingfei likes in the novel of the old thief.

Lu Mingfei in this book is "what Lu Mingfei should look like in my mind."

He is my ideal ideal kid.

He fell in love with Eri, who shared the whole world with him.

He has experienced everything and returned from the apocalypse, regaining the power he once had, but he is not aloof because of this power, and still lives the same life as before.

He was already a king, but he vowed to be a gentle king.

He was reborn to regain the countless little beauties that he had missed.

What is a small beauty?

Summer bike rides around the lake.

Rooftop skewers in winter.

I worked hard before the exam, stayed up late to read, and guarded Kassel in the early morning with everyone.

I glanced around in the examination room, and when I saw a multiple-choice question, it was an unexpected surprise, and the blood of joy rushed to my forehead.

When the teacher suddenly asked a question when you were distracted in class, the girl next to you nudged you with her elbow and pushed the book in front of you. The answer was on it. You cleared your throat and replied loudly with confidence.

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This small beauty should not be limited to happiness. Those past worries are also beautiful things for a person who has experienced the darkness of the end of the world.

I used to worry every day whether I would die tomorrow.

But now I'm worried about what to do if I fail the class tomorrow.

Compared to dying, failing a class is nothing!

Happiness is always in contrast.

So you will see that Lu Mingfei is still working on his great cause of exempting himself from exams. He has not left the academy to live a life that a monarch should live. He just lives a simple and ordinary life in the academy.

The summer wind blew by his side, and the junior and senior sisters in dark green school uniforms walked past him. He walked among the crowds, and the sunlight made people dizzy. The youthful vitality that hit his face clearly told him that he Really back.

He can sit on the throne and talk nonsense.

You can also squat on the side of the road in silence, your eyes as deep as a monster that has lived for so long.

It’s what I ideally look like after the transformation of the most perfect wasted child.

In addition, let’s talk about the second structure of the worldview.

I was quite hesitant when deepening this world view, because I was only planning to finish writing the third line of the dragon at the beginning. To generate electricity for love, I also had to have a tangible and feasible goal, which was to finish after Chu Xia Lu drew the love line. This, but once this world view is added, I may have to write it down in depth later...

The setting of this book, for example, is that Lu Mingfei is the first-generation King of Heaven, the real White King, and Lu Mingze is the Black King Nidhogg, the King of the Earth.

They were the original monarchs. The second generation Nidhogg usurped their power. Finally, Lu Mingfei's incomplete power was used as the core to create the second White King, who ruled the world with him. This is easy to understand and it is justifiable. word.

The essence of this setting is actually no different from the "World Tree" that many people think of. The essence is still a monarch older than the Black King.

On this basis, I took the Dragon Clan’s worldview to the next level, which is the Solar Era.

This second design is not a random addition without foundation. I still like to improve on the original basis, rather than making castles in the air.

The second setting of the Solar Age Civilization itself is an expansion of the Mayan prophecies. In the original work, the Mayan prophecies were considered by the hybrids to be the prophecies of the dragons to themselves, but in the second setting, as Norns said, you think it is a prophecy. , in fact, it is history.

But the hybrid guessed one thing right, that is, they were indeed in the fifth solar era and were about to usher in the end of the world.

Who the end point is has almost been laid out, but naturally it cannot be too simple.

I laid out many of the settings in this book, and many of the foreshadowings were not so foreshadowing. For example, when the vice-principal and Angers were discussing how his ancestor saw a white dragon that was bigger than a black dragon soaring in the sky, I almost pointed the way. Not only that this guy is the first generation White King, but also because he is so tired from reading a fanfic.

Three important original characters appeared in the second line of Dragon:

Norns, Metatron, Ouroboros.

Goblins, angels, alchemical snakes.

If you must find the prototype in the original work, it’s not impossible. Long Sili:

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Is this level of fighting power...a precursor to awakening? "

"Precursor? I'm afraid he is already in a semi-awakened state, right? Taking away life is no longer a fear for him, but an enjoyment."

"Yeah... look at his back color, doesn't it look like a dragon breaking through the seal?"

"Yes... all seals will be broken one day. The only ones who are truly immortal are the sealed souls."

Across the storm, someone was watching and whispering.

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This paragraph is the original text. The pit dug by the old thief can be substituted by the three people from the mental hospital after the second set, or the two of Nome.

This is just a casual mention.

I have already been writing this part of the world view and the second setting. I didn’t dare to go too far, and I didn’t describe the stories of the first few solar eras in large lengths. Because it is inevitable to consider that if the second design is too high, it will cause a sense of separation from the original feeling.

After all, it is a fanfic, even if it is a second set, it must ultimately serve the plot of the original work. To fill in the pits, there is no way that I can write a fanfic about the Dragon Clan that doesn’t look like the Dragon Clan.

For example, it was originally a battle between humans and dragons, but I wrote it as a melee between angels, fairies, giants, dwarves, and humans and dragons.

This is a hodgepodge, and the sense of fragmentation is too obvious, which is equivalent to just borrowing a little bit of the original work.

Therefore, I don’t like to add a large number of original characters. One is that it is difficult to control, the other is that it feels disconnected from the original work, and the third is that the original characters are enough for me to write.

I think the setting and characters serve the plot, not the other way around.

I mentioned it in my introduction (because of the inverted v, the introduction was moved to the top of the directory, if you haven’t seen it, you can check it out), and I’ll mention it again——

What I most want to write about in this book is the emotional line drawn by Chu Xia Lu. There is no reason, I just like it. I am here for these two. Everyone else in Fene Kainuo is just incidental, so Chu Xia in the second line of Long The proportion concentration is very high, especially in the later period.

Otherwise, based on the initial results of this book, 80,000 words and two reviews, all the recommendation votes were mine, 180,000 words only came to test the waters and recommendations, and it was put on the shelves with more than 200 first orders. It would have been a long time ago.

So you don’t have to worry about eunuchs. If you want eunuchs, they will be eunuchs sooner.

In the early stage, the updates will basically not be interrupted. You have to be diligent in 4k every day. In the later stage, there will be no glitches.

By the way, there are now 800 orders.

Thank you for your support!

Another thing to say is -

I hope to write a perfect emotional line. Of course, perfection is just an expectation, but I am personally satisfied with the Chu-Xia line.

The first point I want to write about is the emotional line, and the second is some interesting changes. These changes you will see in Dragon 3, which are roughly similar to the interaction between Xia Mi and Nono in Dragon 2, but this is not thorough enough. What you see will be the intersection of Akira Sakurai and the Genji brothers.

That is to say, the changes brought about by Lu Mingfei's changes, the changes in events, and the changes in characters.

To this end, I arranged some scenes that I thought would be interesting, such as the following plot.

The summary of one chapter is over 5k words long, so let’s ask for something at the end, please order it all (dog head)

Digression:

If there was a second half of the book, it would probably be a Japanese dog food novel. Due to the character design issues of Chu Xia Aloe, some plots that I had thought of through reading comics and novels could not be included.

To put it simply, it’s not fun to write.