Dragon of Douluo sings to the nine heavens

Based on a review from a book friend, I also discovered some big problems with this book.

First: the plot is too thin, the connection between different forces is very rigid, and the supporting characters are too marginalized, as if they have no sense of existence.

Typical ones are Caitou Xiaoxiao and others, and even characters like Huo Yuhao have no sense of existence anymore.

And when the grass jelly was distributed, it seemed that there was no description of the friendship between Caitou Xiaoxiao and the male protagonist. The grass jelly was given very casually, which was a poisonous point.

This problem is extremely serious.

Second: The Holy Spirit Cult was destroyed too casually, the establishment of the Sea Soul Empire was very abrupt, the Noumenon Sect was not described much, the description of the Poseidon Family was very vague, the Nine Treasure Glazed Sect was the first to write about it, and the plots and wars of several major empires are just mentioned.

The war started, but it was not overly written. It gave people a very weird feeling about this war. It was like a narrator telling a story, and it ended in a few sentences.

Third: The level jump is very fast when the level reaches the later stage (I actually made fun of this in the text.)

Fourth: The description of Goldfinger is too failed, even comparable to the previous book The Blade of Light and Darkness.

Summary: I was too poor at writing the plot concept and the connection between the characters.

To sum up, if I want to give this book a full score of 10, I can only give this book 1.5 to 2 points. This score is based on comparison with the previous book. I can only say that there are too many shortcomings. I would like to express my gratitude to those who have read this book.

I apologize to book friends who are disappointed with the plot and character description. It is indeed poorly written.

How can I put it this way? In fact, my book's first-time subscription results are really poor. Among fan fiction, it is basically one of the worst. The average order of 300 has increased to the current average of 2,000. It is completely due to everyone.

Thank you very much for your support.

When I saw the results for the first order, I actually gave up on this book. I planned to go to Guangdong to find a factory job, but was delayed by the epidemic. I didn’t expect that my results would improve later, and I persevered after making some money.

Well, the outline and details of my book are very thin, which is also the main reason why the plot description is not in place.

It has both an outline and a detailed outline. I won't lie about this, but it is indeed very thin. The combined word count of the two is only a little over 10,000 words. Some plots were even added after I temporarily read the original work when my grades improved.

I can't make any promises. I can only say that before writing a book in the future, I will try my best to make up for these problems. Whether it is an outline or a detailed outline, whether it is the plot concept and character connection in the article, I can only say that I will do my best to fix it.

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I hope that the book I write in the future will get a score of three or even four. I can’t guarantee that future books will not have these problems, but I will try to make them less toxic.

To the book friends who can see this, thank you for stopping by and watching!