Ember Gun

  100 feedbacks

  1. The current plot progress of the book is almost in the mid-term, so it is time for a round of feedback.

  2. The name of this volume is "Deep Soul".

  3. In fact, after writing these, everyone can see some metaphors. The main plot of this volume is that Lorenzo recognizes himself clearly. Who is this lost demon hunter?

  4. Of course, I think the ending will be quite interesting based on my idea.

  5. I have discussed with another author before, how to write a good story, and in the end, the story is to make the reader feel emotional.

  6. Such as cool, such as funny, but these two emotions are easy to elicit. I want to challenge and write something different.

  7. After all, I think I am a more pursuing author.

  8. So the exciting part of this volume is probably just beginning.

  9. By the way, the book is estimated to be between 200w and 300w.

  10. Actually, I don’t really want to write too long, so I try to streamline the plot as much as possible. In fact, the plots of the current volume, except for the transitional chapters, have an echoing effect on all the plots later.

  11. So I think what I wrote is not water, after all, the black angel is already on, so I can directly water the plot of going up to the demon. It can water a lot of words.

  12. However, this is a bit unnecessary, you say yes.

  13. I am a pursuing author, I want to emphasize again.

  14. So I want to write some different stories.

  15. I also tried many new writing ideas in this book.

  16. For example, web-text taboos, intersperse! flashback!

17. In fact, I hesitated when I wrote this volume, because from a certain angle, this volume can be written as a prequel to the book, but such a large flashback is definitely on the street, but in order to recall the past, it goes hand in hand with reality. , So that the reader’s senses are not so bad, I made a new attempt.

  18. Such as the story of the Uncanny Valley.

  19. This is a memory of the past about ten chapters in length.

  20. But I think that the beginning of the game is "Lorenzo is in a memory", and then Barabara, forcibly insert a plot, it must be bad for the senses.

  21. So here I suddenly thought of some scenes in the detective American drama when solving the crime.

  22. The protagonist states the murderer’s motives and methods in front of the camera, and the scene behind is changed at this time to simulate the scene of the crime at the time, so as to achieve the parallel development of memories and reality.

  23. But that is a film and television drama, and this is text.

  24. Fortunately, after writing, everyone's senses are good, and it seems that the experiment was a success.

  25. I like to paraphrase some pictures into words.

  26. You may not believe it. I am an art student and I am a dead end in painting.

  27. However, I am invincible again.

  28. You said my writing is poor, but I am a painter! vice versa.

  29. Back to the role here.

  30. I want to write something different, such as focusing on the plot and characters.

  31. Web writing is an extremely long creative process.

  32. So in this long process, it is easy to happen unexpected things, such as some characters that you can't control yourself, also known as writing collapsed.

  33. So I don’t want to start and decide what heroine and final boss.

  34. Because this thing is a foundation, once it is set, it is bound. Without pre-fixing, everything is confirmed according to the trend of the plot to confirm the final identity of each character, but there may be some new tricks.

  35. Similarly, I want to create some interesting characters, like “group portraits” where you can try and die.

  36. Just kidding, just give it a try, and finally come back to life, I can’t play myself to death, right.

  37. Speaking of characters that cannot be controlled, there are actually many in this article, and the results are surprisingly good.

  38. For example, Saab, I thought there should be a small boss fight at the time, writing this and writing it out of control with the original idea, but not bad.

  39. By the way, the creation process of this book can easily get out of control.

  40. The birth of this book was purely an accident.

  41. In the beginning, there were no demon hunters, and the era was not the Victorian period, but a group of superpowers who lived in the modern age called distortions.

  42. I always feel that there is a lack of a more important category in the urban ability.

  43. It is very rigorous, low-magic, and uses only abilities to fight a battle full of calculation and suspicion.

  44. Of course, there is also a group of contemporary super-powered college students who are joyously speaking bad words.

  45. I think this category is quite interesting, because it is more or less a hamster attribute, I think it is enough to save the manuscript before sending it, and then write it for almost 20w.

  46. To be precise, it is the plot of the first volume.

  47. After all, people have dreams. I want to write a perfect volume as much as possible. I will trick you into it first, and then what cover does not match the real thing... Hey hey.

  48. Unfortunately, this book failed to even sign.

  49. I was actually quite lost at that time.

  50. My roommate and I had a whim. I was idle and idle. I asked Cai Ge, how about the whole game?

  51. Cai Ge: "True!"

  52. The result is that it is so difficult to make a game, it requires a lot of money, and even a demo can't be made.

  53. Cai Ge said he should outsource it.

  54. Outsourcing requires money.

  55. So I became an idol for the 600 yuan full attendance award.

  56. So here comes the question, what should I write?

  57. It seems to be mentioned in the group that this book was originally a cyber detective.

  58. Watson is a top-notch hacker girl who nests in a rental room, and Holmes is a mechanical reformer who carries a plasma shotgun with him when he goes out. Under all surveillance, he is an unrecognizable mosaic.

  59. But, science fiction, bad writing is particularly earthy, so I gave up.

  60. Then change the setting of the super power book, and the ember gun is born!

  61. Applause!

  62. Then, then...

  63. Then the Ember Gun is still serialized, but the unity project of the game has not been updated for several months...

  64. Life is a ruthless knife~

  65. Back to this book.

  66. I think every character should have a past and a future, not a simple display card.

  67. The protagonist is also, he should have a vivid character, not a tool person to promote the plot.

  68. Of course, in-depth writing about the psychological activities of some characters, some thoughts, it is easy to be accused of being literary and hypocritical.

  69. So where is the boundary between Wenqing and hypocrisy!

  70. Of course, it’s just a web post, so why is it so profound?

  71. I am very pursued!

  72. But there is no way, he gave too much.

  73. Just kidding, crowdfunding to write books, crowdfunding to write books.

  74. But quibble for yourself, this is my second book! !

  75. I have a lot of strange ideas.

  76. For example, I conceived the beginning of several new books.

  77. Of course, I will write embers well!

  78. But I also want to write some short stories. I have conceived one at the moment, and I have a vague idea.

  79. Then there are some stories about writing practice in high school, but now it seems a bit immature, so I can find time to delete it.

  85. Although it says 00r, I prefer Unicorn Gundam.

  86. Orewa Gang Oki!

  87. By the way, under the data, the book has finally been collected in 5w at present, and it has barely climbed to the uniform order of 1800, which is a little bit away from the boutique badge!

  88. Write a book, boom boom boom.

  89. Then, it's still about the book, because different from regular web articles, the cool point of this book is not one copy after another, but a whole volume of story.

  90. So... so... write a book!

  91. Actually, I want to collect 9 more feedbacks and 100 feedbacks, but is it interesting for everyone to see me?

  92. Anyway, this is a free chapter, as a waste of everyone's time.

  93. I find it very interesting.

  94. You guys say you don’t yell!

  95. Then I would like to thank you all for your support so far. After all, this book really crawled out of the street step by step.

  96.4!

  97.3!

  98.2!

  99.1!

  100.0!

  Go to bed, good night.

  Ps:

  A group of friends just made a comment, and I think it just happens to explain why this book is a bit muddy in many places.

  This is actually my pot. The essence of this book is web text, and web text is always updated, and I write on the web text in a style similar to the entity, so my plot is based on the volume.

  Maybe in the first chapter, I suddenly wrote an inexplicable a, but a corresponds to the b in chapter fifty. The two plots correspond to each other, and it feels suddenly open.

  For example, the prologue and end of the second volume, those related to the Stuart family.

  I tried my best to express a slightly shocking feeling, chasing is more likely to feel weaker, but I think that after reading it in one breath, maybe I can have this kind of experience, which is what I try to express.

  The information that readers get is constantly pulling, and it has been pulling for more than ten chapters before getting feedback. Maybe this is the reason for the muddy water.

Solution.

  I finished the update in one breath, you guys are cool, I'm dead.

  Speaking of carriers, a web article that needs to be constantly updated, and its story is one that needs to be read in one go. This contradiction may cause a sense of fragmentation in reading.

  (End of this chapter)