Embers Ad Infinitum

It’s time for the summary at the end of each month. I actually don’t really want to write it, lol. The honest reason is that the third part will be finished this month or next month, and there will be a summary by then. Putting it all together will not make it seem repetitive. .

What's the point of writing a summary that secretly says the reason is that you can't ask for leave?

Well, I can also ask for monthly votes to summarize and improve, so I’d better write.

In March, I made some adjustments to my writing, mainly in two aspects:

The first is the adjustment of the sense of substitution. When Shang Jianyao has no psychological activity and the whole group is acting together, it is necessary to completely highlight the protagonist and put the sense of substitution on Shang Jianyao, which will contradict the whole. When writing, it is neither left nor right. I The adjustment plan is to put the vision into a God's perspective, give the group a sense of agency as a whole, and then let Shang Jianyao be in charge of teasing, no, to highlight the bright colors.

Second, after the preliminary preparations have been made, some suspenseful characters and plots should be released appropriately, so that the tension of the plot gradually becomes tighter.

After adjustments in these two aspects, compared with the previous chapters, the reading experience in March has improved, and I can also write about the individual actions of the group characters in a meaningful way.

There are two things to do in April:

The first is to clarify the main mission of the group and set up the subsequent action goals. This is an important link in supporting the tension of the plot.

The second is the connection and corresponding expression of some of the previous contents. This is the focus of the third part, and it is also a difficult problem in writing. I am also very worried about whether it can achieve the expected effect. I hope I can write it as well as possible. In short, what I said It’s rather vague, for fear of spoilers.

Finally, the chapters have been updated in advance, please give me a guaranteed monthly ticket~