Entertainment: Become an actor from picking up attributes
Chapter 274 Unfinished Semi-finished Products
Regardless of whether this is true or not, being able to say such words has proven that this Luo Fei is definitely not an ordinary person.
"What's that for?"
Shirley asked.
"Because my eldest brother strives for excellence in movies, because he really likes this industry, and because of his professionalism."
Luo Fei said sincerely.
"After all, there are now more than eighteen insurance companies in the world that have blocked Big Brother, right?"
Luo Fei smiled.
"Hahaha, you, ugh..."
Shirley was amused and laughed. She appreciated it, but pointed at Luo Fei helplessly, laughing and shaking her head.
This Luo Fei is really an interesting person. Although he is a bit arrogant and rough-skinned, every word he says makes sense and it can be seen that he is very sincere.
Luo Fei shrugged and smiled.
"I'm not a martial artist, so I'm not very mature when it comes to fighting and drama, but when it comes to literature and drama, I think I'm still a bit foolish."
"To put it bluntly, there are many places in this script where the polishing is a little shallow, and the character creation is rather rigid and not three-dimensional."
As he spoke, Luo Fei turned around the script and pointed to the first scene.
"Here, Azong led his gang into the building to rob. Everything was too formal."
"Robbery, call the police, kidnap, confront, escape."
"Everything is too one-sided and cannot reflect the character of Azong at all."
"We all know that Azong is not short of money. He came to rob purely for excitement, self-indulgence and venting, but this was not reflected in this scene at all."
That's right, the reason why Luo Fei frowned after flipping through the script was because he found that this script had many shortcomings compared with the "New Police Story" in his original world.
It's like an unfinished semi-finished product, lacking polish.
You can use it, but it can be used.
But it will definitely be improved to a higher level after polishing.
This is a good film. If it were to be released in such a rough way, Luo Fei would really not be willing to do so.
If you have the ability to do it well, then why not?
The response is so fast!
Sister Shirley secretly praised her.
After scanning the entire script and understanding the general outline of the plot, Luo Fei actually pointed out the shortcomings in the script in such a short period of time!
It seems that Luo Fei, who is described by the media as a powerful actor and whose first movie grossed 400 million on the first day, is a real thing!
Sister Shirley is very happy.
First, I am glad that Luo Fei can treat movies with such a serious attitude.
Second, I'm glad I didn't make a mistake.
"Then tell me, if it were you, how would you design this opening plot to reveal the personality and demands of the character A Zong."
Sister Shirley asked with interest.
"If it were me, I wouldn't choose the common scenario of letting the guards secretly call the police."
Luo Fei raised his eyebrows.
"I'll ask the guards to call the police."
"What?"
"Call the police, call the police in front of me."
Luo Fei spoke very casually, but the arrogance and fierceness in his eyes were clearly revealed at that moment!
For a moment, Sister Shirley felt cold all over her body!
What an arrogant Luo Fei!
No! It should be said that Azong is so arrogant!
With a simple small change, Azong's fun-loving mentality and arrogant momentum came out!
I am a robber, I am here to rob, and I order you to call the police!
How arrogant and lawless can a gangster be to do such a thing!
This is simply not taking the police seriously!
With one move, the character Azong became three-dimensional!
"Amazing……"
Sister Shirley murmured.
Although she doesn't understand screenwriting, even as an ordinary viewer, she can tell which ones are good and which are bad.
Undoubtedly, Luo Fei's change, although small, is a finishing touch that is enough to turn around the opening chapter.
Even after Shirley listened to Luo Fei's suggestion, she went back to read the original script and suddenly felt it was boring.
Moreover, the cold air that burst out from Luo Fei's eyes at that moment made her feel a chill running down her back.
Although she had conducted interviews for a period of time before, this was the first time that Shirley felt Luo Fei's acting skills directly.
It can be said that when Luo Fei enters the scene, he is exuding an evil aura from the inside out, which makes people shudder.
Azong, this rich second-generation playboy with high IQ, twisted psychology, and outrageous behavior is simply tailor-made for Luo Fei!
Luo Fei smiled and returned to normal.
"Of course, this is just a small part of it. There are still some parts later, and I also have some suggestions."
"Okay, Azong."
Shirley waved her hands, completely impressed by Luo Fei's talent.
"I don't understand the script. I will discuss the details of the script in the future. Tomorrow I will contact my elder brother and Director Chen Musheng. You will hold a video discussion remotely. You tell me. I will tell you that you are too good. There is nothing more.
Nothing else to say."
Shirley said with a smile.
Sister Shirley was shocked!
She originally thought that Luo Fei's rash comments on the script would arouse Sister Shirley's dissatisfaction and even affect the cooperation between the two parties.
But never expected that Luo Fei would convince Sister Shirley after all his hard work was in vain?
And he even bluntly said that Luo Fei was ‘too good’?
Are all these big shots like this?
If you can't lick it, you have to be spanked to feel comfortable?
She really guessed it right.
Most people lick Sister Shirley, but she really doesn't even look at them.
The assistant has done her job and has seen too many people who come to kneel and lick her, so she has already developed immunity.
What she saw was not how humble, sincere or even humble the artist was.
With such a high status, one no longer needs the lowliness and humility of others to set him off.
What she is looking for is someone with real abilities.
Undoubtedly, Luo Fei is such a person.
Although it was a bit against the rules to point out flaws in the script in person, what they said was reasonable, and the changes were really good, not just random changes.
To further enhance the final presentation of the movie!
Shirley raised her hands in welcome!
The entertainment industry is not only a place that values human relationships, but also a place that values strength!
Finally, Sister Shirley decided to contact her elder brother and director Chen Musheng at 9:30 tomorrow morning to arrange a remote video discussion for the three of them to discuss the script.
Sister Shirley personally drove Sister Shirley back to the hotel where she was staying. Only Luo Fei, Zhou Jun and his assistant were left in the office.
"call--"
Zhou Jun breathed a sigh of relief when he saw Sister Shirley walking away.
"You're really scary."
Luo Fei also relaxed, leaned on the sofa, and lit a cigarette.
"What's wrong?"
"How can an actor start to find fault with the script before the contract is signed? Let alone Sister Shirley, if there is a stronger agent sitting opposite him, he will immediately slam the table and leave!"
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