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Chapter 533: Principal Gu’s science fiction film!!

Arriving at the dinner party, Gu Jiale was already waiting.

Jiang Feng and Liu Yifei went over and stood with him.

It can be seen from the fact that Gu Jiale arrived first. He is really interested in this script.

If he didn’t really want to ask Jiang Feng for advice, he would not have come so early and waited here.

After finding a seat and sitting down, Jiang Feng chatted with Gu Jiale:”When do you plan to shoot?”

“In fact, the script”Tomorrow’s War” was also an idea I had after reading your”Avatar””

“This movie of yours also gave me great encouragement, so I asked my friends to prepare this script.”

“Tell me, what did you think after reading the script?”

Gu Jiale discussed with Jiang Feng very seriously.

Jiang Feng was also very clear about Gu Jiale’s anxiety.

He had read the script, and Gu Jiale also brought the script to stop him, which is enough to show his intentions.

“I have read the script and found several problems”

“The first one is the first one. The story is simple, the layout is not big, and the actors have limited performance.”

“The setting of the doomsday and the alien creature Pandora is actually okay; but the part where the robots chase the car on the road is similar to the car chase scene in traditional Hong Kong movies, but I can also imagine the scene.”

“In fact, the car chase was acceptable. After all, there were several robots chasing each other, so the chase scene was acceptable.”

“The second point is that the scenes are limited and there are many bugs in the details.”

“Let’s just say that the beetle here cannot be penetrated by machine gun bullets, but can be cut through by an axe. This is a bug. The penetrating power of bullets must be stronger than that of ordinary axes.”

“Unless the ax you use is powered by the kinetic energy of the mecha suit, this will be convincing.”

“Otherwise, if you just fight in a mecha and rely solely on manpower to chop the axe, even if the axe is sharp, its penetration and lethality will not be as good as that of a machine gun.”

“Another thing is that the design of your mecha suit is too simple. It just can run fast, jump high, and is bulletproof.”

“In addition to these functions, your mecha suit does not even have the most basic ability settings. In the end, you have to use ordinary machine guns to provide firepower. Then your mecha suit is very useless in design.”

“Mecha science fiction movies are actually about the versatility of mechas, but the functionality of your mecha is almost zero. This mecha suit has no surprises for the audience.”

These problems pointed out by Jiang Feng just made Gu Tianqin think of it.

Yes, a mecha suit doesn’t even have the most basic special firepower, so what is the use of this mecha suit? It’s just simple Is it just about running fast, being invulnerable and jumping high?

If that’s the case, isn’t the function of this mecha too useless?

“Also, the roots of Pandora, according to the description in the script, are found. However, as the foundation of alien creatures, there are not even the most basic protective measures. There are only a few beetles for protection. This is inevitably a bit anticlimactic, isn’t it??”

Gu Jiale agreed with all the bugs Jiang Feng raised.

He had never considered these issues before, and they were easily ignored.

“Also, this script has a very common problem in Hong Kong films.”

“Think about it, for such a big apocalyptic science fiction movie, how many characters are there in the whole movie?”

“The commander-in-chief, the doctor, the colonel, the correspondent couple, and you three brothers and a little girl.”

“Seriously, in a doomsday science fiction film, you plan to use these ten people to save the world. It is obviously unreasonable and not convincing enough.”

“The most important thing is that it is said to be a doomsday science fiction film, but the combat power of the entire movie is only you three brothers and a cowardly correspondent. With this little combat power, you go to save the world. The setting is too simple. This is a very big bug.”

“What sci-fi films need most is grand scenes and combat effectiveness. However, your script is not rigorous enough in terms of combat effectiveness. Four people are not enough.”

“Another point is that there were originally insufficient personnel and insufficient combat power; a little girl was also designed to be inside, and one of the two combat powers was needed to accompany her.”

“Originally, there were only two people with combat power. The driver was afraid of death and the correspondent was timid. There were only two mechas with combat power, and a mecha character was designed to accompany the little girl. Isn’t this a joke?”

“There are also big scenes. To be honest, I read the script and there are only two big scenes. The first one is the car chase, which counts as one; the other one is when Pandora grows crazily when it rains for the second time., huge vines climbed over the protective wall and destroyed residential areas. These are two big scenes.”

“I won’t talk about the special effects for now; after all, they are made with care and are willing to spend money. According to the current domestic special effects industry standards, there will definitely be no problem.”

“But there are too many problems here.”

Jiang Feng suggested all the main questions he had after watching the movie to Gu Jiale and asked him to think about it.

In fact, Jiang Feng, who has watched the movie, still remembers a lot even though it has been so many years.

It is undeniable that the special effects of this movie are indeed very good.

As the first domestic mecha science fiction film, there are really no problems with the special effects and the plot design. This is understandable, after all. Science fiction movies are all about scenes, and you don’t have to pay too much attention to the plot. There is no problem.

But the problem is that there are not many big scenes in this movie.

There are only two scenes, but apart from these two big scenes, there are no big scenes. Well, the key point is that these two big scenes have very little firepower and are simply not enjoyable enough. If the plot is not good, the scenes must be strong.

If the plot is weak and the scenes are not strong, the audience will definitely not buy it.

Gu Tian Le was also thinking seriously. He felt that what Jiang Feng said made sense.

“So how do you think the story should be designed?”

Gu Tianle came to Jiang Feng this time just to learn from the experience.

“I think you should just leave it like this. In terms of plot design, you can stick to the original plan, no problem. The story is almost understandable, but the scenes need to be upgraded.”

“You have too few scenes, and the audience will not be satisfied with it, so they will definitely not recommend it, or it will be a second brush.”

“You increase the big scene, set the firepower of the mecha, and then add more personnel.”

“For example, if you want to find the foundation of Pandora, after arriving at the machine, you need to arrange at least five or six characters wearing mecha suits, so that there is enough firepower output, and this scene will be up.”

“This scene is enough to cover up the shortcomings of the plot, so it is convincing”

“There is also the design of the little girl. You can also arrange for someone to accompany her to protect her, but you cannot reduce the number of combatants you arrange to fight. Otherwise, it will be boring.”

“As a doomsday science fiction film, it is unreasonable for two or three people to save the world.”

“Or you can simply delete the setting of the little girl, because the little girl has no role in the plot and is just to express the relationship between the hero and his daughter.”

“I personally don’t think this section is necessary. The point of science fiction movies is not illness, but enjoyment.”

“For a sensational setting, it is enough to watch a drama film, while a science fiction film must comply with the requirements of a science fiction film.”

After listening to what Jiang Feng said, Gu Tianle also felt that this limit was reasonable.

From this point of view, there are indeed many problems in this script.

“I think you shouldn’t be anxious and don’t start any projects this year.”

“I have a New Year’s film to be released during the Spring Festival next year, which is also a mecha science fiction film. If you have seen this film of mine, it should give you some inspiration.”

Jiang Feng thought of his own”Pacific Rim”.

This movie is also a mecha science fiction film, and it should be able to inspire Gu Jia Le a lot.

“Okay, I will go see the movie next year. I will find time to discuss it with you after revising the script.”

Just after we finished talking about this matter, Liu Dehua and others came over.

“So what are you talking about hiding here?”

Liu Dehua came over and asked about this matter.

“Let’s talk to Jiang Feng about my science fiction film script.”

Gu Jiale said to Liu Dehua with a smile.

“Then you have found the right person. For the subject of science fiction films, Jiang Feng is the most suitable candidate.”

Obviously, Liu Dehua also knew about the movie Gu Jiale prepared.

“Congratulations on winning the Best Actor.”

Jiang Feng laughed and clinked glasses with Gu Jiale.

“Thanks. After Liu

Dehua drank the wine, he asked Jiang Feng:”How about it? What projects are there next year that we can work on together again?””

“Let’s take a look, but when I was chatting with Gu Shuai just now, I happened to think of a mecha science fiction movie.”

“Hey hey~” Now Gu Jiale became anxious:”You wouldn’t have done this to me first, would you?”

“No, although they are both mecha science fiction movies, they are completely different from your setting.”

“The plot is different, and the mecha design is also different.”

Jiang Feng explained with a smile.

“Hey, no, don’t. If you have any sci-fi movies, come to me.”

“I have wanted to make a science fiction film since three years ago, and mecha science fiction films are also my obsession.”

“If you have a good mecha sci-fi movie, come to me. It doesn’t matter if the movie is small.”

“It would be great if it could make my dream of a mecha science fiction movie come true.”

Gu Jiale really wants to make one

“Haha~” Seeing Gu Jiale so anxious, Liu Dehua and Jiang Feng both laughed.

“I can’t promise you now. I can’t decide until I finish writing the script and see the situation.”

“Then I’ll just wait for your news. After all, my script does have a lot of problems.”

“If you happen to have it, then you can come to me. As long as it’s a mecha science fiction film, I’ll pay you only 50% of my market price.”

Gu Jiale is serious about this and is not joking with…