Fox in the Penalty Area

This is the result of rewriting after I deleted it, please review it.

The original content didn't have so many foreshadowing in the pre-match match, and there was no character creation. After chapter 414, it directly started the match with Blue and White Munich, scoring goals and breaking records. I think it's not refreshing to write it like this because of the lack of foreshadowing, and it didn't create any impressive characters. It was a complete waste of such an important game as the semi-finals.

At that time, it was because the book was about to be finished, and the plot progressed faster.

As a result, the faster and faster the error, the more it fell into the gutter.

The game was written painfully, without passion or feeling.

After forcing myself to write half of the game, I felt that I couldn't continue writing like this. After calming down and thinking carefully, I still have to go back to the "original heart":

This book is not about how the protagonist Hu Lai pretends to be a person alone, but about a world.

That being the case, what is shaping a world without other characters with distinct personalities, minds of their own, and stories to tell?

So delete and rewrite, slow down your mind, and repeatedly describe and shape different characters from multiple dimensions.

For example, Hantchek, a personality coach who does not hesitate to leave his old club for his own future, and plays the bad guy in front of the fans of his old club for the sake of victory, and adds a description of Becker's Golden Globe award...etc.

But write the two rounds of semi-finals as a game, and also conceive and describe it as a complete story, with a beginning, a climax, an ending... everything is available.

And these are actually what some readers call "water", which is also the charm of the novel.

Everyone knew that Hu Lai was going to break the record, and no one even guessed how to break the record. But that's just the skeleton of the story.

Only these are not enough.

From Chapter 415 to Chapter 443, the minds, personalities, and details of the characters in the nearly 30,000 words are the full meat.

Without these meat-filled skeletons, just showing everyone a skeleton, what beauty is there?

In this way, when everyone has finished watching this plot, they will really feel refreshed when they break the record for Hu Lai, because the people and emotions in it are real, and they can entrust everyone with a sense of substitution.

Instead of being dry, I wrote that Hu Lai scored a goal,

I broke the record writing Holly. It's all about me telling you how and how, not what you feel in the process of reading.

Judging from the final effect, I succeeded. Whether it is subscriptions, monthly tickets or chapter activity, this has been proved.

So even if someone scolds me when I lay the groundwork before the game, I will still insist on writing like this.

And in order not to affect everyone's reading experience, I will delete all the comments that talk about water. If the fan value is only trainees, apprentices, and disciples who call me water, then I will not only delete the post, but also ban it-this is I have emphasized it before.

If you see that the comment about water is gone, don’t come to ask why you deleted the comment, because you are talking nonsense, if I don’t delete it, will I keep the baby?

This is not water, this is a novel, this is a world.

Seventy percent of the human body is water, and seventy percent of the earth's coverage area is also water. People cannot live without drinking water, and life cannot be born in the world without water.

So my novels will definitely be "water". This is my characteristic and advantage, and I am proud of it, and I don't plan to change it.

If you like it, you can accept it.

If you don't like it, don't watch it if you can't accept it.

Everyone has a two-way choice, and everyone is safe.

Those who can see this, I believe, are readers and friends who have already agreed and accepted it. Thank you for your support and understanding. It is the world we have shaped together.

There are almost one million words left in this novel and it will be finished. According to my speed, it may be finished by the end of this year or early next year.

Even at the final stage, I will always uphold the original intention and the attitude I had when I first started writing this book. As long as there are unsatisfactory parts, I will delete and rewrite them, and take every plot seriously.

On the day when this book is finished, I hope that all of us will look back on the past two years and recall many episodes that make people smile and scalp tingle, and feel reluctance and melancholy from the bottom of our hearts.

Thanks!

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