Fox in the Penalty Area

In the recent update, some readers complained that it was too watery, and some people said that the seven chapters of a game have not been finished yet, so it will be necessary to write ten chapters...

I also want to complain about these complaints - please, writing ten chapters or even more than ten chapters is an important competition, and of course I have to write in detail. I have written countless games in this book, and there are also games that are written in one or two chapters, or even several games in one chapter... So I don’t write a novel in detail? All plots must have a certain length, capacity and rhythm?

Is that called writing a novel?

That's called a running account!

If I write ten or eight chapters for every game, I'll admit it if you call me stupid. Can’t we write in detail about important games? Does this make sense? Who is writing this book? Who controls the pace of the storyline?

My book has always been at this pace. Important matches will be written in great detail, covering every aspect. Whether it's this game or the important games before.

After all, if I just take care of an important game, what kind of important game is it? So some people started watching Foxes in the Zone directly from this game? Didn’t you read more than three million words before?

I thought I had mentioned this problem many times. When you read the book and read this, those readers who are fans of the helm, at least all of them have subscribed to VIP chapters, should also be very clear about the rhythm and habits of my book. I won't dwell on this issue.

Who would have thought that as long as there is a competition and the length of the article is long, there will be some "shui shui shui" sounds from time to time:

I started writing about Hu Lai's first game in the Premier League in an all-round way from before the game, but some people said it was "watery".

I also wrote in great detail about the last game of Hu Lai’s Chinese Super League championship. Some people said that it took too long to lose the passion.

I laid the groundwork for so long before Hu Lai played the South Korean team in the East Asian Cup. Some people said that the water is flooding the gold mountain.

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There are also many, many important games that I have spent a lot of time and space describing that are criticized by you. Now that I look back and read them, I still feel that they are well written:

Full of emotions, eloquent emotions, well-prepared, full of pictures, full of presence, making people feel like they are there... I am watching it now, and no matter how many times I watch it, I will still be fascinated by the descriptions in it. infected.

These are shaped by words and space that are considered “water.”

Some people say it's unfair to write that the protagonist didn't score a goal in the game.

Some people say that writing a protagonist is not a competition.

Some people say it’s unfair to write supporting roles instead of protagonists.

Shaping opponents and improving this virtual world are still controversial.

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Explain that I have said it so many times before that it makes me look like Xianglin's wife - but there is nothing I can do. If I don't explain when someone talks about water, it will seem to them that I have acquiesced. It seems they were right. So the next time I encounter an important game like this and write a lot of chapters, someone will jump out and talk about it.

I don’t remember that I specifically explained it before...

I really don’t want to go out and explain it every time. After all, it wastes my time and affects my writing mood.

At the same time, it also affects everyone’s mood when reading.

After all, there are always people talking about water, and the rhythm will really be brought up. And those readers who don't feel comfortable will also be affected by the mood of reading the book, and may even cause quarrels in the discussion forum.

So whenever I see someone talking about sex, I will delete it. Feel sorry.

Anyway, you told me to see it, and I deleted it when I saw it. There is no need to keep it to affect everyone’s mood and cause war.

Until now, I have spent more than ten hours writing two chapters a day, so I can say with my conscience that every word in this book is not watery, and every word has its own existence. Value and meaning, every sentence has my thoughts buried in it... Some people can't see it, but it doesn't mean those words are meaningless and nutritious.

Although it is fictional, I don’t need to look up information like those previous books, but to build a world out of thin air, I still need to draw materials from reality, and I need to integrate the knowledge I have mastered before, and finally make this fictional world enough Believable.

I have put much more thought into this book than my previous books, and I believe readers who read carefully will be able to feel it.

I always believe that the greatest sense of achievement for an author comes from the fact that his little thoughts hidden between the lines can be perceived by readers and resonate.

In other words, there is a tacit understanding between the author and the reader.

If there is no tacit understanding, you can only see "water" and "big water" from the thousands of words I wrote with my bare hair... Then I'm really sorry, you are not the target audience of this book, why bother yourself?

Of course I also know that if I update ten times a day, even if I am really flooded, I am afraid that few people will really say that I am flooded. After all, "the quantity is large and the tube is full", so why do I need a bicycle? But I'm sorry that I can't do it. It's not that I don't bother to do it, but I really can't write so many words.

Important games often require an emotional outburst at the end, but the previous week really left readers with a sense of incoherence. But what to do?

I can't write the chapters in one day.

So when you see an important game, those who want to read it in one go save it. Isn’t it good to read it after finishing one game?

If you are anxious and want to watch it as soon as possible, then be more careful. I have neither a studio nor an AI coding program. I don’t have three heads and six arms myself, and I can’t achieve the state of selflessness without caring about worldly affairs... I only have these hands. , at this speed, and as age increases, the speed can only become slower and slower, and it is impossible to increase in reverse.

So just endure it or save it.

Don’t just rush to this chapter and yell “water”. After you yell, you won’t let me update faster, nor will I change the content immediately. I will still stubbornly follow my own pace. Write.

Finally, I also saw someone saying that Lin Hai started to crazily fill in the novel as soon as he reached the later stage of the novel, and it became a habit... I'm sorry, I have only written half of the book, and it has not entered the late stage yet, so I disappoint you.

A book with a volume of at least 6 million words, a key game that determines whether Hu Lai can win the first Premier League championship, ten chapters, 30,000 words, accounting for 1/200 of the total word count... Very watery? Is it hard to understand?

During the Qidian annual meeting, I stayed up late coding for three consecutive days in the hotel room. I read the comments in this chapter backstage. I really couldn't complain, so I wrote these complaints, which can be regarded as my "confession".

If this offends me, please forgive me for being so emotional.