From game production to global domination
Chapter 267
Later, it was said that he came from the north and passed through the gate of rope makers....
The story of "The Witcher" slowly unfolds.
The novel "The Demon Hunter", as a work that can wrench the wrist with "The Lord of the Rings" in the last century, naturally has its own uniqueness.
The prologue is Geralt, the protagonist of "The Witcher", who walks into a tavern and puts a layer of mystery on the profession of the Demon Hunter according to the discussion of the surrounding crowd.
And then....
Then Wang Ye couldn't stand it.
What the hell is this?
What about the Golden Three Chapters?
Even if there are no golden three chapters, there must be a cool point within five chapters, right?
In the current novel circle, if it is a novice writer without a reputation, who wants to slowly lay the groundwork and develop slowly, the reader may abandon the pit before the foreshadowing plot is connected.
After all, it's a fast-paced time.
Web literature pursues a fast pace.
Often the first chapter has to be a bright spot.
Although the traditional published novel, in terms of rhythm control, will be a little slower than the online novel, but... This is for some writers who have deep writing experience, and have other excellent works, and have the blessing of fans.
A writer with no historical achievements, but also wants to slowly control the plot, most of them are dead.
The first three chapters without highlights can easily make the reader unable to read it after a few glances.
To say that it is the first three chapters, in fact, it is essentially the content of the first 6,000 to 10,000 words.
And the novel "Demon Hunter", there is no hanging, if only the protagonist in the whole world is a demon hunter, it is okay, but Wang Ye, who has read the synopsis of the novel, knows that the demon hunter is a group.
This also shows that the protagonist is not too special compared to others.
There is no goldfinger, the protagonist is not special enough, such a book, how can it be popular? How to make readers happy?
"But the writing is not bad, no... This kind of writing is even very old, and the pen power is also very profound. "
This is the only place where Wang Ye feels good.
The pen and pen power Chinese novels are not the same thing.
In a novel, the proportion of writing is often not so important, and a well-written novel is only a plus, and more cares more about the plot.
Sometimes the writing is too good, and for a novel, it will become a minus.
Fiction is not prose, readers come to see the plot.
Those written mysterious and mysterious, all kinds of gorgeous words, let readers see the writing in the clouds, not all readers can read in.
More important than writing is pen power for a novel.
The test of pen power is the rendering of the atmosphere, the grasp of the environment and psychology, the description of emotions, how to let readers understand the meaning of each line of sentences at a glance, how to combine the writing and plot of the novel, so that readers can be more immersed in the world of the novel.
Pen power is often accompanied by the plot, and the plot of the novel is mutually blessed, and sometimes a story with an old-fashioned plot can also attract a large number of readers with pen power.
The novel "The Demon Hunter" was written by Westerners, so it is an authentic Western fantasy novel.
However, due to the problem of language habits, when translating into Chinese, it may make readers a little unsatisfied.
However, because Li Feng has the literary proficiency obtained by the lottery, and because he originally knew more about the novel "Demon Hunter", he is better than the translated "Demon Hunter" in the degree of localization, and it is more in line with the reading habits of Chinese people.
But as a novel, in the end, the most important thing is the plot.
Wang Ye was very dissatisfied with the first six thousand words of the novel "Demon Hunter"!
"Ahem... What, what about this novel of yours, the writing is good, the sense of atmosphere is also very good, if it is placed in the past, I will definitely sign this novel. Wang Ye said seriously to Li Feng.
Li Feng: ???
Li Feng understood that people who often spoke like this had to add buts later.
Alas, no, this is "The Witcher", this is a novel that can wrestle with "The Lord of the Rings"!
"But what... I'm so sorry.
"Listening to your pen name, you are also writing a novel for the first time, and you also know that for a new writer, if the setting is not novel enough, and the content of the first 10,000 words is not good enough, it is difficult to improve."
"And what you wrote is actually Western fantasy, I don't know if you have heard a sentence, write Western fantasy a dead end, now Western fantasy is no longer the mainstream of online literature, I say this I hope you can understand."
"However, your pen power is still very good, and if you are willing to make some modifications, it is not impossible to sign."
Li Feng was stunned for a moment: "Revise?
Wang Ye nodded and said: "Yes, I give a suggestion ha, whether you listen or not is your freedom, you, change the names of those Western characters, cultural customs, are changed to oriental, elves, witches, whatever, change to the unique race and occupation with the taste of the East, and in this profession, most of them are women, and the protagonist is the only male in this profession, and then many women like this protagonist, in other words, it is ambiguous with these female characters, and then, The true identity of the protagonist is the only demon hunter in this world, in other words, let the profession of the demon hunter become the protagonist's golden finger, and can be upgraded to shape the characteristics of the protagonist.
"In other words, let the protagonist open a harem, the villain squeezes the protagonist, the protagonist upgrades with a gold finger, and then punches the villain in the face, so you know?"
Li Feng looked at Wang Ye speechlessly....
I know, I know you're yarn.
Isn't this the routine of traditional fantasy and cool writing?
Don't you know, this routine has long been outdated?
Let the novel "Demon Hunter" become a traditional cool article, Li Feng dare not think about it.
And he wrote the novel "The Demon Hunter" to promote the game, the setting has been changed, and I also promote a hairy game?
And...... He wrote down the entire novel of "The Demon Hunter", and if he revised it, he had to change it to the year of the monkey!
"So what... That one...... How about you take another look? Maybe...... Really good-looking? Li Feng glanced at Wang Ye and said.
Hearing these words, Wang Ye sneered in his heart.
Not again.
I think that the novels I wrote are fresh and unconventional, and even become world masterpieces, and I can't accept the fact that I am bad.
Often pointing out a little fault, they are incompetent and barking, thinking that they have written excellent novels, and others criticize them and say that others do not understand.
Such authors, he has seen a lot.
Hearing Li Feng's words, Wang Ye no longer had a good impression of Li Feng.
He closed the computer file and smiled at Li Feng: "No need, my suggestion has been given, whether to change it or not is your problem, and... Even if you change it, it won't necessarily pass in me.
After Wang Ye finished speaking, he glanced at Li Feng contemptuously by the way.
"An author who does not have a little fame and does not understand the direction of the current novel, why do you dare to write like this?"
"Collect your confidence, boy."
Li Feng wordlessly unplugged his own USB flash drive plugged into Wang Ye's computer and shook his head sympathetically at Wang Ye.
"Okay, goodbye then."
Li Feng's action of inserting the USB flash drive on his computer made Wang Ye a little angry, and his impression of Li Feng was reduced again, and he felt that Li Feng was very disrespectful to himself.
A small white author, actually daring to disrespect the editor.
And Li Feng's expression at this time made Wang Ye a little annoyed.
"What do you mean? Hands and feet, did I let you pull it? Wang Ye shouted.
Li Feng looked at Wang Ye suspiciously: "It's not interesting?" Good bye.
After that, Li Feng turned around and left.
When he walked out the door, Li Feng felt a little funny.
Author with little fame....
Li Feng felt that he was not an author, after all, the novel "Demon Hunter", he also copied from his previous life.
But fame....
Let me ask... Isn't the name Li Feng famous enough?
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