General Man: My Days Are Not Too Ordinary

Mu Lin is unhappy that someone is getting in the way of playing the game.

He put down the game console, stretched Erlang's legs, held his chin, and looked like a king looking down on the untouchables, making people wonder whether this society was called the Ministry of Service or the Ministry of Service.

Muzuzu sweated coldly, as if handing over the original manuscript of the novel.

But Mu Lin did not answer, but asked: "So why don't you post this light novel on the website?" If you post it on the website, someone will naturally give you a review.

"The net, the readers on the Internet are merciless, they give me a bad review of me I will die."

"So you think we'll show mercy to our subordinates?"

"Well..." Mumu-za scratched his head in embarrassment.

Mu Lin glanced at him lightly, took the notebook, and glanced at it casually.

In the eyes of others, this action is like enjoying the touch without looking at it, deliberately hitting it with a turned page.

Under the doubtful gazes of others, Mu Lin directly threw the notebook on the table.

The original novel, which was very precious to the wooden seat, slid on the table a meter away, just in time to land next to a red laptop.

Shiwa Kasumigaoka, who couldn't even call Yui Hibin back to God, was very miraculously detached from his creative enthusiasm and looked at Mulin in confusion.

"What for?"

"This is the original manuscript of the novel he wrote, you can help him see it."

"Why should I watch?"

"Why do you say?"

Mu Lin picked up the game console and continued to play, as if he was shaking his hand.

Kasumigaoka Shiwa frowned unpleasantly.

When you teach others to write novels, your own creative talent can also improve.

It's like math teachers often ask classmates to teach each other math problems to improve grades.

When teaching others, the side that teaches also solidifies their own knowledge.

The reluctant Kasumigaoka Shiwa finally took a deep breath, picked up the notebook under the hopeful gaze of Kagi-za, and quickly looked at it.

He is worthy of being a light novel writer, with deep writing skills and a very fast reading speed.

If you change to someone else, you definitely need to read for more than two or three hours, and Kasumigaoka Shiwa only took less than 20 minutes.

"Whew..."

she exhaled a turbid breath to calm her somewhat agitated emotions.

"You said you were going to take this novel to submit to the Newcomer Award?"

"Yes, yes! Are you eligible for the award? "

Kikiza felt that he could get an affirmative answer, because he was very enthusiastic when he wrote this novel! He feels that this novel will become the supreme masterpiece that shocks the novel circle and even the world!

Thinking so, he couldn't help but straighten his chest and raise his head, and when he was about to laugh out loud, he was greeted by a thunderbolt answer.

"It's delusional!"

"Huh?"

"This defense-like novel is simply not for people to read!"

Scolding this sentence, looking at the soulless and incredulous expression of Mumuza.

Shiha Kasumigaoka always felt a strange sense of déjà vu.

But I have to say that this kind of behavior of standing on a high place to evaluate others makes her very cool.

Damn it! Was that why he scolded me for rotten novels at that time?!

Thinking so, Kasumigaoka Shiyu glanced at Mulin.

But maybe that's not the case....

After all, this novel is really rotten and gives her a headache to read! Feel insulted in your life!

Kasumigaoka Shiyu felt that her scolding and defense were light.

"No, it can't be! My novel can never be as bad as Ru said! "

The enigmatic confidence of the wooden seat also gives Shiha Kasumigaoka a sense of déjà vu.

This sense of déjà vu made her feel more and more unconvinced and unwilling.

She glanced at Mu Lin, and then looked at Mu Muza and said lightly: "I'm sorry, your novel is so bad!" Rotten to the point of being almost irreparable!

"Boring! For the reader is a torture! Not to mention the plot, even the grammar is messy, which makes me wonder if your elementary school Chinese class is sleeping! And the plot logic is completely nonsensical, all self-hilarious type, why do the female characters in it have to undress during the battle? Why are all the moves in English? Wouldn't English be more advanced? And you haven't finished this novel at all, right? There is not even an ending, which makes it hard not to suspect that this novel was written by you out of interest..."

Don't say it! Don't say it! Spare your life!! "

Wood Wood Seat ORZ knelt on the ground, like the Monkey King who was cursed tightly, holding his hands and ears and shaking his head in pain!

Look at his embarrassed appearance faintly.

Shiyu Kasumigaoka continued: "Your original novel manuscript is so bad that I can't give you any suggestions for revision, so take it back and seriously revise or rewrite it!" By the way, it's best to read more books about the relevant genre before writing! And also! If you can, please repeat your elementary school Chinese lessons.

"Shiyu, the most, the last point is too hurtful, right?" Yubibin Yui couldn't bear to look at the wooden seat rolling on the ground.

Finally, Mumuza came out of the self-contained state of being poisoned by the tongue.

He lost his soul for a long time, and finally plucked up the courage and said, "Excuse me, can you help me take another look next time?"

Yubibin Yui complained: "You're a masochist, right?

"It's not! Although it is a bad review, but... At least from the bottom of my heart about the novel I wrote! This is something to be happy about, moreover, General I am Jianhao! How could this setback be defeated? Wait for it! I'll definitely be writing a new book that's even better soon!

Kiki-za gave a thumbs up with high spirit.

"It's not much better than this one."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's words made his thumbs tremble slightly.

"Besides, I shouldn't have a chance to see you do something new again."

"Huh? How so?

"I'm sorry, he and I are exchange students, and this ministry will be disbanded after our exchange students leave."

"This, this..." said Mukiza, dejectedly, "but it's okay! I can naturally find others who are willing to help me! Then I will retire first! Leave it at that! "

Mumuza, with the original manuscript of the novel, left a lonely back far away.

And this helpless back made Yubibin Yui sympathize: "What a pity, such a good ministry will be disbanded at that time." Yukino

remained silent, not knowing what he was thinking.

Shiyu Kasumigaoka suddenly asked Mu Lin, who had been playing games on the game console from beginning to end.

"How did you feel when you read my novel?"

"Just like you just did."

"Impossible!"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's tone is beyond doubt!

Because her novels are much better than Kikiza's, it's definitely an unquestionable thing!

And this arrogant teenager actually arrogantly said that their novel is at a level!

"Heh, for me, your novel level is indeed the same, both are 0 points."

"You..." Shiha

, who was deeply shocked, had just understood Mulin, and now he felt that he was a complete bastard!

"Eh! No, don't argue!

Yui Bibin inserted it between the two.

"Hmph."

Under the snow on the side, Yukino opened "I Am a Cat" boring and continued reading.