General Man: My Days Are Not Too Ordinary

Chapter 67

(PreviousPS: The first sentence paragraph commented on the concept map of Hojo Miko)

The night sky is mottled with stars.

Neon fluorescent lights.

The noise of the car whistle echoes through the bustling streets of Tokyo.

Immortal River Fantastic Library.

Machida Enko Office.

On the table were two cups of fragrant Mocha coffee.

Coffee Mocha is an ancient coffee made from an Italian espresso, chocolate sauce, whipped cream and milk.

The taste is slightly bitter, but there is a slight sweetness.

"Hmm..."

Machida was scrolling the mouse wheel, browsing a modified version of Love Metronome on her computer.

Sitting opposite, Shiyu Kasumigaoka clasped his hands to his chest, shaking anxiously and slender his long legs.

Beautiful princess shoes constantly pat the floor.

At this time, she was extremely conflicted in her heart.

On the one hand.

It's about your future, and the dream of a light novelist.

She wanted to be recognized by Machida Enko and made her determined to help her company provide opportunities to continue writing.

But on the other hand.

Because a certain teenager is so hateful that she is so "annoying" that she doesn't even care about her dreams, and wants Machida Enko not to approve of her modified version!

Just to prove that his ghostly sun-eyed bullshit modification proposal is rotten! It's rubbish!

She really couldn't wait to stand in front of him now, and said with a strange yin and yang:

"Huh? Obviously I was still looking at me with garbage eyes before, and suddenly inexplicably took a novel with useless suggestions for revision, and asked me to follow the above modifications, what happened? I still didn't see it! How can you such arrogant and rampant dregs come and teach me a lesson? It's really like a frog on the side of the road who likes to scream at people passing by! "

But.

Thinking that he would retort like this:

"My revision proposal just lets you have a general direction, as for whether you can win the opportunity to continue writing, it all depends on your personal efforts and talent, since you still don't have this opportunity, then it can only prove that you have a problem, and it has nothing to do with me!"

No solution!

I feel that no matter what I do, I can't embarrass this bastard and embarrass this smelly fart man who makes me think about it day and night, dream of it!

"This bug-like abrasive frog!!"

Shiha Kasumigaoka, who was constantly stirring coffee with a spoon, muttered through gritted teeth.

"Huh? What the? Machida looked up suspiciously.

"Ah, no, nothing, how, finished reading?"

"Well, I'm done."

Machida Enko smiled slightly, her eyes quite approving.

This made Kasumigaoka Shiyu feel a little in his heart.

"That... What do you think?

"Very nice! With this new outline and storyline, the book now has the potential to become a bestseller! I will try to negotiate with the company and try to give you the opportunity to continue writing the second volume! And this modified version will be released after the first volume.

Machida said that she would try to give the opportunity to continue writing the second volume.

But she is valued by the editor-in-chief, and saying this sentence has basically given Kasumigaoka Shiyu the opportunity to continue to write a sure thing.

But.

What should have been a cheerful reaction did not appear on Kasumigaoka Shiwa's face.

The spoon that stirred the coffee in his hand did not fall as expected, because of the owner's surprise, splashing the coffee.

Instead, it is "bang bang", and the spoon that stirs more violently keeps hitting the coffee cup, causing a continuous abnormal noise!

Machida Enko wondered, "This kind of thing that changes yourself through hard work, is recognized by the company, and has the opportunity to continue on the road of dreams... You don't seem happy about it?

"No, I'm happy!"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu said expressionlessly.

"At least I don't see it."

"Rejoice, make me expressionless."

"Poof~ When will you tell jokes?"

"It's not a joke!"

"Well, I always feel like I can understand something, say, who is helping you?"

"Huh?"

"The first volume of this revised version amazes me very much, but as your editor, how can I not see that this plot and the style and writing are very different from your previous style, as for whether others helped to change it, I can't see it, it feels like you were called by some superior person and awakened."

“...... Please don't say that I was called by some high-ranking person to make people angry!

Kasumigaoka Shiyu was so angry that her chest continued to rise and fall.

The long black silk legs trembled even more fiercely.

"Huh? How does it make people angry?

"It's angry everywhere!"

"Poof~" Machida Yueko covered her mouth and smiled: "Where did the plain and cold Shiyu run away before?" How can you get angry at every turn now? "

“...... Recently, a disgusting person like a stalker has polluted my eyes!

"Wouldn't this idiot be the one guiding you to revise your novel?"

"There is no guidance! What kind of guidance is this? It's on my own! "

Huh? Well...... It feels like the kind of rebellious adolescent girl who hates taking care of her father..."

Your ability to get angry seems to be getting stronger lately! "

Ah... Maternal aunt? Who is the aunt?! Hehe, Shiyu, I don't seem to hear clearly? Who is the aunt?

Kasumigaoka Shiwa Sakura's lips squirmed, just about to speak.

"Well, with your drastic change in temperament and rude attitude, I may need to think about your continuation again."

Machida Enko darkened her face and said sadly.

"Consider! Think casually! Better not let me continue to write! "

...,"

Seeing Shiwa Kasumigaoka who had abandoned herself, Machida Enko was speechless for a while.

"How? Did you just scare me? Edit! Don't make me look down on you! Take out the momentum that you just used power to suppress people, to publish privately, and to threaten the author as an editor! "

“...... Shiyu, calm down.

"I'm calm!"

"Whew, well, I won't ask more. In short, this revised version of the novel was very successful, and as you said, it was up to you to modify it yourself. The plot outline and story line, as well as the character and motivation, are almost equivalent to another novel. It takes a lot of energy and thought to modify to this extent, and it is not easy, don't beat yourself up.

"I didn't beat myself up at all!"

“...... In short, this is the result of your efforts, and it is worth rejoicing. "

Hmm." Shiwa Kasumigaoka was a little relieved.

"What I want to ask more is, what are your thoughts that dare to face our denial and insist on revising this novel? Aren't you afraid that we still don't recognize you? This result is not only a simple effort, but also a bigger blow to your mind and affect the future. Remember what I gave you at the time, it's better to give up and read more best-selling works to improve yourself, right?

Kasumigaoka Shiwa was silent.

Originally, she had listened to Machida Enko's advice and had long since given up.

At that time, I was so decadent that I couldn't sleep and wasn't in the mood to do anything.

Until...

That rain on the rooftop.

There is also the umbrella that I can't forget to look down at the figure of myself who is so gaffe.

And that delicious fried noodle bread and cola.

And that, dreamed of....

"Because a bastard said, I'll die if I don't continue!"

"Huh? Such an exaggeration? Who is it?

"Do you have a Coke here?" I want to drink Coke.

"Don't you really like Mocha coffee?"