Hibiki looked at the source of the voice in disbelief.

The furniture was torn and the tatami mats were all torn apart, revealing the floor below.

Only the location of Harano Station is still intact

He was still in his old place, ignoring all attacks, and calm.

There was a large pile of manuscript paper on the floor, perhaps falling out when breaking the cabinet, and it was scattered and spread all over the floor.

Hey? What is it?

Taking advantage of Xiang Kai’s stunned expression, Yuan Ye picked up a piece of manuscript paper and looked at it intently.

What an old-fashioned manuscript paper, it’s actually Tian Zige.

It is full of writing, and the handwriting is very serious, not scrawled at all.

Is it an epistle?

I won’t read the letters.

Harano read two lines and immediately dismissed the above idea.

Not a letter, it seems to be a novel?

He couldn’t help but read it out loud.

“Once upon a time there was a mountain, and there was a temple on the mountain, and in the temple lived a monk who adopted many small children. There are men and women. Because there are so many people, these people can sometimes eat, sometimes they can only go hungry! ”

Groove!

It’s boring to look at!

Yuan Ye said sadly, “Xiangkai, did you write this?” At this level, it is difficult to hold up to 500 VIP collections on the shelves when published to Feilu. ”

What 500 Viaip?

Xiang Kai didn’t understand half of it, but the general meaning was still understandable.

Meaning, he wrote very badly!

The look of pain added a bit of hideousness.

Hibiki recalls the senior who reduced his work to worthlessness.

–I heard that you shut yourself in the house all day and don’t go out, and in the end you only write this kind of stuff?

–Give up, you have no talent at all! No one will come to buy your work!

That man’s words deeply stung Kai’s heart.

Why trample on the self-esteem of ghosts?

Why deny the efforts of ghosts?

Xiang Kai howled in pain, eager to tear the field to pieces on the spot.

The last person who said that he did not write well has already been unloaded by him, and no one can criticize him!

Harano shook his head, seeing through Xiang Kai’s thoughts.

It’s normal to write bad reviews.

Write well in the early stage, and write crooked in the later stage will also be sprayed.

Everyone has a different opinion, so speak freely.

The author must not be glass-hearted, but must have a good attitude to accept criticism.

Yuan Ye sighed, “I have always read books to evaluate from facts. Good is good, bad is bad. Don’t be sad. Anyway, the best-selling novels on the market now are rubbish. ”

“I killed you!” Hibiki roared angrily. In fact, he knew in his heart that he could not kill the field at all.

Yuan Ye looked at him with pity and said, “To be a ghost, you must first have self-knowledge. Say you pounce on the street, you still don’t admit it. So, I’ll tell you a story. Let you see what is called god-level level! ”

Xiang Kai was stunned and said, “What story?” Will it be better than Hachidogen? ”

Yuan Ye said indifferently, “A hundred times more wonderful than the Eight Dogs!” ”

He took a breath and opened his mouth, “Once upon a time there was a place called Konoha Village. The people in the village are all ninjas. Among them is a teenager named Naruto Uzumaki, who is famous in the ninja school with a crane tail. ”

Everyone looked down on Naruto, laughed at him, and flattened her. No matter how he cultivates, he is the last place. Even the good-natured head teacher was disappointed in him. ”

“However, it is such a waste wood boy who seals the most terrifying monster with his body! And his father, who sacrificed his life to seal that monster, is one of the greatest leaders of the village! ”

Tuntun Harano taught, and did not skimp on reading at all

“Understand? Persona is important. The protagonist can be scrapped at the beginning, but it must have a plug-in and a powerful background. That’s how you can look forward to it. ”

“Ah!!!” Xiang Kai involuntarily opened his mouth wide, obviously attracted by what he said.

Yuan Ye nodded in satisfaction, “The children can be taught.” “Eun, if Hokage can’t attract Hibiki, there are One Piece and Death.

The world of Hokage was more acceptable to him, so Harano chose Naruto.

Hehe, wait for him to get the hang of it after a while, and then talk about Type Moon and Marvel….

– Keep telling the story ——

Two hours later, it was said that Sasuke had defected to Orochimaru.

Haranoguchi was dry and decided to take a break.

However, Xiang Kaiyi was still unfinished, and he couldn’t stop and wanted to continue listening.

The twists and turns of the bizarre plot are gripping, and the ever-changing ninjutsu amazes the ghosts.

He was completely stunned, his mind was a mess, and his body trembled with pain and regret.

Poof!

Xiang Kai suddenly knelt down in front of the field and pounded, “It turns out that what I wrote… It’s really spicy chicken! Seniors are right! I did pounce on the street! I don’t have talent myself … but killed him… I…”

Hey, you can’t compare what you wrote to Naruto.

How many can compare?

A popular work that swept the world made Xiang Kai fall into doubt about self-worth.

If you continue like this, you will get depression.

Harano walked up to Hibiki, patted him on the shoulder comfortingly, and said, “Talent is relative, no original talent, does not mean that there is no talent for writing fandom!” ”

“People cannot be resurrected from death, you know your mistakes, and spend the rest of your life atoning for your sins.”

“Come on! Hibiki! Write a Naruto doujin for me! Do you know how ugly the books are here?! I can’t read a single thing, I can only count on you!!! ”

“When you finish writing Hokage, I’ll tell you more stories, and then you can try to write Synodus and Ten Thousand Worlds!”

Xiang Kai looked confused: ???!

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Xiangkai beats the drum and raises his left hand first. The right brain controls the left half of the body, indicating that his right brain is developed.

ps, developed right brain = music art, creative ability and spatial ability are relatively strong.

Actually, I’m also left-handed. (← boasting about himself around the bend, hehe).

As for the story written by Xiangkai, those who have read the original manga should be able to guess it~~

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