God Descends the Second Element

"You three, come with me to the office."

Iida Ayano randomly selected two adult men in their thirties, hesitated for a while, and nominated Wang Hao as well.

The other rookie cartoonists who were not selected were all disappointed. The two more mature cartoonists were nominated and they could agree, but the other one was obviously a high school student!

This damn world really needs good looks...

Although they thought so in their hearts, everyone didn't express their thoughts, so they had to leave with a sigh.

Wang Hao and the other two cartoonists walked into an office on the second floor following Tian Ayano's footsteps. The other two obviously didn't adapt to this environment, with respectful expressions on their faces.

Wang Hao sat on the office chair with a casual expression, and Iida Ayano admired this calm attitude.

Since the other party has such a confident attitude, either he is full of confidence in his original manuscript, or he is just an arrogant little ghost who has not been out of society.

But judging from Wang Hao's temperament, she is more inclined to the former, hoping that this kid can bring her a little surprise.

"Show me your manuscript."

When it came to business, Iida Ayano's casualness just now completely disappeared, replaced by a unique momentum of a strong woman in the workplace.

"Hay!"

The other two cartoonists, both in their thirties, respectfully agreed, took out their original manuscripts from their briefcases, bent over and handed them over.

This scene made Wang Hao a little speechless, but he didn't say anything. He also took out the manuscript from his bag, put it at the bottom, and sat on the chair casually.

Seeing this, Iida Ayano frowned slightly, and began to pick up the manuscript in her hand and read it carefully.

People who can be the editor-in-chief often have a pair of piercing eyes and a longer-term vision. They can even see the future potential from the beginning of the comic.

One of the basic requirements for being an editor-in-chief at Shueisha is a long-term vision.

Iida Ayano was very careful when reviewing the manuscript, but every time she turned a page, a drop of cold sweat appeared on the forehead of the manga artist being reviewed. After Iida Ayano reviewed his five-page manuscript, he threw it away. At the desk, his worst fears happened.

"Please take your original manuscript, it is no longer your business here."

"Can you tell me why?"

The cartoonist held the manuscript unwillingly, and did not leave in a hurry. After such a long effort was negated by one sentence, how could he just leave in such discouragement, how could he repair it! !

"That's as you wish." Iida Ayano smiled slightly, this smile was particularly piercing in his eyes, and then I heard Iida Ayano's evaluation, "You should be a newcomer, right?

It is unqualified in terms of the most basic storyboard, and I have no idea what you want to express.

In addition, the development of the plot deviates from the theme from the third page, and the painting style is obviously different on the fifth page. Based on these, your comic has already failed. "

Iida Ayano's few short words made the manga artist feel ashamed. He managed to say thank you with difficulty, and left the office with a stooped figure.

His departure made another manga artist nervous, anxiously waiting for the result.

After a long time, Iida Ayano put down another manuscript and tapped the table with her left hand.

"Your storyboarding technique is not quite right either, it's a little bit better than the last one.

From the perspective of character creation of the protagonist, why did he change his character three times in just one episode?

Presumably you're trying to produce a different kind of protagonist, but that's what causes you to fail because you don't have that much control.

The hierarchical structure of the story is confusing, and why the heroine died on the third page, resurrected on the seventeenth page, and died again on the twenty-fifth page. This is not a supernatural horror comic! "

"Thanks."

The cartoonist who said this sentence seemed to be exhausted, and finally realized the feeling of leaving that person just now, and also left the office in failure.

The departure of the two did not affect Wang Hao at all, but the beautiful editor-in-chief seemed tough and relentless, but she kindly reminded the two new cartoonists of their shortcomings.

But these problems will not happen to Dragon Ball at all. This phenomenal manga has attracted countless people's expectations from the beginning, and it is precisely because of this that there will be ups and downs later.

[A long, long time ago, in a deep mountain thousands of kilometers away from the city, this unconstrained story began...]

The opening chapter of Dragon Ball attracted the attention of Ayano Iida. What I saw was a teenager with a long tail rolling a wooden wheel, carrying a big saw blade, and greeting the surrounding animals.

The painting style looks very unique, but it doesn't make people feel uncomfortable.

Turning to the second page with curiosity, the boy with the long tail threw the wooden wheel larger than his body into the sky, and kicked it to pieces suddenly, which was even more admirable.

The boy went hunting and caught a big monster fish with his tail in the creek under the cliff. On the way home, he was hit by a car suddenly. The hero and heroine met each other, and a bad fight happened...

The more I look down, the more amazed Iida Ayano is. The idea of ​​this manga is like a powerful and unconstrained style, combining a strong technological style and retro meaning, it seems to have entered a brand new world.

[It is said that the seven dragon balls can be collected and the spell can be recited...]

[Shenlong will appear and can help people realize any wish, but only one wish can be fulfilled at a time! 〕

The sudden increase of mythology did not break the original style, but added a lot of charm to this comic.

After savoring Dragon Ball slowly and carefully, Ayano Iida couldn’t believe that this was the work of a new manga artist, no matter in terms of storyboarding techniques or other aspects, she couldn’t find anything to change .

What are the responsibilities of a manga editor? It is to find out the deficiencies in the works of cartoonists and point them out for revision.

The content of the story is very interesting. The boy named Sun Wukong gives people a lively and mischievous feeling. The cartoonist's conception is even more unconstrained, perfectly controlling the combination of several elements.

From her point of view, this is definitely a comic with unlimited potential. As long as the subsequent plot does not affect it, it will definitely become a hit.

The most important thing is that this manga is too much in line with Shueisha's requirements, coupled with the recent difficulties...

Iida Ayano solemnly packed up the manuscript, and took a deep look at Wang Hao. If he hadn't seen it with his own eyes, who would have thought that this sixteen or seventeen-year-old sunny boy had such a powerful talent.

Unknowingly, Wang Hao's status in her heart suddenly increased, and this time he found a treasure!

ps: Thank you Mina-san! Because of Mina-sang's support for this book, this book has the opportunity to sign a contract. The author has nothing to repay, so he can only update as much as possible (≧▽≦)