God Descends the Second Element
Chapter 39 The Gentle Xia Shizi
Meet Xia Shizi? From Wang Hao's usual chat with He Xia Shizi, he can already judge that the other party must be a character like Yamato Nadeko in reality.
Not only is she gentle with others, but she must also be a goddess who exudes a literary girlish atmosphere.
He suddenly wanted to meet such a girl, and he didn't know how to respond for a while.
This should be true, right? !
Xia Shizi is different from Shiina Zhenbai. The former is originally a genius writer, and his words are all after rational thinking. Although the latter is a world-class genius, his brain thinking is also different from ordinary people. It should be said that he is innocent and straightforward, or has no intention Woolen cloth?
But the sudden appointment or something caught people off guard. It is true that the two have known each other online for a while...
Just because the other party's short sentence is enough to make him fantasize.
Poor Wang Hao has normal attributes in other aspects, but in terms of emotion, he can compete with Zhenbai, and even surpass it a bit.
He dares to assure you that he was single for 18 years in his previous life, and he was single for 16 years when he was reborn in this world. Together, it counts as a full 34 years, and he has been single for 34 years! !
It can be regarded as sad for those who hear it, and tears for those who see it.
[Xia Shizi: What's wrong? Don't Haojun want to meet with me? (sad)】
What a joke! How is it possible not to make an appointment? !
No matter how insensitive Wang Hao is, he realizes that the opportunity to get out of the single is right in front of him, and there is only one thing to do.
About, make a date! !
[God Lord: There is no such thing, it is just that I suddenly want to meet Xia Shizi, and I am a little overwhelmed with joy. I don’t know how to face Xia Shizi, because people like me...]
In the end, the inferiority complex hidden deep in Wang Hao's heart slowly emerged. In his previous life, he belonged to a fake house, and he always looked cool by himself, but in fact he was very lonely. After he couldn't make friends, he gradually began to feel inferior .
Even though I got to know all kinds of people here, I still couldn't get rid of the hidden low self-esteem.
【Xia Shizi: So what? I don't dislike this kind of place in Haojun, because I have also experienced it. 】
Seeing this passage, Wang Hao suddenly felt a touch of emotion, and at the same time felt a sense of guilt.
[God Lord: I'm sorry, it reminded you of bad memories. 】
Unexpectedly, Xia Shizi, who has always been considerate to others, would have such a lonely past. He began to regret why he had said so much just now.
[Xia Shizi: I am very happy to learn more about Haojun. And compared to this, I still think of a secret signal to meet up now. 】
[God Lord: Do you still need a password when meeting? 】
Wang Hao knew that Xia Shizi wanted to change the subject on purpose, and he didn't want to continue talking about those heavy past events. He was already humiliated enough just now, and he must have left a bad impression on the other party...
[Xia Shizi: Of course, don't you think she has the demeanor of an agent? I hope Haojun can come up with a cool password. 】
Eh! let me think !
Many clips flashed through his mind, and he remembered the secret codes used by the agents in the movie, which were indeed mysterious and handsome.
Do ordinary offline gatherings have to be like this? Wang Hao has never participated in an offline party, so he is naturally not sure.
The secret code should be used to prevent the embarrassment of identifying the wrong person, but I always feel that something is wrong, it feels weird...
He could recall a lot of passwords, and one of the most memorable classic passwords was even more unforgettable, and he subconsciously typed it with both hands and sent it.
[God Lord: When we meet, let's use the secret code of 'Heavenly King Gaidihu, Pagoda Town River Demon'. You say the first sentence, and I answer the second sentence, how about it? 】
When he came back to his senses, he realized that this sentence was full of middle school breath, and covered his face with his left hand with a headache, wouldn't he be regarded as a middle school boy?
It's a pity that there is no withdrawal function, so I can only watch the messages sent in the past.
[Xia Shizi: Mr. Hao is really talented. I have read the novel called '5 Centimeters Per Second'. Although there is only a short chapter, the writing style makes me immersed in it involuntarily, and I look forward to it even more. Behind the scenes. 】
How did you forget about business?
Wang Hao was slightly taken aback. The reason why he logged into Penguin was to tell Xia Shizi his evaluation of the 'Love Metronome'.
After secretly calming down for a while, he objectively sent his evaluation of the 'Love Metronome'.
[God Lord: No, Teacher Xia Shizi is amazing. I also went to read "Love Metronome" today, which touched me a lot, but I feel that I lack important things. 】
[Xia Shizi: Really? I hope Haojun can tell me the most honest opinion. 】
[God Lord: To put it simply, you lacked routines in the novel. At the end of the first volume, the development of the plot became obviously unstable, because the relationship between the hero and heroine developed too smoothly, so it was difficult to impress the readers in the future. After all, what you wrote It's a romance novel. 】
These views are entirely his own. In his previous life, Wang Hao also worked as a writer for many years. Although he is still on the street, he still has some insight.
[Xia Shizi: Then I should add some... routines to the novel? But I don't know what to do...]
If other writers told him that he didn't know how to play tricks, Wang Hao would definitely spit on him, and he chose to believe Xia Shizi's words.
There are two reasons. One is because the other party has just come into contact with writing, and the style of writing is still being finalized, so he did not choose another path to follow suit. The second reason is, do you need any reason to believe in a friend?
Can't play tricks? It's okay, let me teach you step by step, this kind of thing is commonplace for Wang Hao.
[God Lord: According to the type of novel you write, I think we should add a time-honored routine. Although it looks very old, it does not hinder readers' love for it, that is, the hero saves the beauty.
Love without twists and turns is too plain. The hero should go through various tests and finally defeat the boss to be with the heroine. This will increase readers' interest in reading. 】
[Xia Shizi: That's how it is. It is true that this will stabilize the development of the plot and create more exciting stories, thank you! 】
The addition of routines was something she hadn't thought of before, perhaps because most of the works are filled with the same routines, and Xia Shizi instinctively rejected them.
Because of this, "Love Metronome" has attracted many readers with the first volume. It is considered a clear stream in the light novel world, but in the final analysis it is a love light novel.
The hero saving the beauty seems to be a very old routine, but most of the successful love light novels are basically using it.
The key lies in how the author perfectly integrates into the routine. Although Xia Shizi is writing a novel for the first time, she has been reminded by Wang Hao and has the confidence to create a better story for everyone.
ps: Thank you for the 200 tip from book friend 'Done Lian You Banyue', who gave the first tip of this book, which made the author feel recognized. Because of going to school, it may be updated very late today. But the author will definitely complete the two updates and report back.
I also want to thank other book friends for their support to the author. It is really great to meet you.
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