Harry Potter and the Old Ones
Complete remarks
This book has been written for more than three years, and it is finally completed today. It seems like a long and fulfilling journey.
At this moment of completion, I would like to express my most sincere gratitude and respect to every reader (bow here). It is your support and love that have allowed me to persevere to this day. Every message and encouragement from you are the driving force and source of my creation. I will always remember it in my heart and be grateful.
Even though I almost updated monthly from 22 to 24, the readers remained the same, accompanied me silently, encouraged and supported me, and this friendship made me feel deeply moved and grateful (bow again).
This novel is my first novel, so there are many shortcomings. For example, in the early part of the novel, when Tierra deceived Harry's inheritance and stole the Philosopher's Stone, many readers said that Tierra was like a loser -
I would like to state here that Tierra is not a loser. A more accurate adjective should be a Paradox player.
Because in Tierra's view, everything around him is not alive, or to put it more accurately, this world has always felt "fake" to Tierra.
When you know most of a life's past, present and future, you no longer regard this life as a life of equal status with yourself from your subconscious mind.
No matter how much you deceive yourself, you will have a feeling of "respecting the wise and humble".
This is normal. He was exposed to knowledge beyond reality (library) too early, and already knew the exact direction of this time (the book Harry Potter). For Tierra, he would only consider what kind of benefits everything around him could bring him, and what kind of benefit delivery chain it could be combined into.
This is what Tierra mentioned when he met Grindelwald as "extremely clear self-positioning".
This is also what Tierra has always done to Harry, Hermione, Dumbledore and others. When he was weak, he used the most extreme deception to deduct even the smallest benefit from them.
When he was strong, he transformed the world according to his own blueprint and completely ignored the ideas of others.
Because for Tierra, they are just some "constants".
Of course, Tierra will be briefly confused while getting along with Harry, Hermione and Ron. After all, people are not plants and trees, so Tierra will also be temporarily addicted, but will soon wake up.
As for why Tierra is so persistent in returning to the original world,
there are many reasons.
The most superficial and initial reason is as described in the book, Tierra misses his parents and the warmth of home. His parents in this world have passed away, which is indeed the motivation for wanting to return home at the beginning.
And because of his early exposure to taboo knowledge and accurate knowledge of the future direction, he cannot have a sense of belonging to this world -
or in other words, this world makes him feel very fake.
In fact, this was reflected when Tierra received the admission letter from Hogwarts. Before Tierra received the admission letter, he did not miss home so urgently. At that time, his biggest wish was actually to learn some magic, and then see if he could get a cult leader with his eloquence, and then live a life of luxury and drink, and then use magic to extend his life.
Although I didn't write about "Tiera wants to be the leader of a cult" in the book, my draft actually included Tiera's psychological activities in this section. However, due to the three golden rules and the possibility of being censored, I skipped Tiera's living and learning magic in the Muggle world. After Tiera left the orphanage, I jumped directly to five years later when Tiera received the acceptance letter.
In fact, if it was written, it might better reflect the changes in Tiera's mentality and the transformation of his mental journey. In this way, perhaps when he steals the Philosopher's Stone and gets the inheritance from Harry Potter later, the logic will be smoother.
In my draft, Tierra's initial mental journey should be like this:
1. Crossing to another world, initial panic
2. Getting the magic library, a little more stable, but finding out it was a Cthulhu worldview, even more panic (Tierra didn't feel fake at this time, because at this time Tierra just felt that she might have crossed into a Cthulhu world parallel to the real world. As for why she had read works related to Cthulhu mythology in her previous life... This is even very common in the Cthulhu world, spiritual sympathy, the author being affected, etc., can be perfectly explained.)
3. Running away from the orphanage, performing on the street (At this time Tierra had not come into contact with any information about Hogwarts. He didn't know he was in the Harry Potter world, and still thought he was in the Cthulhu world, so he didn't learn the offensive magic in depth, and didn't even learn a few of the vicious spells. He was more focused on life-saving skills and techniques, such as amulets and potions. This also explains why Tierra was so weak when he first entered school, and he barely mastered many spells, but was very skilled in potion techniques and alchemy, because Tierra spent all his time studying in this area in the past five years. )
4. Learning magic, gradually improving magic, and starting to think about how to settle down in this world, while missing his parents, thinking about how to make a fortune.
5. I learned a little bit of magic that can be used with me. I was very happy. The protagonist began to integrate into the world. At this time, I wrote a little bit about Tiera’s preparations for forming a cult, compiling scriptures, etc. (At this time, Tiera still thought that she was just a magician. Traveled to a parallel world of the original world)
Then 6. Receive the Hogwarts admission notice.
The moment she received the Hogwarts admission notice, the world gave Tiera a "fake" feeling, and this fake feeling will deepen as Tiera's influence on the plot deepens. gradually increase.
In the original draft, there will be a quasi-change after Tiera receives the admission notice. This change is reflected in Tiera burning the scriptures she compiled to form a cult. This change heralds Tiera’s future. The pursuit of wealth and power began to turn to the pursuit of the most extreme power (unfortunately, it can only be deleted. In fact, I personally quite like this section. Tiera looked at the scene of the cult scriptures she compiled burning with no expression on her face. )
Due to space reasons, that is, in order to enter the main plot as quickly as possible to attract readers, I deleted 3/4/5 of Tiera's mental journey mentioned above, because if these three points were written out, they would take up at least twenty chapters, which is really too big. It's procrastinating and too slow, which is not conducive to attracting readers as a novice author like me.
This makes Tiera in the early stage feel a bit "hypocritical", because Tiera lacks such a foreshadowing——
Why did Tiera suddenly pursue the ultimate power?
This "pretentious" feeling didn't begin to disappear until the second part.
As for Tiera's fear, to put it bluntly, it's actually Tiera, a little butterfly who has been trying hard to instigate her wings, but everything around her still gives him a "step-by-step" feeling. The calmer she is, the more frightened Tiera is. Jela was horrified.
In fact, in Tiera's subconscious, she had realized who created the world of Harry Potter, but at that time he had no evidence, and his subconscious was unwilling to believe this conjecture out of a self-protection mechanism, so he mentioned it. Jela's subconscious was able to use the "monkey typewriter" theory to deceive himself and temporarily suppress this panic.
This panic completely broke out when Tiera saw Grindelwald's true form for the first time and learned the truth from Grindelwald. Grindelwald's words made Tiera no longer able to deceive herself and others.
This feeling of being put into a created world completely transformed Tiera from being "fake" and "not belonging" to being "fearful" of this world.
The fear of this world and of being set up by others became the motivation for Tiera to return home in the second stage.
It was probably from this point on that Tiera started to feel a little "crazy".
The motivation for this second stage is revealed in the final chapters——
Tiera's intuition is right, this world is a fake world.
So based on this, many of Tiera's actions before and after can be explained.
If there is a chance to rewrite this book (most likely I won’t), I would also like to add the story of Tiera’s change of mentality from the draft I abandoned.
There is nothing to say about the plots of the second, third and fourth grade. This is the most satisfying part in my opinion, and it is also the climax of the whole novel.
Starting in the fifth grade, this novel actually obviously started to go downhill.
Not to mention readers, the whole fifth grade seemed to me to be like driving high and moving low.
The scene at the beginning of fifth grade, when Tiera talks to Grindelwald, and when Tiera dresses up as Dumbledore and denounces the Ministry of Magic, is the most enjoyable part I have ever written.
I have read a lot of Harry Potter fan fiction, and I have also thought that when I write fan fiction, I must create a system that can encompass all fan fiction worldviews——
Then the setting was born in which the time-travelers turned into cubs of alien gods (by the way, I hope a few fans of fan fiction will come and scold me and give me some traffic).
Since I started writing in the fifth grade, I have entered the second stage of research. At that time, all kinds of experiments (and the Shabi boss... mainly the Shabi boss) were very busy, so I didn't have much time to conceive the plot. It is an irrefutable fact that the quality of updates for a long time has been poor. I would like to thank readers again for their continued support in this situation.
In fact, I could still write it down with difficulty in the fifth grade, but the quality of the updates dropped off a cliff from the sixth grade.
(Bow and apologize to the readers)
There are two reasons. Firstly, it is an experimental reason, which I will not go into details here (a certain Shabi boss). Secondly, because of some well-known reasons, I changed the original outline.
In fact, in the original outline, the battle between Tiera and Voldemort at the end of fifth grade was not supposed to be done by Tiera herself, but by Tiera possessing Harry, using Harry's body and The wand crushed Voldemort and allowed him to escape.
This will further arouse Voldemort's fear of the prophecy that he is about to be killed by Harry, and make it easier for Voldemort to fall into the trap and follow the path of becoming a god chosen by Tiera. This kind of logic is smooth. .
According to my earliest draft and outline, Voldemort's divinity should be "death". He also used the imperfect pillars of the Three Deathly Hallows to obtain imperfect divinity--
which was eventually refined into the Crown of Thorns by Tierra.
However, there is a problem with this setting. In order to obtain the divinity of death, Voldemort will release plagues, instigate wars, and create famine in the Muggle world. This plot was actually fine when I wrote it at the time (the detailed outline and some drafts were scheduled for 2018), but I was a little afraid to write it after 2020, especially now that the number of years has increased, the problem of writing like this is getting bigger and bigger. To be honest, I am a little suspicious whether there is really something in the world that is arranging its own god-making ceremony.
In addition, after the serialization began, a reader pestered me and hoped that I would add the character he designed, so I took advantage of the situation and added a death god who was ready to become a god, and arranged the "annihilation" divinity for Voldemort.
As for Tierra's annihilation divinity in the original script, it came from the sacrifice to the gods of dreams.
According to my original outline, the so-called dream gods in the fantasy dreamland are actually the gods of Olympus (Luo Lao has basically made it clear that he has neta the gods of Greek mythology). They were moved from the earth by Nyarlathotep and kept as pets (actually the backup food of the protagonist).
In the fifth and sixth grades, Tierra will fight on two fronts. On the one hand, she will use the mirror as a medium to keep in touch with Harry, Hermione, Dumbledore and others and participate deeply in the plot, while on the other hand, she will personally step into the fantasy dreamland to find the dream gods.
In the fantasy dreamland, Tierra used a little trick (beauty) and took advantage of the characteristics of the dream gods (big criticism of Zeus and Apollo) to get the real names of the dream gods.
The dream gods, which are born divine creatures, have similar characteristics to demons. Knowing their real names is equivalent to having their lifeblood grasped.
This plot has been written for dozens of chapters. During the refinement process, I felt that it was a little gay. If I really put it up, I might be scolded. Therefore, after much thought, I still didn’t put it in.
Due to the above reasons, I overturned and rewrote the outlines of the fifth and sixth grades, but I didn't have time to redesign the outlines. In addition, the experiment was really busy, so the fifth and sixth grades were written like this (bow and apologize).
Finally, let's talk about the ending.
This ending was actually thought of a long time ago.
Tierra replaced Nyarlathotep as one of the three pillars, and everything before was paved for this final ending.
As for whether this final ending is a happy ending or a bad ending, it depends on one's own opinion.
In fact, in my opinion, it is a happy ending. In fact, as I said before, Tierra's desire to return home is only the first motivation. His real motivation is to escape from this false world.
The second is the question about Azathoth's dream universe.
All the dream universes of Azathoth are real, or to be more precise, all the dream universes are actually the inner universe of Azathoth. The so-called dream is just a channel connecting two real universes.
To put it bluntly, only through dreams can you enter Azathoth's dream, and then you can reach Azathoth's inner universe.
The universe inside Azathoth is real, and the universe on Earth is also real. The two are only connected through dreams. Only spirits can enter and exit the universe inside Azathoth.
This is why only one spirit left when Nyarlathotep left, and used the last bit of power to help Tiera repair his damaged body.
If I follow my previous design, the chapter of Zhuang Zhou Xiaomeng is not the finale. There will be a chapter of the main text (finale) and a chapter of the extra. In the finale, it will be recorded in a running account that Tiera learns from Nyarlathotep and continues to introduce other travelers. As the number of travelers increases, the internal universe of the Chaos Proto-nucleus gradually changes from chaos and disorder to stability and order, and the Chaos Proto-nucleus itself will awaken with Tiera's consciousness after an extremely long time.
In the extra chapter, it will be revealed that the true identity of the Chaos Proto-nucleus is actually the Chaos Green Lotus Seed. After it was born, it was not tolerated by the Heavenly Dao. It was born with the birth of the heaven and earth, and died with the destruction of the heaven and earth. Only when the heaven and earth experienced a great catastrophe and great extinction, the Chaos Green Lotus Seed would be born, and it would be destroyed when it was born.
Therefore, the Chaos Green Lotus Seed has never been able to give birth to a mind (reflected in the blindness and stupidity of Azathoth). The moment he gave birth to a mind was the moment when the heaven and earth were destroyed.
The arrival of Tiyera and the subsequent transformation of the universe in the Chaos Green Lotus Seed from chaos to order caused the Chaos Green Lotus Seed to lose part of the Chaos Source Qi in its body (shaping the bodies of the traversers in this multiverse in the body, especially shaping an entire fake universe like Tiyera would consume the Chaos Source Qi), so it was born early. Although it was born with congenital deficiencies, it was an innate holy spirit comparable to the immortals as soon as it was born, so that Tiyera could make a cameo appearance in an original immortal cultivation novel that I plan to write later.
But later I thought that writing like this was a bit inferior and lost the original intention of writing this book, so I left a proper blank at the end.
This novel is actually finished here, but I will still write one or two long extra chapters later.
One of the extra chapters that has been confirmed is the cursed child.
Although I really don't want to admit that this official fanfiction is a sequel to Harry Potter, since JK Rowling has admitted it, I think it's okay to write about it.
The general plot of this extra can also be slightly spoiled here. The story begins in the if line of the cursed child. Delphi Riddle in the original book failed to change history, but in the if line, Delphi Riddle successfully prevented her father (Voldemort) from killing Harry Potter after traveling back to Godric's Hollow in 1980, and used the inferior time converter in her hand to travel back to the time point of 2020.
However, due to major changes in the timeline, and the broken version of the time converter in Delphi Riddle's hand, Delphi Riddle did not travel back to her own successful timeline, but traveled to the world line where Tierra existed, which should be the world line of World One to be precise.
At this time, the world has basically completed the great integration of wizards and Muggles, and has begun the great integration of magic and technology.
Delphi Riddle was also confused about the sudden appearance of Tiera and the trend of Muggle/wizard integration in this world. Similarly, the Tieras were also confused about the sudden appearance of Delphi Riddle.
Although Tiera had indeed seen the stage play of the Cursed Child, due to her own interference, Delphi Riddle should not have been born in her world at all (Bellatrix was captured and locked up by the protagonist in the battle of the Ministry of Magic at the end of the fifth grade).
So Tiera first arranged for someone to apply for an identity certificate for Delphi Riddle and let her live in this world first.
Delphi Riddle was impressed by the strength of the Tieras and did not dare to say anything, so he decided to pretend to be good and lurk in this world first.
After finding out the details of Tiera (through the Harry Potter series of books), Delphi Riddle thought he was well prepared, and traveled back to the past with the latest invented magic technology weapons, ready to kill Tiera when she was still weak in the past, and then-
Delphi Riddle saw Tiera's true form.
She faced the Crawling Chaos, one of the great three pillars.
The great and kind Tierra sent Delphi back to her original world line.
From then on, that world had a crazy witch who kept mumbling in her mouth...
In addition to the cursed child, there will be a Hermione extra. In the worst world line, more than 900 Tierras killed each other and attacked each other, making the whole world a mess. How did Hermione overcome all difficulties and complete the god-making ceremony of the "war" divinity, and use the war between Tierras to draw strength, and cut Tierras one by one.
Next, my main energy will be on the fan fiction of One Piece, "One Piece Blood Emperor", absorbing the experience and lessons of this novel. I started to update the One Piece fan fiction after accumulating 350,000 words, in case it was suddenly interrupted due to experiments, or the idea could not be connected.
So the extra of this book can only be written when I have time, and I promise to write it, but I can't guarantee when it will be finished (it will definitely be finished within ten years).
The current writing plan is as follows:
2024.6-2027.8: "One Piece: Blood Emperor", has been confirmed, 350,000 words have been saved, the beginning and climax have been written, and it is expected to be completed within three years. The number of words is estimated to be around 1.5 million when it is finished.
This book may be a little slow to warm up, because after all, it is a Xiuxian plug-in, and it is a bit inappropriate to let the protagonist defeat the sky, the earth, and the air right from the start.
2027.9-2029.10: "Naruto: Zhuxian Sword Formation", tentatively named, the plot outline is that the protagonist travels to the Naruto world with the Eight-Nine Mysterious Arts and the Four Great Sword Scriptures of Zhu Jue Xianlu in "The Supreme of One Life". The rough outline has been written, and the details are currently being refined. Strive to finish it within two years.
2030.1-2033.1: "Lord of Mysteries in Marvel World" or "X-Men: Man Promoted to God in Mutant Prison", choose one of the two to write, only the general idea, the plug-in is the magic potion system of Lord of Mysteries, it can be regarded as a double fanfiction of Marvel World and Lord of Mysteries, the timeline takes place before the timeline of "Lord of Mysteries", at that time, many Outer Gods and the Originals were asleep, along with magic potions and knowledge related to magic potions.
After 2035, depending on the situation, start writing original cultivation.
During this period, I may also write a fanfiction of Douluo, Jiang Yuyan traveled to Douluo Continent and fell in love with Qian Renxue who was dressed as a man, but finally couldn't get the love and turned into a black yandere.
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