Heroes of the Resistance Reborn
Urgent: Comments Asked
Several readers such as Wandering to the Ends of the World have put forward sincere opinions and suggestions to Ding Yi. Ding Yi would like to express his sincere thanks in advance. Now, regarding these issues, Ding Yi posted this post to ask for support and suggestions:
1. Regarding the heroine in the middle of the book. In my original design, there were at least six girls who fell in love with the protagonist. But in the end, only one of these girls died a good death due to various reasons. For example, during the Long March,
Chairman Chiang sent Dai Li to assassinate the protagonist, but he was accidentally discovered by one of the people around him, and he blocked the bullet. The protagonist shot the spy to death, but the heroine died. The protagonist discovered in pain that he also loved this girl, but it was too late.
, before the girl died, the protagonist gave his first kiss, and later recognized the girl as his wife. Another example is, on the anti-Japanese battlefield, a heroine went to the front line angrily because she could not get a clear statement from the hero.
Unintentionally, the enemy was successfully introduced into the encirclement, allowing the protagonist to successfully annihilate the enemy's steel army. However, the heroine died, and her sister only found out her sister's voice when she was cleaning the relics. As a result, the sister was well protected by the protagonist, but her voice was actually true.
Just like her sister, she was as strong as her sister, fought bravely, and eventually grew into a general. Although the protagonist was forced to marry another person because of her organizational work, this female general never married. For another example, another heroine ended up
Just like Li Yunlong's first wife Xiu Qin in "Bright Sword", she and the protagonist were in the same room talking about things. The protagonist went out temporarily due to a sudden telegram, so he left the girl alone in the room. Unexpectedly, the enemy's special forces suddenly invaded, and the girl
The protagonist called the police in time, but died at that time. The protagonist's special forces had an encounter with the Japanese special forces and wiped out the enemy's special forces. However, he lost a beloved girl. The protagonist took the girl's sister deep behind enemy lines and used decapitation tactics.
Killed the enemy bandit leader, and later when the whole body retreated, the girl was injured, but later she also grew into a general. When Ding Yi discussed the fate of these girls with several readers, he encountered almost unanimous opposition, and Ding Yi was not allowed to transfer these girls.
The girl was written to death. So Ding Yi had no choice but to continue writing. According to the original plan, there was only one girl left next to the protagonist. Now, Ding Yi is asking for your support. Let’s see how Ding Yi writes.
Second, regarding the issue of the Long March. Thank you for your suggestions. In fact, Ding Yi thinks that the Long March is really touching. So Ding Yi plans to write about it. If he doesn’t write about it, a steel army will not be able to develop. Because
The Long March is a steel furnace that can be exercised. The Long March may be difficult for others, but for the protagonist, it is not necessarily so. It is also an army, and the protagonist's troops are well prepared, whether they are crossing snowy mountains or grasslands.
, the fewest people died. The troops became more and more elite. Moreover, throughout the Long March, the protagonist's troops first acted as rearguards, and later as forwards, passing through Shaanxi and Gansu, and their strength was unprecedentedly developed. Finally, they were sent to
On the anti-Japanese battlefield. Therefore, it will be easier for his troops to fight. However, this is only Ding Yi's idea. I also ask for your opinions.
Third, regarding the plot of the Anti-Japanese battlefield. In fact, the Anti-Japanese War was very cruel and many people died. I don’t know, Ding Yi, can it be written more tragically? Please correct me.
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